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Anu, this TS is the cutest thing I have read lately. 😆 Nav is such an adorable little child. And his antics left me smiling throughout the update as I read it. Hia cute little words and the way he greeted Priyanka. Totally awww!
Loved the way you've used this little bundle of naughtiness to bring PriVeer to a point where they can get started afresh. The way Prinku melts at the sight of Nav and his antics and then the way Ranveer changes his approach with Priyanka, brilliant! He notices the smallest of reactions in her and then the way he almost wants to draw that confession out of her tells you how broken he is, but still he gives her a chance - sort of.
Priyanka's guilt was very nicely described. The way she realises how due to a few moments of fun, Nav's life is completely changed and how his mother wouldn't be able to see him ever and nor would he get to see her left me with goosebumps.
Waiting to read more from you!
Loved the way you've used this little bundle of naughtiness to bring PriVeer to a point where they can get started afresh. The way Prinku melts at the sight of Nav and his antics and then the way Ranveer changes his approach with Priyanka, brilliant! He notices the smallest of reactions in her and then the way he almost wants to draw that confession out of her tells you how broken he is, but still he gives her a chance - sort of.
Priyanka's guilt was very nicely described. The way she realises how due to a few moments of fun, Nav's life is completely changed and how his mother wouldn't be able to see him ever and nor would he get to see her left me with goosebumps.
Waiting to read more from you!
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