Special Guest [PriVeer TS/Complete][UPDATED 01/12/2016] - Page 4

Originally posted by: Allyson

Loved this!

Originally posted by: Innika

Hi!

So Twerps actually sent me a PM recommending this piece, and I'm absolutely so glad that she did.

I've not very keen on Priyanka, especially because we haven't gotten to see a lot of her as of yet, but I absolutely adore the ACP so, so much.

I loved Twerping's Breakfast, especially Ranveer's nephew, so I was extremely excited for this fic.

For god's sake, I loved this so much.

You exceeded my expectations far and beyond, while being so effortless in the way you write. There's not a lot that happens event-wise in the story, and yet it touched me and made me a complete emotional mess.

I think that that's why I love this story so much, because you didn't have to write about how attractive Priyanka/Ranveer were, didn't have to put in a catch-and-fall sequence, no kisses that make absolutely no sense in the given context, no manhandling, nothing that could irrationally fast pace this story, while simultaneously butchering it. No, this was just so innocent, so sweet, and yet so smooth and realistic.

There's nothing like a child to bridge the gap between two conflicting adults, and for me, Navdeep (by the way, did I mention how much I love him, aargh?!) does this so beautifully. The description in the first part, where Ranveer sees the interaction between Prinku and the child is so heart-warming, especially because I could actually imagine this happening in real life.

I loved Ranveer in this as well, and I love that PriVeer writers on the forum actually touch upon the emotion side of the ACP as well; the one that we were promised to see more of after his admission to Priyanka that the girl that died was his sister. Priyanka, as well, is portrayed beautifully, because while we see a lot of guilt on Omkara's part right now, we see Prinku too busy with dealing with Om's drug problem, and her own anxiety to really find a distinguished amount of guilt in her persona. I like that while she played with Nav, she wasn't dealing with her anxiety for once, because it just shows how multi-faceted human beings are, personality wise. Some of the closest people to me in my life has social anxiety, and I myself, have clinically diagnosed high anxiety, but I know for a fact that we aren't constantly stuttering or constantly terrified of everything, or at least as outward as Priyanka is about it on the show. I wish that the show would provide more insight on her personality on the show - rather than constantly playing off her social anxiety as just her stutter.

Anyhow, did I mention how much I adore all three characters in this fic?

In fact, you inspired me to continue writing fanfiction again because while I had stopped writing for a bit because of all the crap happening on the show, I have decided to complete my PriVeer fanfic and post it on the forum soon!

All in all, I absolutely loved it, and I need you to write more so I can be inspired to write more PriVeer myself! 😊

Many hugs + love,

Innika

ps. WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE A THIRD PART?!

Originally posted by: SRKian

u've no idea hw happy dis made me wid all dos ths going on da show🤢

keep writing more,i need more of ACP dose 4 my sanity

tnx 4 da pm Anu🤗

Originally posted by: Virman2013

I enjoyed reading this so much I really hope you continue this story pretty please

I love nav soo much, he reminds me of my younger cousins

Originally posted by: BookWormV

I LOVED IT!!! PriVeer ❤️ I seem to be falling for this ship more and more each day! This was so sweet and absolutely adorable! My heart yaar! I don't know what else to say.

Please, please write more of this!

-V 😊

Originally posted by: melody.

this was so beautiful ❤️
I'm loving PriVeer and loved your story
👏 hats off

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey emerald 69 !
This story is really cute with Nav's cute behavior towards Priyanka 😃 This Priyanka or something close to this one is what I was talking about at the AT. Girl! U nailed it. From Priyanka's interaction with Nav to that of her reaction after listening about Sahana was brilliant.
Please continue dear 😊