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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: metromasti

later Annie met her & geet told her to go back with family . geet Annie bonding is beautiful . geet got discharged & maan took her to home though she was not happy to go with maan . later maan told her everything & geet too told him everything ... about maya's dirty game . both realized maya was behind their misunderstanding . geet confessed her love & maaneet spent a quality time . witch maya called maan repeatedly but maan didn't receive her phone .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Part 22, awesome update. Maan stayed at hospital with Geet. When Geet got up, she got annoyed seeing Maan there. But he refused to leave her alone. He went to office but came back soon. Geet got discharge and Maan forcefully brought her to her house. He explained the situation in which those pics were clicked. When Geet showed him kissing pic of Maya and him, he was shocked and told Geet that the pic was forged. Both kissed. Geet asked him to stay with him.


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Maan is really a fool to believe on Maya's story...

he knew very well how she behaved with Geet ...she even hit Geet... but still he came in her false story that she has a boyfriend and she want to make him jealous by having Maan and hers intimate photos... and Maan being so innocent baby believed on her and permitted her to take those intimate photos...if he loved Geet so much then how can he be comfortable with another girl in such poses...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy New Year! all the best! wishing the superb year ahead! hope u r well! TC
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Posted: 8 years ago


FIRST OF ALL REALLY SORRY FOR GIVING UPDATE LATE BUT MY HEALTH WAS WORSE SO I WAS LATE
BUT I HAVE COMPEMSTATE AS THIS UPDATE BY FAR IS MY LONGEST UPDATE

THANK U EVERYONE FOR UR SUPPORT ON THIS FF AND BY WISHING ME ON MY BIRTHDAY

WANTED TO THANK A SPECIAL PERSON WHO IS MY EVERYTHING FOR ME WITHOUT WHOM I CANT EVEN BREATHE
MY JAAN RICHA KAPOOR WITHOUT WHOM THIS JOURNEY WOULD HAVE NOT BEEN POSSIBLE
SHE IS D ONE WHO MOTIVATED ME AND DUE TO HER ONLY I M ABLE TO GET SO MANY READERS
THANK U BABY FOR MAKING MY BIRTHDAY SO SPECIAL
SO THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED TO U FOR MAKING ME PART OF UR LIFE AND MAKING ME SPECIAL
THIS IS A LITTLE GESTURE FROM MY SIDE TO MY JAAN

OK NOW NO MORE TALKS
ENJOY D UPDATE

Part 23

It was midnight and geet felt that Maan is not beside her so she got up with a jerk and was about to shout for Maan but she saw him standing near d window

She went to him and hugged him from back but she felt some wetness on her hands
She turned Maan and saw that he is crying
She cupped his face and asked

Geet: Maan y r u crying
Maan: nothing geet, I was standing near d window so some dust must have gone into my eyes and y r u awake Common let's sleep

He was about to move but geet held his hand and take him to d bed and make him sit

Geet: Maan window is closed and there is no wind blowing, so tell me y r u crying
Maan: geet I m sorry, I did a big mistake by trusting that girl but geet u know when I saw u unconscious, I was dead Jaan and with that sleeping pills in ur hand I was more scared that becoz of me u wanted to end ur life
Geet: sleeping pills
Maan: yes I saw d bottle in ur hand and it was empty
Geet: Maan I m not that weak that I will End my life like this, wat I have seen in life no one has and at that point I didn't end my life so now also I would have not taken any step
Maan: but that bottle, though doc told me that u haven't consumed but I was scared
Geet: Maan that bottle was empty and I was going to throw that in d garbage but my head start spinning and I feel down
Maan: Geet promise me u will never do such kind of thing
Geet: promise Maan

Now both are lying on d bed with Geet head on Maan chest and Maan is creasing her hairs

Geet: Maan do u need to ask u something else also
Maan: geet how could u forgive me so easily, if I would have been at ur place I would have not forgive u that easily
Geet: Maan we lov each other and when person lov each other, they always come to know when Person is telling a lie and not
Maan: means
Geet: it means that I can see d trust in ur eyes and one more thing
Yesterday night when u came to d hospital at that time I was awake and listen to everything wat u said
Maan: so that means u forgive me at that time only and u were just playing along
Geet: no Maan I heard ur talks but it was not easy for me to believe so in d morning after u left I called Annie and she told me wat happened in d hospital and how Dadi slapped u
Maan: I m sorry geet, it's all my fault and becoz of me my parents also say that
Geet: no Maan it's not ur fault, it was in d destiny and we were not in a strong relation but becoz of this incident we have come close
Maan: yes Jaan we have come close

With that he took her lips and geet also responded
Both were tasting each other tounges and maan started nibling her lips and even bite them
Then he sucked her lips, soon both parted and maan make her lie on d bed and giving her kisses on her neck
He put down the sleeve of her top and started giving her wet kisses on d shoulder
Geet hold him from his neck like giving him d permission to do watever he want
Then Maan comes down to her clevage and starts licking that
Then he cupped her bosoms in his hands and started massaging it above d cloth
Geet was moaning his name which made him more charge
Maan was about to remove her top that his phone rang and both got alert

Maan saw d caller Id and didn't respond
He took Geet on his chest and gave her a kiss on forehead

Maan: Geet hope u didn't mind wat we just did
Geet: no Maan, it's ur right and from now onwards I m all urs u can do watever I want
Maan: r u sure Geet becoz u don't know wat my fantasies are
Geet: maaannn
Maan: ok Shona I will not tease u, let's sleep

He gave a peck on her lips and both slept hugging each other

Next morning Maan woke up first and saw 100 miss calls from Maya but he didn't feel to call her back and wat she did with geet
He will never forgive her
Maan went to d washroom for freshnup, then he went to d kitchen to make bfast for her as she haven't recovered fully and doc had told her to eat healthy

He made omelete, toast and tea for both of them and took them in d room
He put d tray on d side and started to wake geet by kissing on her forehead

Maan: Shona uto dekho subah ho gayi
Geet: Maan sone do na
Maan: Ok first have bfast then u sleep as u have to take d medicine also

She curled more into Maan and said baby let me sleep pls

Maan made her sit on his lap and give a peck on her lips due to that she open her eyes

Maan: common Jaan brush ur teeth then we will have bfast

She went to d washroom and then came after doing her morning chores

Geet sat on d bed and both fed each other lovingly

Geet: Maan Apko office Ni Jana
Maan: nhi Shona I m working from home this week
Geet: Maan I want to talk to u about Maya
Maan: wat u want to say, did she said something again to u
Geet: Maan don't tell ask her anything
Maan: but y Jaan
Geet: becoz again she will manipulate with her words and I will handle her
Maan: ok as u say my love, common now have ur medi and sleep for sometime
Geet: ap yahi ho na muje chod ke to Ni jao ge na
Maan: nhi Geet tumara Maan yahi hai Aur tume kahi chod ke Ni jaye ga tume

Maan made her sleep and started doing his office work
Maya called him and this time Maan recieved d call but he went to other room as he doesn't want to disturb Geet

Maya: where d hell r u Maan, do u know how worried I was as u were not picking my phone and u r not even at ur home
Maan: Maya I m at my frnd place and I don't think I m answerable to u
Maya: I m sorry, actually I was worried so that's y I talked like that
Maan: it's ok but next time Be careful, I don't like anyone taking to me like that
Maya: r u coming to office today
Maan: no
Maya: I have something to discuss, can I come in d evening
Maan: ok
Maya: did u meet Geet
Maan: it's my personal matter so I want that to be personal

Before maya could say anything Maan cut d phone
When he turned back he saw geet standing

Maan: Geet vo maya Ka call tha
Geet: wat she want now
Maan: she want to come to my place for some work
Geet: u would have said ye she
Maan: yes
Geet: y Maan I don't trust her
Maan: Geet do u trust me
Geet: hmm
Maan: then lets go
Geet: where
Maan: To my home, as when she came u should be with me and She will understand wat u r to me
Geet: Maan but again if She do something
Maan: this time she will not do anything and everything will be professional and nothing personal, u also said that u will handle her
Geet: yes I told u
Maan: don't worry ur Maan is with u

He peck her lips and she went to her room to get ready and then both leave for his home
In d afternoon both reaches Maan house

He found all d things are still on d table where she had left
Geet was about to say something but Maan put his finger on her lips

Maan: geet all these things belong to u so u will take this to u
Geet: I m sorry Maan
Maan: its not ur fault so no sorry

Maan took out d ring from d box and made her wear again and promised her that now he will never leave her

With this he again took her lips and this time Geet took d charge and she was chewing, nibbling, sucking his lips and even made it bleed
He suck d blood and told in his mouth I LOVE U BABY
Maan replied LOV U TOO SHONA

After 15 mins both parted due to lack of air
Geet was tired so Maan told her to rest
Maan and geet both enter d room and made her sit on d bed and patted her to sleep

As geet were tired so she slept soon and maan also slept besides her but took her in his arms
If geet is insecure then he is sacred to loose his life
Yes Geet is his life, for Maan it was love at first sight
He was awe by her beauty and simplicity and specially how her family loves her

He thought that Annie was close to him but after yesterday incident he was sure that annie love his Geet to d core and She was ready to leave her family becoz of geet

He don't know wat happened with geet in d past and now he is not even intrested
He just was to have a future with geet and make her wishes soon

He came out of his thoughts with d ring of his phone
He picked up his phone and it was his mom who wanted to enquire about geet

Maan: hi mom
Arpita: how is geet
Maan: she is fine and sleeping right now
Arpita: take care of her
Maan: mom u will not talk to ur son
Arpita: watever u done after that I think it's nothing left to talk
Maan: mom I agree wat I did was wrong but u all three also did d same
Arpita: yes we did wrong but not wat u did

Maan told his mom everything wat happened in USA and how geet come to know

Arpita: beta pls take care of geet she needs u at this time
Maan: mom is Dadi there
Arpita: no but u don't worry I will tell ur side to everyone and they will forgive u
Maan: thanks mom

After hanging d phone he kissed geet forehead and went to kitchen to prepare evening snack for geet as she must be hungry when she will get up

He prepared poha and snadwiches for her
It was evening and there was a door bell

He knew who would be there, he close his room door and open d door as soon as he opened d door Maya hugged him but he didn't respond

He close d door and told her to sit
He offered her some water

Maya: How r u Maan
Maan: Maya tell me wat u want to discuss as I have some other things also lined up

Without wasting anytime both started doing there work
He wanted to finish d work soon as he doesn't want geet and Maya to face each other

It was 6 in d evening when geet heard some noises from d other room
So she decided to check, she went to d room and her blood boiled seeing that bitch near her Maan

Something struck her mind so She went to Maan and sit beside him and rested her head on hi side shoulder and encircle her hands around his arms

Maya was shocked to see geet there and that too this close
She was about to say something but She heard Maan saying something to her

Maan: baby ut Gaye ap
Geet: hmm
Maan: wat happened r u tired
Geet: no I m hungry
Maan: Jaan ur food is ready, go and have it
Geet: no
Maan: y geet
Geet: u come with me I m tired

Before Maan could say anything Maya opened her mouth
Maya: geet can't u see we are working
Geet: Maan lets go
Maya: maan is not going anywhere, we have to complete our work today and if u r hungry u can go eat ur food, y u need him or u are a Kindergarden kid who needs someone to assist
Maan: shut up Maya, u can't talk to her like this and geet u go and sit on d dining table I will bring ur food

Maya was first shocked to see geet so close to maan and then both addressing them with baby and Jaan which is not registered by her
Maan was angry on her which is not acceptable to her

Maan bought geet food on d table along with two coffee and one cup of tea for geet
He told both of them to come on d table and told Maya to bring d laptop also

Maan: Maya ur coffee and geet common now eat
Geet: Maan pls feed me
Maya: geet u can eat by ur own, u can see we are busy
Maan: Maya last time I m warning u stop interfering and about u don't worry it would be completed on time
Geet: Maan khilao na
Maan: Han Bacha ye lo
Geet: ap Ni khao ge
Maan: nhi Jaan maine Kha liya hai Jab tum so Rahi thi

Maan Fed geet and side by side was doing his work
Soon geet fisnished her food and was about to go but Maan held her hand and told her that he will keep the dishes in d kitchen u Just take rest
Geet: nhi maan Maine khana banane ja Rahi hoon
Maan: geet uski koi zaroorat Ni hai main khana bahr se order kar longa
Geet: no maan and u know I m not allowed to eat anything from outside
Maan: Jaan u will get tired
Geet: no I will not as I love cooking and I don't want ur guests to feel that we are not gud host and I don't want that's people from my home go empty stomach
Maan: ok Bacha as u say but don't strain ur self pls
Geet: yup I will not

She went to kitchen but maan was not able to conc on work as he was worried for geet health
So he told Maya to continue working as he will be back in 10 mins
He left for kitchen and saw that geet Is crying, he ran and hugged her
Maan: Shona pls don't cry, I m sorry on her behalf but pls don't cry
Geet: Maan I m not crying

Both parted and geet show her onions in her hand and show that this was d reason for my tears

Maan: I m sorry Geet
Geet: u don't have to maan
Maan: Geet do u need any help
Geet: no maan i m fine
Maan: Geet i Just came here yesterday then how d grocery is here
Geet: when u told me we both are coming here, I called asha and told her to fill ur kitchen with d nevcesties and She did
Maan: Quiet impressive my love

Maan took her lips and both were lost with each but a pair of eyes was watching and fuming with anger

She thought in her mind that she will seperate them at any cost

PRECAP: NIGHT IS STILL THERE BUT MAAN WITH WHOM GEET OR MAYA...

HAPPY NEW YEAR FRIENDS




NEXT PART
PART 24
Edited by lovemaaneet90 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
glad maan and geet patched up...but then maya is not going to leave it so easily...hope maan doe snot go with maya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm..
Lovely part dear..
This Maya arrghh I just hate her..Why she had to poke her nose in everything...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
all mu sort out but that maya not leaving
still trying to separate them but this time they knows hr motive
maan cleared his mom's mu too

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