Shraman FF- Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna IMP A/N- pg 16

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Hi guys, this is the first time I'm writing an ff after a long time...so kindly adjust with my fluff.

Chapter 1

One fine morning a girl is sleeping in her bed and a smile is there in her lips like she's having a wonderful dream of her life. Her mom comes in her bedroom and says our heroine to getup. But our not in the mood wake up from her dream. " Suman baby get up dear it's 10.00 am now you wanted to wake up by 7.00 am dear, I'm trying to wake you up for a long time now dear , you said you've got some important work but your sleeping, wake up baby" Priya Tiwari said suman. Hearing her mom saying the time suman woke up with a scary look in her face all the smile in her face faded away. " omg, mom I told you to wake me up by 7.00 am" Suman said to her mom and she muttered under her breath " it's late now what will I say to him that I woke up late because I was dreaming about him...aaahhh". " sweetie what are you talking to yourself, stop muttering and get ready" Priya said to suman and left suman's room. Suman took her phone and logged into her messenger. At the same time in Malhotra mansion Nirmala Malhotra was trying to wake his son up. " Shravan wake up its 10.00am now you said you've got to do some important work". Shravan woke up with a start and said " mom I wanted you to wake me up by 7.00 am not by 10.00 am...see its late now what I'm going to tell her". " I was trying to wake you up for 3 hours and you were not waking up and who is she that you have to answer her for waking up late haan???" Nirmala asked. " No mom, I don't have to answer any girl...I was saying him and by him I mentioned pushkar, you misunderstood her and him that's it." Shravan tried to cover up his mistake for saying loudly her. " oh really, now you are trying to cheat your mom by lying..I'm your mom don't try to act smart ok...I won't ask who is she, when the time comes you can tell me who is she..till then I've got so many works to do.. so I'm leaving..get ready" saying this Nirmala left shravan's room. Shravan was like all smiles n thought " mom you always know me in and out..I'll surely introduce her to you" and logged into his messenger.

That's it for today girls...not proof read so kindly bare with the mistakes...I know it's a short one I'll update again if you guys liked the story... plzzz vote and comment it means a lot...and u guys can also give suggestions. Bye for now waiting for ur comments.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter Index
Chapter 1 - pg 1
Chapter 2 - pg 2
Chapter 3 - pg 3

Chapter 4 - pg 4
Chapter 5 - pg 8
Chapter 6 - pg 12
IMP A/N -pg 16
Edited by shirlys - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start!!! Ab update keliye zyadha wait nahi Kiya Jha saktha!!! So update soon!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres
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Wait a second is sumo shravans girlfriend. Or employee or employer. Too many questions update karo jaldi.

Love
Arpita😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was awesome...and many questions hopping in my mind please update soon
-dolly 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nece start
Waiting for ur update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,
Very interesting start. Update soon.

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
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It's magical one
Do continue dear
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Unres
Sounds interesting dear!!...😊
Update soonish!!
Love
Nik
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