Shraman FF- Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna IMP A/N- pg 16 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

100

Views

9k

Users

23

Likes

180

Frequent Posters

shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Safire

Oh no! This was so short an update!!

Next time I want a lengthy update!!!
By the way,it was very nice...

Thanq dr...I'll try to post a long update from now onwards.
shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

It's too awesome I don't know how I miss this awesome update but from now I make sure that I would not miss update of KANK

Thanq so much Harshita.
vimikrao thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Sumo is in Delhi with her mother to attend Varun's wedding..
But she going to Malhotra Mansion where her JB lives.. It will be interesting to read Sumo hates Shravan but she is friend with JB but in reality both Shravan & JB are same... Its will be really funny to see them fighting & irritating each other...

Nice update

Vinu
humairayousaf78 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#44
read all parts in one go and i was like how i missed this beautiful story😲...
curious to read next part
plz update soon!😊

pinky.padda thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#45
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
deltadawn thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#46
oh wow... I read this now on wattpad dear sorry... missed the update yesterday.. but it is so super cute.
excited to know what happens if they meet and don't recognize each other..
shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Sumo is in Delhi with her mother to attend Varun's wedding..

But she going to Malhotra Mansion where her JB lives.. It will be interesting to read Sumo hates Shravan but she is friend with JB but in reality both Shravan & JB are same... Its will be really funny to see them fighting & irritating each other...

Nice update

Vinu

Thanq Vinu for the lovely comments.
shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: humairayousaf78

read all parts in one go and i was like how i missed this beautiful story😲...

curious to read next part
plz update soon!😊

Thanq so much dr.
shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: deltadawn

oh wow... I read this now on wattpad dear sorry... missed the update yesterday.. but it is so super cute.

excited to know what happens if they meet and don't recognize each other..

Thanq deeps for the lovely comment. It motivates a lot to write more.
shirlys thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Chapter 5

Not proof read so bare with the mistakes. Thank you all for the likes and comments.


Sumo, Priya and Varun reached Malhotra Mansion. Sumo said " Varun bhaiya please bring my luggage, I'm going inside " and ran inside Malhotra mansion before Priya could say anything. " yeh ladki bhi na kab sudregi pata nahi, Varun beta tum mat uttavo uski luggage mein andar jaake usse bejthi hoon wohi uttayegi uski luggage, jab deko masthi" said Priya and Varun replied " it's ok Aunty, meri darling ki luggage hai mein leke aavungi, jab tak uski varun bhaiya hai usse koi kaam karneki zaroorat nahi hai " he took her luggage inside. Priya thought " yeh sab milke usse bigedenge...hey bagwan iss ladki ka kya karun mein " while she heard Suman shouting at someone and priya ran inside to see what happened to her daughter that she's yelling.

Inside Malhotra Mansion
Sumo ran into the living area calling " Nirmala Aunty " while she bumped into something and she braced herself for the fall and shut her eyes tightly anticipating the fall but a pair of strong masculine arms went around her and held her before she fell in the ground. She slowly opened her eyes to see a handsome looking man holding her. For few minutes they both went into a trance and they dint move away from each other. Suddenly sumo came out of the eye lock session and yelled " don't you have eyes " he was shocked hearing her yelling at him, she should have thanked him for saving her falling but here she's yelling at him " hey mind your words, here I saved you from falling, you should thank me but ulta muje daat rahi ho, don't you have manners " he yelled back and sumo replied " how dare you say to me that I don't have manners, who are you haan?, I'll ask my aunt to send you out of this house" saying this she started calling for Nirmala. He was shocked to hear her saying she'll ask his mom to send him out of his own house and he said " who the hell are you to send me out of my house..haan " sumo was shocked and said " WHAAAT????" At the same time Nirmala down running and asked " what Shravan, what did you do now??" Shravan replied " I don't do anything she's the one whose yelling at me " here sumo was shocked to knew that the handsome guy is Shravan and she said " Aunty this jerk is the one who bumped into me" Shravan got angry and yelled " what did you say about me ? " sumo replied slyly " can't you hear dump I said JERK.." she stressed the word jerk. Shravan said " I'll not leave you" and started chasing her. Sumo ran and hid behind Nirmala and showed her tongue to Shravan. At the same time came inside and started scolding Suman for misbehaving with Shravan and Shravan was shocked to knew that this girl is priya Aunty's daughter Suman...his childhood enemy. " she dint change a bit, I just hate her, irritating girl " Shravan thought and smiled seeing her getting scolded by priya. Priya said " Suman say sorry to Shravan" and sumo replied " Mom please don't do this to me., I hate this jerk and I won't say sorry to this idiot" Nirmala and Varun smiled at Suman's reaction and Shravan fumed in anger and said " me too hate you to the core stupid ladki " and he left the place giving a angry look to sumo.

That's it for today girls...sorry I know it's a short one but I'll try to update quickly and a long one next time..please do comment and press the like button.All kind of reviews accepted.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".