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Posted: 8 years ago

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Superb update as always!!!👏 😛 ❤️
tara ne apni mother ko mj ke bare me bata diya aur guri ji mj ko uske past aur family ke bare me but guru ji ne apne aur tara ke relationship ke bare me mj kyon nahi bataya?
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Great that Tara is now well enough to go home!!!!!
Yeah, Home is home😊

Aradhana is wondering about who Mrityunjay is!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
Future Son-in-Law😉

She wishes Govind was with them but little does she know that Govind knows everything!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃
she misses him but soon they will be together😃

He has seen his brave and beautiful daughter and knows more about the guy she loves than Aradhana does!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
yes, he does. A man who any dad would dream for his daughter😊

Tara did the right thing by not delaying and confessing to Aradhana that she and Mrityunjay love each other!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Tara and Aradhana are daughter-mother, but they are also friends and its not good to keep secrets between friends 😊

As expected, Aradhana was shocked and she has just realized her little girl has grown up!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
yup, shock of her life😆

The palace was decorated beautifully!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
thanks 😳

It is great to see the understanding between Nirmala and Aradhana!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Well this will help them in future😉

Nirmala sensed something was wrong with Aradhana and it is good Aradhana told her everything!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, Nirmala eventually comes to know if anyone is hiding something from her😉

Queen Nirmala is very happy that Tara loves her son, after all she already loves Tara so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Yup, her future daughter-in-love is in love with her son😊

She gave Aradhana the right advice and she seems sure that Aradhana will not dislike her son!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
yeah, She just advised Aradhana to think about her son😉

Tara is indeed lucky to have a mom like Aradhana and a would be mother-in-law like Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Yes, Tara is lucky 😃

The celebration for the return of Prince Aditya was wonderful!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😃

King Jayraj thanked everyone and awarded the promised Pearl to Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
yes, he is man of his words😃

It was fantastic to see Tara get honoured!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
yes, it was 😃

Tara was overjoyed and Aradhana was soo proud of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, she was😃

It is really nice that now Aradhana wants to meet Mrityunjay!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃
finally, she agreed to meet him😊

Finally Guruji told Mrityunjay everything about his past and who he is!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, here comes the truth of MJ😛

It is so like Mrityunjay to think about Guruji's family when he found out about his own!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
MJ is down to earth ⭐️

Why didn't Guruji tell Mrityunjay that Tara is his daughter when he told him everything else??😕 😕 😕 😕
He might have thought not to reveal everything in 1 day😆

Guruji has indeed sacrificed a lot for Mrityunjay's safety and upbringing!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
yes, he did👏

Mrityunjay is so down to earth and it was soo touching when he told Guruji he is above all for him and to call him Mrityunjay like before!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, he is 😃

Meethi is thanking Tara for bringing Aditya back and it was nice to see them together!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Meethi suffered too much when Prince was way and finally they are together again😃

Aditya is now teasing Tara about Mrityunjay and she blushed!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
hahaha, teasing future Sister-in-law😆

Tara doesn't tell Meethi and rushes off but Aditya did and it was cute and funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
yes, it was😆

Nirmala always loves and adores Tara and blessed her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
yes, she does😊

How did all of Tara's injures get healed suddenly??Is it the effect of the Pearl??😛 😛 😛 😛
good point😉

But then the Pearl would have been used to heal others too!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
smart girl, you are👏 but this is secret😉

Mrityunjay is eager to tell Tara about his family and share his happiness with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Finally he knows, who he is, the mystery of life is now solved and yes he wants to share it with Tara, love of his life😊

The chapter was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for loving it so much😃

Thanks a ton for such a long comment 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Khadeja

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Brilliant writting Archu 👏 👏 👏
Thank U😳

Tara was well then ..😊
And Aradhana thought about who could be MJ..
She also wished if her father was with them. 😊
Little she knew her father knew everything 😃
Yes, Aradhana misses him alot 😊😊

So Aradhana asked about MJ
Tara finally confessed they are more than friend 😛
Mommy ko sach bata diya😛

There came King's special invitation ⭐️
Tara did the right thing 👍🏼
She just didn't delay and confessed about their love
As expected Aradhana was shocked 😊
King is man of his words😊
Aradhana ko shock too lagna hi tha😆

She just had realised how grown up her daughter is.
Yes, we know she is going to like MJ 😛
Again, she didn't know Govind knew everything 😉
Hopefully the tension will go very soon from between Maa-daughter 😊
You readers are too intelligent to know that she is going to like him😉
yes, hopefully the tension will reduce😊

The palace was decorated very beautifully .
Nirmala sensed something was wrong with Aradhana .
After listening she told her to meet MJ 😊
She knew Aradhana would not dislike her son 😉
Queen is smart and intelligent and yes no one can deny MJ as SIL😊

So there was celebration of return prince Aditiya 😊
King thanked all for being there at their critical time.
And thanked Tara and her friend to bring back Aditiya 😃
He awarded the promised pearl ⭐️
Really proud moment for Aradhana 😊
Aradhana wanted to meet MJ 😃
Yes, King awarded the promised Pearl Tara and it was proud moment for Tara and Aradhana😊
We need to wait to know how MJ and Aradhana meeting goes

Guruji was happy for his daughter 😊
Okk.. he decided to tell MJ his identity 😛
So Kalawati kidnapped MJ.
And erased memory from everyone except Nirmala
Now, MJ knew everything and wanted to know about his family, kingdom 😊
Yes, know MJ knows who he is and soon everyone else will know😊

Guruji really did sacrifise for the safety of MJ 😊😊😊
MJ was so down to earth that nothing would change between him and Guruji 😃 😃 😃
Guruji and MJ sets example how a man should be😃

Tara went to meet Aditiya and Meethi 😊
Aditiya teased her about MJ 😉
Tara was blushing 😳😳😳
Here Meethi didn't know whats going on 😆😆😆
Aditiya told her friend is in love 😛
yes, Prince knows about MriAra😊

Nirmala always adores Tara and loves her 😊
And of course Tara deserves these
Yes, Tara is lovely, courageous and adorable 😃

Tara was happy and waiting to bring MJ to her Maa 😊
On the other hand MJ was eager to tell Tara about his family 😊
Both want to share their happiness with each other😃

Archu sorry for late reply
We reader are more slow than you 😉
hahaha, no problem, I just thought readers might give up on this story if I keep on waiting them😆😆😆
But I guess you people love it too much to stick till now😃

Superb update it was 👏👏👏
And so BIG ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Big update are means to say sorry😳

Thanks for the PM 😃

Thanks for loving it sooo much😃

Thanks for such a long comment😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: kumari27
Aradhana is super cute mom..
yes, she is😃

She doesn't overreact but understand the feeling of Tara..
I wish every mom to be like her to listen first then react 😊

Tara is luck to have mother like Aradhana & would be sasu mom Nirmala.
yes, she is lucky😃

Nirmala make understand Aradhana that Tara has chosen right guy .
hahaha, she is appreciating her son😉

Tara feeling happy &i on ninth cloud as she got what she deserves.
yes, she deserved it 😊

Tara & Aditya convo was cute
Thanks😊

Aradhana wants to meet Mrityunjay is nice ...
Well, she need to see the man who stole her daughter's heart 😊

Good that guruji told everything abt mj past
yes, now MJ knows who he is😃

Mj wants to meet Tara so that he can share his happiness.
yes, he wants to share his happiness with Tara, his love😃

It was nice chapter & moved forward

Continue ...,,,

Thanks for loving it and still sticking around 😃😃😃

Thanks for comment😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: npksk8495
Superb update as always!!!👏 😛 ❤️
tara ne apni mother ko mj ke bare me bata diya aur guri ji mj ko uske past aur family ke bare me but guru ji ne apne aur tara ke relationship ke bare me mj kyon nahi bataya?
thanks for pm and continue soon!!!

Thanks for loving the update😃

Yes, daughter and father are on mission reveal the secret 😆😆

Guruji might have thought to reveal about himself some other day😊

A surprise for other day😉

Thanks for reading and comment😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Previous Update on Page 42

The Price of Pearl

As soon as the sun's first ray was out, Tara left for the forest. She was walking into the woods when she saw an injured bird. She picked up the bird and saw it was bleeding. She cleaned her wound. She held the bird compassionately and caressed it. She noticed that the wounds were healed now and the bird flew away after rubbing her beak against her hand. Tara was astonished by this but without paying attention to it, she continued her journey towards Mrityunjay's house.

Here Mrityunjay was galloping Maria in the way from which Tara usually came. He wanted to share his happiness with her. Soon Tara and Mrityunjay came face to face. He stepped down from Maria. She ran towards him and hugged him tightly. After a satisfying hug, she loosened her arms from around him.

"Mrityunjay I told my mom about us and she wants to meet you," she said.

Mrityunjay kissed on her forehead and held her hands in his and kissed her hand. She then gave him the Pearl which was the reward for bringing Prince Aditya back. As soon as Mrityunjay touched it, there was thunder in the sky as the witch's magic was broken. The spell she had cast to prevent Mrityunjay's entry in the city was broken.

Mrityunjay and Tara were confused with the turn of the weather. Seeing the unusual nature of the weather, Mrityunjay took Tara with him on Maria. When Mrityunjay was ridding Maria, Tara hugged him and rested her head on his broad chest. After ridding for a while, Mrityunjay stopped. Tara was confused as it was not his cottage nor were they out of the forest then why did he stop? She got down and remembered that it's the lake where he took her when she was hurt earlier by Nandini.

"Remember this place Tara?" he asked.

"Yes." She said remembering how worried he was that day.

"Do you remember one day I told you that when the time comes Guruji will tell me about my family?" he asked walking towards the pond.

"Yes I remember. Did he tell you about your family?" she asked holding his hands, while many questions were rising in her mind.

"Yes, he told me yesterday." He said turning to face Tara.

"What!!" She exclaimed in surprise.

"I have a family. I have parents, one brother and one sister." Mrityunjay said. His voice was full of joy and happiness.

Tara's face had a bright smile when she heard this.
"Who are they Mrityunjay? Where do they live?" She asked.

"They live in your city." He said.

"Tell me their names, I want to know who are the lucky parents," she said, eagerly waiting for Mrityunjay's reply.

"King Jayraj and Queen Nirmala are my parents."
Tara was listening silently to what he was saying. Suddenly she remembered the bloodline tree which was healthy indicating the elder Prince to be alive.

He continued, "I am their eldest son. Prince Aditya and Princess Vasundhara are my brother and sister. Tara I have a family." He hugged her.

Tara hugged him back. Then suddenly she took a step back. Mrityunjay was confused.

She bowed and said, "I am happy to know my Prince found his family." There was an uneasiness in her voice.

"Tara I am very happy." He said grabbing her hand, "And on top of that your mom wants to meet me. I will ask her permission to marry you. This is the best day for me." He said.

"There is no need my Prince." She said in a low voice.

A voice in back of her mind was saying, "He is the Prince, not an ordinary person. He will be married to some Princess, not to a lady-in-waiting's girl."

"But he just said he will ask mom for our marriage."

The other voice in her mind said, "He said that because he only knows he is a Prince. Once he returns to the palace he will do what is right for the Kingdom. He will be married to some Princess for some alliance like Prince Aditya was married to Princess Meethi. You are not suitable for Mrityunjay any longer." Tara's head was heavy with these thoughts and her face was growing dull.

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Mrityunjay was confused. He took a step towards Tara to hold her in his arms and ask her the reason for her sudden change of mood. Seeing Mrityunjay coming towards her, Tara took a step back and turned her face away from him as she was unable to hold the pain of separation in her. He came to her and held her from behind.

"What happened Tara?" He asked.

Tara didn't reply and tried to free herself from his strong arms but was unable to do so. She had a lump in her throat, and a tear escaped from her eye. Mrityunjay felt something was wrong as Tara was never a person who remains quiet. He turned her towards him and was surprised to see her teary.

"What happened Tara? What is bothering you? Is everyone alright in my family?" He asked cleaning her tears.

"Yes, my Prince. They are alright. Now they will be happy to get their eldest Prince back." She said and took a step away from him.

Mrityunjay was again confused with her behaviour and he asked,
"What is wrong with you Tara? Why are you walking away from me?"

"Nothing my Prince." she said bowing a little.

"First of all stop calling me Prince. I am Mrityunjay, your Mrityunjay." He said.

"You are the Prince, that's why I am calling you Prince." She said straight to him.

"Tara!!!" He said in a frustrated voice holding her.

"You should not get frustrated by a common citizen's words Prince. As soon as you will return to the palace you will be crowned King. You will get married to a Princess. And it will be your routine to listen to Prince' as it will be commonly used to address you, which will be frustrating at times." said Tara, controlling the tears in her eyes.

"What will happen after I return to the palace is a secondary thing. Whether I be a Prince or a king or a no one, I will marry you and that is for sure." said Mrityunjay, holding Tara by her arms.

"When you are a king or even a prince, your life is not yours. You need to do things which are for the benefit of the kingdom and its people." She said maintaining her composure.

"If that's the thing, I would make sure that this situation never comes. And if it comes, I will think of something for it. But I will not marry anyone else except you, Tara. You are my everything." He said and kissed on her forehead.

"Whatever you say Prince, but you can't change the fact that you are a Prince and I am a lady-in-waiting's daughter." She said looking into his eyes.

"If that's the case then I, Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat keeping the earth, water, air, sky and this forest as witness, declare Tara Sharma to be mine and I to be hers till eternity."

He kissed on her forehead. Listening to his promise, her hope which was fading away moments ago returned.

Tara too declared herself to be his,
"I, Tara Sharma keeping the earth, water, air, sky and this forest as witness, declare Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat to be mine and I to be his till eternity."
And kissed him on his lips. Mrityunjay sucked the juice from her lips and released them.

While they were saying the words and exchanging the kisses the whole forest was in unrest. Dusty winds were blowing, there was thunder and trees were making strange sounds. The trees were talking about what happened just now.

They were amazed to witness such an auspicious event which took place for the first time in centuries. An event which was going to change the lives of Mrityunjay and Tara forever.

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I waited for today to post this update because today is the day when MriAra got married in Jungle ⭐️"Jungle Marriage"⭐️

Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃

Thanks for reading😊

Comment fast to read next update 😊

I want to finish this story soon by posting at least 2 updates per month😊

Don't worry I am not cutting story😆, just will do regular update if you lovely readers are going to reply regularly😉
Now it's you readers responsibility to keep me nudging to post 2 updates per month😆

Let's complete this story before May 2017😉

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Tara is so eager to share her happiness with Mrityunjay and tell him that Aradhana wants to meet him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is surprising that the bird Tara tried to help got healed suddenly!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Something seems to be fishy here!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Tara and Mrityunjay's hug on meeting was very sweet and beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Finally the spell is broken when Tara gave Mrityunjay the Pearl!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

The effect was felt by the whole kingdom it seems as a big spell was broken!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

So to reveal a big thing like his lineage, Mrityunjay took Tara to the lake as it seems to be their special place!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Tara gets very excited when he tells her Guruji has told him about his family!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Mrityunjay told her that he belongs to the royal family and is the eldest son of King Jayraj and Queen Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is so happy and hugged Tara but Tara is now behaving weird!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😔 😔 😔 😔

Mrityunjay now wants to ask her mom for her hand in marriage!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

She now thought that with her status she is no longer suitable for Mrityunjay with his new found identity of a prince!!!!

Mrityunjay is confused by her sudden change is behaviour!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Tara it isn't so easy to get out of Mrityunjay's arms as he would never let you go!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Poor Tara is crying and Mrityunjay is so sweetly wiping her tears!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

She keeps calling him Prince and obviously he is getting frustrated by it as he is only Mrityunjay to her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

But Tara is still talking about the difference between them but how does that matter when he loves her and she loves him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Mrityunjay assures her that nothing can change the fact that he would marry only her whoever he might be!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Tara is not relenting and is very hard to crack but Mrityunjay is not one to give up!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Mrityunjay finally recited the vow that he was only hers and she was his!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hearing this, Tara's hope was back and she also recited the vow and declared that she was his and he was hers!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Their kiss was beautiful and sooo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It put a seal on their promise to be together forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This seems to be an important event not just for them but also for Wonderland as it was reflected in the weather and the forest!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

So this was the "Jungle Wedding" of Once Upon A Time In Wonderland!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Happy Second Wedding Anniversary to you too Archu and to all EBIans!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thank you for this very special chapter on this special occasion!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

The chapter was fabulous!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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First of all Happy 2nd wedding anniversary to all EBIANS 😃 🤗 🤗 🤗

MriAra are unique and their marriage too... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
'Jungle Marriage' ... WOW !! Archu 😃

Archu, I know you did this update on that special day..
I should have commented then.. 😵
But I was stuck with exam on that week and then have some health issues
I know you will consider me as usual you consider my late comment.

It is a Superb update ⭐️⭐️⭐️
The title is lovely !!! 😊

Tara was so eager to tell MJ that Aradhana wanted to meet him 😛
She found a injured bird and tried to help it..
So kind of her 😊
But how it got well so soon !! 🤔

Finally Tara reached to MJ.
She showed him the pearl and the spell was broken by his touch 😃

On the way MJ told he found out about his family 😊
Tara was also excited to hear this 😃
And finally it was revealed that none other than MJ belonged to the royal family 😃
Tara now realized why the bloodline tree was alive 😊

MJ was so happy, he hugged her.
But Tara had awkwardness in her mind...
MJ told he would ask her hand from her Mom for their marriage 😛
But Tara was not so happy 😔
She was surrounded by her status and MJ's new found identity 😵
She thought he would have some duties as prince and would have to marry a princess

MJ was confused by her sudden behavior .
He tried to find out, only found her crying and gloomy.
She kept maintaining distance and calling him Prince ... 🥱

MJ cleared he was only 'Mrityunjay' to her
But it seemed Tara was not going to see his emotion
She kept telling she was an ordinary girl and he was prince 🤪

MJ told, nothing could change this that he would marry only her 😃 👍🏼
But Tara is Tara...
She was never so easy to crack until someone gave her some sense 😆

Awee... MJ recited the vow, the promise that from then he was only her 👏 👏 👏
Hearing his promises Tara's confusion went away 😃
She too announced herself to be his 👍🏼
And their kiss...

It was really an important change of their lives...
Now, everything is going to be right when MJ and Tara become one 😊

It was a wonderful part Archu 👏 👏 👏
It is your 'Jungle marriage' of Once Upon a Time In Wonderland 🥳🥳 🥳
Very special update on special occasion 😃

Yes, I will try to be not so late on commenting

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