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Posted: 8 years ago
Looking forward to your update, Marr! And cute-aly, thank you for the amazing edit! Looks great😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Twerps, when do you plan to write an update?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rini, that was awesome! Now to see what happens since these two have finally separated. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
I must say the story is progressing fantastically well. It's not smooth though with twists happening.

@Rishu, Rinni & Marr good work 👏

I am also available for the update today 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Twerps, when do you plan to write an update?



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Posted: 8 years ago
Her heart fell watching him storm but but she knew it wasn't his fault the least bit. She continued packing as tears flowed down involuntarily. It felt unfair, life was always unfair when of came to matters with guys she felt it was unfair she never had a choice weather it was Dev or presently Ranveer. She knew she wanted him it was almost like a reflex to think about him she didn't know when she started feeling an attraction towards him she thought she was clear about liking Dev but Ranveer never in her wildest dreams would she have thought she would be thinking about him let alone fall for him. A sad chuckle escaped her lips as she recalled "their moments" she didn't know if they could ever be that again heck she didn't even know if they'd even have a proper conversation the next time they meet. She knew for a fact that she started losing herself whenever they made eye contact. She stopped her packing her facade of "Miss.Strong" tore apart she fell on the bed and rolled into a circle clutching her legs her eyes felt heavier by the second as fatigue rushed through leaving her snooze to escape from her messed up reality.
"Priyanka" she heard a familiar masculine voice call her.
"Ranveer" her eyes opened up wide.
"How are you?!" He questioned.
"Not very well" She honestly answered knowing well that it was a dream and a far cry from reality so why not speak out her heart for once.
"Why?!"
"I don't know. Its like my world is falling apart I always fall for the wrong guy knowing very well i deserve none of them that's why destiny snatches all what I love"
"Why would you say that Pinku"
"Because that's the truth"
"This not the truth Priyanka its just a lie you've believed a reality.
"I don't want to talk about this?"
"Do you like someone? Do you like Dev?"
"Dev isn't the problem you are the problem"
"How am I the problem"
"What do you mean how? You are always in my mind. I keep stupidly hoping at the end of my heart that !maybe... maybe one day I'd be worth of love and you'd be with me but I can't be selfish you deserve much better than a person that killed your sister"
"Priyanka stop blaming yourself" Ranveer cooed pulling himself towards her almost placing her on his lap.
"My conscious will not allow me to"
"What if I say that I think I've fallen for someone who I least expected to fall in love with?"
"Do...you.. love...someone?" Priyanka asked heartbroken.
"Yeah, I do" He said pulling her closer if possible whispering into her ear.
"Who" She asked shutting her eyes scared to face the answer.
,"I thought you were intelligent Miss.Oberoi turns out your dumber that Tia Kapoor"
"Oii... Shut up I'm not dumb ok, you know what just go away if I'm so dumb" Priyanka loosened herself from the grip.
"Oh my Lord your so du!b and babish well that is one of the reasons why I love you" Ranveer confessed.
"Will you never learn I said I'm not dumb or babish and also..wait..what you love me"
"Glad you got the point Miss.Oberoi or I thought I'd die single"
"Do you always try hard with your jokes"
"Well when it comes in handy yeah.."
"Now let m hug you pweez" Ranveer did his best puppy dog eyes.
"Let me think.." Before she could talk she felt her bones crush and losing air.
"Are.you. trying.to.kill.me" Priyanka hit him.
"With my love? Yes." Ranveer tried to flirt.
Ranveer placed a tiny kiss on her forehead and reached for another hug.
"I promise I'd never let anything ever harm you again" Ranveer sofly spoke.
Priyanka felt hot fresh tears on her shoulder blade.
"No..no shoot this can't be this isn't a dream. What the hell have I got myself into?" Priyanka cursed herself.
"No this can't happen" Priyanka pushed the ACP away as realization dawned over.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm sorry guys if this want that good. I'm not very happy how this turned up. I suck when it comes to romance *sighs* (This is why I'd be single forever)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oooh. Lovey dovey reverie han ;) Damn! Poor priyankaa :D
Great update, Marr. I'm looking forward to Twerps updating the next part. Pleeease girl!?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy

I must say the story is progressing fantastically well. It's not smooth though with twists happening.

@Rishu, Rinni & Marr good work 👏

I am also available for the update today 😉

Please go ahead😎
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Posted: 8 years ago

Fiza, thanks! You should post. Twerps isn't around I guess

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