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Hello everyone!đ
I'm not very active in the forum but visit the posts here. Also, I'm loving Beyhadh
I wrote a simple poem in English on Maya and Saanjh after watching the episode...thodi deewangi mujhpe bhi chad gyiđ
Frankly speaking, there can be difference of opinions as to how I view Maya and Saanjh and how you perceive them.
So, I'm clearly saying I'm not debatingđ whose perception is correct because even my perception is likely to change as the story proceeds...
A simple request : kindly refrain from making hate comments regarding the actors in this post.
I welcome all the critics, likes, comments, advices and suggestions for improvement :)
Regarding poems: Poems are on characters and not the actors. All the actors are doing well. Jennifer is nailing it, no doubt. Aneri is also performing brilliantly. Again, the poems may present how I view Maya and Saanjh to date. I am least bothered who ends up with who and my poem too doesn't show any endgame. It shows Arjun is not in either hands of Maya or Saanjh :) :)
PS: Though I'm saying so much but I'm not a so great poetđ¤Łđ¤Ł and just tried my hand...At once you may feel I have exaggerated Arjunđ
No offense at any character or actor.
Just thought of sharing since I wrote it. If anybody has any problem, please feel free to comment " remove this post " and I'll erase it out :)
Thanks in advance đłđ
Neeru :)
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Maya
I strive to walk through the dirty puddles,
My impeccable attire is my soul...
I squirm and wince in pain,
Yet my unbroken spirit strides against ravages of time,
Undettered, someday I will achieve my goal...
The more it darkle, dawn chorus is about to start out,
A self made woman has to shine no doubt;
But a supportive shoulder is always admired and I'm no exception...
His armour and a scintillating sword draws me to my ostensible saviour,
And slowly I hear the shackles of fear break, unknown to the new fetters of obsession...
Possessing the grotesque flame that can churn seas,
I smile with intentions concealed.
The world drowns in depth of my words,
I intend to see a twinkling night bereft of dusk.
I aim to catch the pearl falling from the sky to make it mine...
Unaware that the water will find its way to meet its destiny,
No matter how much I try to confine...
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Saanjh
I tread on the rough roads under the glaring sun,
With wet eyelids and a blended vision...
My eyes always long for a special presence,
I subtly anticipate that the carefree palpable dust,
Getting captured in hands of aberrance.
The flower of my hopes and trust has been tweaked off the bush,
The reality holding strings of lies is not worth a push...
I dare, yes, here I dare to take a turn,
Listening to reverberations of my footsteps...
None can deny the plenty shades of dusk,
Along with its unfathomable depths...
I go on unabated with my head held high,
Because more charming than the day or the night,
It is the dusk that stands in between,
Yet represents unity of the dark and the light...
With the sky enveloped in the azure glow,
I fear no challenge, the world would soon come to know...
Even if he, my life, goes off my sight,
My halo would even constellate the darkest night...
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