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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

#551

Hi guys,

just wanted to comment here to let u guys know how much im loving this story.
You all are doing an amazing work and i keep checking back here to see any updates and each and every update has been amazing! 👏

Cant wait to read what happens next 😆

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#552

People! Im back. :D
Anyone updating kya? If not, I can! :)

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist
People! Im back. :D
Anyone updating kya? If not, I can! :)

Yo, Rini! I dint think anyone has reserved a spot. Go ahead! 😉

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist
People! Im back. :D
Anyone updating kya? If not, I can! :)

I'm kinda working on the next installment😳

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

I'm kinda working on the next installment😳

Oh okay! Cool. Waiting for your update :D

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

I'm kinda working on the next installment😳

Ooops! 😲 Sorry, Maryam! 😳 Didn't realise you were already working on the Dev angle.

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#557

"It's not like that" he began.

"Priyanka"A familiar voice cut through.

" Dev...What are you doing here" Priyanka questioned not intending to be rude.

"So you guys know each other" Ranveer gestured pointing at the two of them not wanting to feel left out.

"Yeah..we were almost engaged" Dev looked down sadly.

"What do you mean almost engaged" Ranveer arched his eyebrows pretending to feel sorry though a part of him was strangley happy.

"That's not important..." Priyanka answered taking back both Ranveer and Dev in shock.

Ranveer felt a bubble of pride rise within him seeing Priyanka grow back into a stronger person. He questioned his sudden thought trying his best to ignore it.

"Priyanka I want to talk to you in private" Dev requested stressing the last couplet.

"What does he even want to talk 'in private' "Ranveer murmered shocking himself for the third time this evening.

" Let's go sit there" Priyanka pointed at the bench under a huge banyan tree.

Ranveer cleared his throat strangely annoyed that Priyanka wasn't acknowledging his presence.

"I better be leaving now Miss. Obroi" he said completely ignoring Dev and walking away.

"Strange" Dev muttered confused at the ACP's actions.

*5 MINUTES LATER*

Ranveer watched Priyanka laugh for the 10th time in five minutes. He wondered what was so funny in him.

"He looks boring" Ranveer shrugged trying to act cool.

"Guess I should be leaving now" he finally forced himself to move away.

You guys are so talented that there is no way in heaven i could stand on par with you guys but I did try hope you guys enjoyed

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Immaturebookie

@Immaturebookie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Ooops! 😲 Sorry, Maryam! 😳 Didn't realise you were already working on the Dev angle.

No love that's totally cool😆

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#559

Jealous ACP! Aisa bhi kabhi hoga kya show mein T_T

This was a treat, girl. And I see great potential in where the plot is going. :3

I'll go next, people!

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#560

That was a smart one, Maryam. You left everything ambiguous, creating a sense of suspense and raising so many possibilities to answer the various questions that arise from here - Why is Dev at the ashram? What does he want to talk to Prinku about that he needs a word with her in private? What will the ACP think/do now? and so on... 😉

Who goes next? Rini?

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