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Posted: 8 years ago
Ranveer stared in horror at the still figure crumpled up in his arms. As she had collapsed, a desperate shout had emerged from him.
"Priyanka!"
His voice had sounded alien to himself. The fear and alarm that shot through his being was unexpected. He looked down at her pale face and felt unease creep into him. Had he pushed her too far? Should he have asked her about the medicines, about the accident, knowing that it quite possibly would trigger panic in her. He was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't even realise that he had lifted her up in his arms, cradling her as if she was a child. It was as he bent down to place her on the bed that he realised that he had actually been carrying her all this while. He set her down on the bed and was hit by a sense of loss that he was wholly unprepared for. Unwilling to face these unfamiliar and uncomfortable emotions cascading through him, he looked around for a water bottle. A jug sat on a table near her bed. He picked it up and started sprinkling water on her face. She twitched and then opened her eyes.
Her gaze was unfocused for a bit. He bent down and placed his hand on her head. His fingers traced patterns on her forehead, pushing the strands of hair back. He watched colour flood back into her face and felt relief wash through him. As soon as consciousness dawned in her eyes, she tried to sit up. Ranveer found himself gently pushing her back on the bed. His fingers continued their ministrations. Priyanka's eyes turned in the direction of his hand and suddenly he realised exactly what he had been doing. He withdrew his hand with the speed of lightning, feeling heat flood his face. How could he have taken such a liberty!?! He was shocked and amazed at such an intimate gesture on his part. He, who had always been known as being undemonstrative.
He stood up on his feet,eager to leave the room, but drawn to stay out of a concern that he could not completely ignore.
"Are you sure you feel alright, Miss Oberoi?" he asked, drawing upon customary politeness, to hide his embarrassment. "I think you need to rest, after such an eventful day."
As he prepared to leave, her soft voice reached him.
"Take the medicine, please."
He wanted to tell her that the medicines had only been an excuse. But he found himself turning towards the table, where the medicines had fallen in a cluster. He picked up the pack of aspirin and set it apart. Then he collected the rest and placed them in her medicine box. Then he turned to go but a piece of paper on the table caught his eye.
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Posted: 8 years ago
ok,done! Now Rini, your turn...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg shit xD I'm so terrible with this hahah but I'll try to make it interesting. :3 Lovely update, twerps. Ranveer is worried about her omg omg <3 DREAAMMM <3 :')
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist

Omg shit xD I'm so terrible with this hahah but I'll try to make it interesting. :3 Lovely update, twerps. Ranveer is worried about her omg omg <3 DREAAMMM <3 :')


hahaha! yeahhh... the way he took care of her on the night of KC! ☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Main likh rahi hun :3 updating thodi der mein
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ThatNarcissist

Main likh rahi hun :3 updating thodi der mein


yay!!! Am around! 😳🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping


hahaha! yeahhh... the way he took care of her on the night of KC! ☺️


The night of KC Hands down my favourite PriVeer moment. Loved the update twerps! I love seeing ACP freak out where Prinku is concerned ❤️

Looking forward to the update, Rini!
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Posted: 8 years ago

He took one last glance at her sleeping figure from the corner of his eyes as he stealthily slipped the folded piece of paper into his pocket. He noticed how her features had softened, quickly trying to memorise the patterns of the veins on the outside of her eyelids one last time before he left.

On reaching his room, he sat at the table- the only furniture in the room apart from the bed and unfolded the paper that he had sneaked along with him. The creases were new which meant this was received by her recently. He turned and studied the paper well before finally starting to read it, trying hard not to feel guilty of intruding into someone else's privacy.

I assume you know better than to open your mouth to anyone, but just in case you have forgotten let me leave a friendly reminder. If you dare try to act smart with that meek little voice of yours, trust me I'll have the unthinkable in store for you. But I know you're smarter than that, aren't you? With all those evidences that allege you guilty, you know it'd be in vain to even try and defend yourself. Darling, you keep my secrets and I keep yours.

-X

Thrice. He had read it thrice and by the end of his third read, his head was throbbing harder than his heart. He couldn't believe how one-tracked he had been in his investigations that not even for once did he try to look into the other side of the story. Someone has been blackmailing her all this while, and he did not have the slightest idea. Blackmailed about what? What is she covering up for?

Is this what he thinks it is?

Word count: 292

twerping thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Absolutely superb! Loved the twist! Great stuff, Rini!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Absolutely superb! Loved the twist! Great stuff, Rini!


:3 thanks for the help ya

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