Khadoos in Love. End pg 84, note pg 89. - Page 69

ok. back with my comment..
as i said i will be

firstly.. i want to say..
that ur ff was one of the best.. ff's i read in this IF..
and i reallie mean this..
it had everything that u want in ur.. life.
emotions, jokes, and a loving family..
which this ff did have
i am reallie sad that this ff.. ended as.. whenever i came online.. on IF.. i always checked if u updated or not..
and when u didnt.. i was like.. why didnt she updated yet..
hehe

i reallie hope that u soon start another..
and i am really sad.. because u and tazzie..
both ended ur.. ff..
as u both had funny.. ff's

i was reading this last update.. when my dad was in the same room..
i was laughing.. when sid.. and jai were talking .. and my dad was looking at me.. like i was going crazy hehehe

i reallie.. hope that u both. start another.. ff..
soooon ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn please please please pretty please

nirali❤️

Hey Sam, can't believe that was the last part! As always it was great and well written. Sid disturbing JB lol I knew something like that would happen. Jai taking Bani on the boat and having their suhaag raat there was a romantic idea. I'm really going to miss this FF but I hope in the future you plan to write another one.


Maro 😛

Hey great part. 😉 loved it.

You are ending the ff. I love your ff for making it fun. I love the way you write your ff in conversation style.

I loved. I hope you do write a new ff.

Had great fun reading your ff.

Cheers,
Meena

Oye, mein tum se baath nahi karoongi...tu ne KIL ko khatam kar diya.... 😭 My favorite wali FF...

Caught up both parts I missed. First one -

Enjoyed the plane ride, the masti with Sid, Chotu, Rishi and the gang!!

Khadoos doing his best to keep his name. Haila...wanted to see belly dancing, and besharam kahin ka, asking the hostess out for date with his fiancee around... 😆 😆 😆 Good thing Bani is a good natured gal~ 😉 😉

Ahh, finally they are married...tipu sultan attire...hmm, sounds great! Ghoda ka naam kya tha?? How about 'Arrogant b&&**rd??

😆 😆 😆

Poor Rishi, the couple who are supposed to be giving away the bride were making out right in front of him...

😆 Rano tho sach much bahut innocent hai...jack and jill coming back with the daughter??? Such gullible sea gull, this jill..

So finally they are married, and the first kiss after marriage!! Awesome!

Finally to the last part~! What can I say, passionate, hot, steamy, nervous, romantic, loving, all combined together.

The yacht, the starry sky, the unending passion all befitting the Khadoos and his Khadoosni...

Just loved it to bits, your story captivated me from the beginning and I can't tell you how much I enjoyed each and every part.

I will miss it for sure, but thank you very much for making this so entertaining, filmy, lovable and just plain awesome!

DaLLAS!! I will miss it very much, but do keep in touch!!

grt part just loved tis ff....and m sad cos it ended 😭 😭 but loved every part of it....

hey sammie.
now .. that tazzie.. has started a new ff.
dont u think u should start one too.
hehe.
please doo start one soon