| Anikka's Broken Peices | OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Couldn't help myself to pen some thoughts down about Anikka and her turmoil. I hope you guys enjoy my this little POV from my thoughts. Pleas do comment and like :)

Sachi Mohabbat Shayad Wahi Hai
Jismay Junoon Hai, Jismay Junoon Hai
Par Do Dilo Ki, Yaari mein bhi To
Kitna Sukoon Hai


Locking herself in the bathroom. She looked at herself in the mirror. Standing there staring at herself. Running her fingers on the black beaded necklace, the symbol of her wedding and her forehead with red sindoor. Standing there helpless, staring in the mirror she stood in her red wedding outfit, no Tia's wedding outfit. A lone tear escaped her eye. The one day every girl has dreamed of to be the happiest for her for her was the worst day ever. Never has she hated her kismat as much as today. But she laughed, laughed with tears because she's never won from it. Life had given her nothing but sorrow. The one man she had fallen in love with, had hurt her the most. Had shattered her into pieces that couldn't ever be put together. How can life be so unfair, so cruel because for first time life was giving her happiness, the first time she was living for herself, the first time she started to smile for herself but was all cut short. It was all taken away in one day and all because of Shivaay Singh Oberoi. The man she had hated. The man she fought with. But had started trusting. The man she can call at any time of day to come save her from any problem. The man she had slowly but unknowingly started to fall in love with. And the same man that had broken her into pieces once again, pieces that will never be put back together. The pieces that took her entire life to put together, this man in a second shattered them to pieces. Falling down like her kismat, she dragged her knees to herself, hugging and crying. Sobbing, she laid down on the bathroom floor, no strength whatsoever left in her. For the first time in her life she wished her parents were here. She felt all alone. Even Sahil wasn't with her today. She lay in darkness all alone, broken. Her fear all gone. The darkness that has engulfed her life is nothing compared to the the darkness outside. The moon was the only shining light that will always be shining even in the darkness of all darknesses. A ray of hope. Tired of the days events, she lay there till no tears came out of her eyes. Closing this chapter of her life tonight to start a new one in the morning and for the rest of her life. Her life as Mrs. Anikka Shivaay Singh Oberoi.


Dekhe Mujhay Teri Judaai
Maana Rab Ne Mujhay Yeh Pegham Diya
Channa Mereya, Mereya
Channa Mereya, Mereya
Channa Mereya, Mereya
O Piyaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was beautifully written❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful.. portrayes Annika's emotions perfectly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful.. portrayed Annika's emotions perfectly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was beautiful...I hope that someday...even if by accident, he sees her abject misery, and realizes what he has done to the woman he claims to hate but truly loves. I want his misery to be so blatant and horrifying...UGH!! Great OS, you captured her pain, her misery but most of her reality.
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simply superb. great narration of Anika's inner turmoil.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written.. best portray of Anika's turmoil
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Thank you everyone for the amazing comments :)

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