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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zajedno

Barbie. I'm sorry I had not seen this. what to tell you you're one amazing girl. in addition to obligations at the university you are here and very active. congratulations. You are our pride. This is a beautiful post and Duthe is perhaps better to figure that I saw. although Viplav on his own interesanran, and here is Duthe proved to be struggling with himself and with his emotions.

Oh its ok sara.. you came here, read and appreciated.. and I am humbled.. Thanks a lot dear.. me too really proud to have such a sweet member like you in our forum..
Yes Dutta and Viplav are really different.. When the first one never steps back from opening his mind in front of his lady, the later is a really really confusing soul😆 who himself does not have the courage to go and speak and neither did the people around him had to courage to face him😆 such a shy kid of patil vaadi he was.. 😳
Both the characters are very unique and love both of them... None other than Mishal could have fit into the shoes of Dutta and Viplav..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Hammie.. jab dosti hoti hai toh Gun neeche aur baahen khuli honi chahiye.. aur teri meri dosti toh kab ki hai.. isi khusi mein.. le hug le bhau..🤗 Tujhe dekh ke hi mood ekdam jhakas ho jata hai re bhau.. apun bhi kya kare😆😆

Solace ... barbs.. interesting imaginative piece. The bit I warmed to the most was his bottle bonding. Seeing that, I could never really pinpoint as to why Dutta drank? Was it part of a male bonding session with Baji ?was it nothing more then a daily past time activity many rich folk indulge in to unwind after a busy day? Or was It an antidote to deal with being rejected by a pretty woman? Whatever the reason was? Dutta somehow never intended to take his own life , despite the all self harm he inflicted upon himself. However he had some underlying issues.. The causes behind dutta's drinking habit was a combination of all your mentioned points I guess... Dutta was not the only billionaire of the gangster world.. there were many other like nana saheb who hold posts superior to him in the Dons' gang.. Now those rich folks used to drink as a past time activity.. and being their partner in crime Dutta had to join them and this could be the reason why he actually got addicted to drinking.. then later discovered than a drunk man could derive temporary peace from the red liquor.. Dutta really never tried to break his bonding with alcohols because he believed that would help him forget the worries of his complex life and sleep peacefully.. I remember during that "baji ji ki vahini ji session", dutta had thrown some taunts at naku saying that It was becoz of the wound inflicted on his heart by her that he had to drink this bitter liquor daily.. Then in another episode he had asked a servant to get him wine "aisa kuch laa jisse peeke mein khud ko bhool jayu" .. So Dutta might had considered his drinking habits to be an antidote to deal with the betrayals and so called betrayals of his life.. just making some guesses you know.. 😛 only thing unfortunate for him he looked for peace from a medium that failed him.. thanks for a very well written One Shot barbs. Well done for contributing to running of the forum.. regards hammie.

Yea and finally he discovered the right medium from which he could actually derive the peace and satisfaction that he was in search for since a long time.. remember his proposal? "Saalon se bhaaga arahu.. par aj jake mujhe apni manzil dikhayi de rahi hai"..❤️ Naku had changed that man.. She had really brought out that wonderful human being from behind the terrific mask of the Don and healed his wonded soul with utmost care and immeasurable love..

Thanks hammie.. you are my darling mate.. lot of love for you❤️

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Barb, what a beautifully written piece! 👏 I understand how difficult it must've been to write this piece. Dutta is a very complex and layered character. You did an impressive job in keeping up with his character. The remorse he felt in his drunken state was necessary in their love story. Seeing him treat Nakku so callously on the show was difficult watch. I loved the last paragraph, Barb! ❤️ You couldn't have brought a better interpretation of Dutta's addiction to alcohol. 🤗 Please do continue your story on ViDha. I'm excited to see you bring momentum and passion to their story. 😉

Thank you so much dazz.. You are such a sweet friend.. always ready to appreciate and lift up my spirits..🤗 Now I must continue with my Vidha FF.. Actually what happens I lose patience very soon.. Dont know why a lazy girl like me wanted to start an FF😆😆 But ab suru kia ha toh I must complete it.. only for my sweet die hard vidha/misha fans.. will update the next chapter .. and thats a promise..
and thanks for the appreciation on this OS dear.. ya Dutta had been kaafi rude to naku after learning about her fair skin but hats off to that ideal wife.. She still showered her love on him.. Fire cannot be pacified by igniting fire beside it.. Only water can clam down the burning sensation and Naku knew that.. hats off to that wife.. how lucky her husband was to have her in his life!😳

will be coming soon with the next chapter of Vidha story Dazz😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl82

BB...very beautifully written DEAR...yes it's difficult to write about the actions with less dialogues...but u have managed to portray the state of dutta very nicely...liked it...I think nakku never doubted him or can never do it...she would have turned away and went with baji...just because she would have felt bad that dutta misunderstood her and gave her explanation to eradicate her doubts...nakku was a strong character with an unconditional love for dutta...he was also an unconditional lover but most of the time he was ignorant of it...write more whenever u r free and feel like writing...we R ready to read and enjoy it😃

Good to see you tulsi di.. Thank you for reading and appreciating my work..
Yeah that "crazy in love" woman could never hate her husband.. She just wanted to give him some time so that he could actually understand her worth, realise his fault and how important it was to share such delicate incidents of his life with his life partner.. She was sensible and baaji too... They both actually knew how to support dutta when he was falling apart and how to bring him on right track when he was proceeding in a wrong direction.. isiliye toh love these two characters as much as i love DSP..

Ya ya sure.. i will continue writing as long as i am here in IF.. such sweet friends like you, always encouraging me.. heart felt thanks to you di.. I knew it that you will surely read and comment🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Mje sachi main yaqeen nahi aata ss ye sab tu likhty hai..😆 yarr the flow of scene never lost.. PW ka nmber 1 bewada was doing the onli thing he's master of..😆 bt waah how u summerise his state n his being..

Its not that liquor but me who you are addicted to..😳👏⭐️

Waah waah maza aagya.. vry endearing chap u wrote ss n n yess with sharp edge finish.. the OS seems absolutely brilliant to me.. we'll assume now kese kese naku tame his lion after that. ..😉 dun worry that's wat I'm reading nowadays in my pass time😆. . very well written ss n u kno na I'm proud of u.. sorry for being late here..again..🤢

arey arey yeh kaun aayi mere post mein?
samne yeh kaun aya..dil mein huyi halchal
dekh ke baas ek hi jhalak ho gaye hum pagal..
tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam.. pyar hota hai deewana sanam...
tumhi dekho nah..yeh kya ho gaya..tumhara hoon mein aur tum meri❤️


Kya hua? now stop giving me those cold glares and stop doubting my gender..😡 jake mere profile mein dekho.. haan mein ladki hi hoon aur agar yekin nahin ata toh mummy ki number deti hoon.. phone karke pooch lo..
kya zamana aya hai.. khul ke pyar ka izhar bhi nahin karne dete log😡
achcha mein seedha muddhe ki baat karti hoon.. bakwas karna mujhe pasand nahin.. woh actually I wanted to say that I LOVE YOU ❤️☺️


haan PW's no 1 bewda was doing that in which he had an USA and UK degree from the best possible university of this world- DRINKING🤣 No one, not even ganpath could beat him in this..actually serial ka naam hona chahiye tha "Dutta Ko Laagi Desi Faltu Daaru Se Laagan"🤣 mujhe bhi bohot maza aya woh drunk part likhne mein.. was smiling and blushing and doing what not while typing and my mom was all confused looking at my state😆
kya kare Drunk Dutta Patil is S**y☺️ naku had spend so much time with him alone in his bedroom since the time they became friends.. pata nahin woh khud ko kaise control karti thi.. 😕 mein hoti toh kapra phad deti.. wardrobe ko aag laga deti... saare clothes shop in Ratnagiri mein bomb blast karwa deti 🤣


Haan mein apni SS ki intezar mein hi toh thi ke kab woh aye aur comment kare.. only then i will start replying to other's comments.. Kyunki tab mujhe pata chal jata ke koi baaki nahin rehe gaya hai.. nus ne padhke comment kar diya iska matlab sabka padhna ho gaya hai😆😆

when i was new in IF, pretu meri first friend bani thi and she was insisting me to make friendship with you too as you are also a fun loving person.. mein dar gayi thi.. laga tha ke you might fire me if i go to talk to you🤣 tabh mujhe kya pata tha that you will become the Senapati of our 10000 soldiers ki fauj😆😆

abhi apni SS ko kya thank you bolna.. tumhare appreciation pe toh mera haq banta hai.. love you dear❤️
Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Barbsie darling😃
Loved reading every bit of your powerful writing! Dutta's state of mind so intensely displayed through your words... His remorse and realization that Naku is his heart and soul is highlighted perfectly You painted such a beautiful picture with the gentle Naku trying to soothe the deep wounds of his soul and Dutta totally giving in to her caresses ...It was like a balm for his tortured mind.
I could completely visualize his pain by the way in which you described his actions and addiction to alcohol to numb his pain and the characterization of both Dutta and Naku was extremely substantial.
Keep writing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Thank you so much dazz.. You are such a sweet friend.. always ready to appreciate and lift up my spirits..🤗 Now I must continue with my Vidha FF.. Actually what happens I lose patience very soon.. Dont know why a lazy girl like me wanted to start an FF😆😆 But ab suru kia ha toh I must complete it.. only for my sweet die hard vidha/misha fans.. will update the next chapter .. and thats a promise..

and thanks for the appreciation on this OS dear.. ya Dutta had been kaafi rude to naku after learning about her fair skin but hats off to that ideal wife.. She still showered her love on him.. Fire cannot be pacified by igniting fire beside it.. Only water can clam down the burning sensation and Naku knew that.. hats off to that wife.. how lucky her husband was to have her in his life!😳

will be coming soon with the next chapter of Vidha story Dazz😃


I'll be waiting, sweetheart! ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I enjoyed reading this short yet lovely story. Our TaSha are so deeply in love. They don't need words to express their feelings ..but it is there in every breath they take.
I am happy to read this Barbie. Keep it up. waiting for your next.

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