Mother's love(OS dedicated to Reena Mam)

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This OS is written to give special adieu to Reena Mam for her phenomenal role as Nimmi. Finally, It's time to say her goodbye, but I think goodbyes are sad and I'd much rather say hello. Hello to a new adventure.

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A massive castle was fully lightened. The chandelier ceiling was hanging in the middle of the room. Men of various age groups were sitting on decorated mats. Some of them were even chewing tobacco. All the men had seated in a circular form & just then a lady in her mid 40's came to the center.

From the back, someone shouted,"Nimmi, show your dance moves..."

Nimmi, a lady, who was fully covered with ornaments & heavy saree was looking like a diva. She started dancing with the beat of the classical music. In some intervals, guys were passing nasty comments to her. Someone was saying,"Oh! What a figure... She still looks young.. May be one day I can get her on bed."

Cutting his voice, some other man was yelling,"She is very decent.. Till now she doesn't entertain any customer privately." Some other men were laughing after listening to these talks & within them, a man had challenged,"one day she will accept my proposal & she will entertain me for money."

These insane talks were going on & that lady couldn't escape from the luring eyes of these men as if they were hungry lions of 10 years & she was a food for them.. Still the dancing was going on & money was spread on floors. After the music was stopped, Nimmi bowed down before everyone & just then a girl in her 20's came running towards Nimmi & said,"Mummy! How is this painting?"

Nimmi tried to hide her from those men present near her & said,"Beta! Go inside.. Mumma will come..." All the flesh eating eyes were now transferred towards the girl instead of Nimmi..Nimmi just excused herself & went inside.. The girl also followed her..

As soon as both of them reached to another room, Nimmi shouted,"Somu! How many times will I warn you against coming outside?" Soumya's eyes were filled with tears & she was stammering,"Mumma! Today is your birthday... I have made this painting for you. In excitement, I have forgotten your advice."

Nimmi was stunned by Somu's gratitude and innocent love and she hugged her instantly & wiped her tears and said,"Beta! I am sorry.. Mumma is scared for your life.. Please don't cry and show me the painting."

Soumya handed over the painting to Nimmi & after looking at the painting, she started sobbing... Just then a lady entered inside the room & shouted,"What is wrong with you,Nimmi? How can you come out of the gathering like this??"

Nimmi sent Somu to bring foods for her & said,"Preeto! You know na Somu has come in between. What can I do in that place." Preeto in a bit stricter tone said,"Nimmi! You have to stop these nonsense things.. You have saved my life once so in return I have never made you a prostitute and always confined your activities in dancing. But you can't disobey our customers..."

Nimmi just nodded positively and suddenly Preeto said,"Have you thought anything regarding soumya? I mean what will be her future?" Nimmi could easily understood the meaning of Preeto & said,"No Preeto! Somu can't be like me.. I am helpless earlier as my husband has sold me for money. But Somu isn't alone. Her mother is with her."

Preeto couldn't utter a word & complete silence was prevailing in the room. Just then Soumya had entered by taking a food plate in her hand and asked joyfully,"Mumma! Have you seen the painting? Is it good?" Nimmi just hugged her tightly & said,"Who says that my daughter doesn't know painting? It's awesome..." Soumya was very happy & the mother-daughter shared a few cordial relationship.

Time was free but nevertheless it was priceless.. Nobody could own it, but only used it. Nobody could keep it,however only spent it.. Time moved slowly but passed quickly.. Their lives were passing in the same way & would be remained like same if one day a handsome boy wouldn't enter to their place.

As soon as he entered, Preeto asked him,"What are you doing here? What do you want? It seems like you have come first time to this place.." The boy replied,"Mam! I know about this place & I am aware about the activities going on this place. I am a research student & want to research upon these ladies & their lifestyles & why they have chosen this path?"

Preeto just laughed and said,"OK! But do you have money? Nothing is free here.." The boy nodded positively and gave 5000 rupees to her. Preeto asked him to enter the name in the register & wait outside. Preeto roamed the entire building but found none was free.. All ladies were busy with their customers. Just then her eyes fell upon Soumya & she came outside and asked the boy to come in & said,"Hey! All are busy but go to that corner room, you will find a girl there. You have only 3 hours to complete your research work." The boy nodded & proceeded towards the room...

In the room,Soumya was doing some sketches & her hairs were falling on her forehead which made her disturbed. The boy entered the room & said," Hi.." Soumya was scared as she knew regarding the place and why guys came here. She moved backwards & while moving,she was about to fall by hitting with the desk, but fortunately on due time, the boy caught her & impressed by her beauty. Soumya shouted loudly to leave her & ran from there.

Just then, Nimmi entered after listening Somu's loud cry & found a boy inside her room. Nimmi yelled,"Who are you? What are you doing here? Why does Somu shout?" The boy replied,"Oh! Actually don't take me wrong aunty. I haven't come here for doing any insane activity. I am a research student and have come here for my research work. I have no intention to touch the girl. It's just that she is going to fall so I have just held her."

Nimmi thanked him for his helpfulness and could see truthfulness in his eyes. She asked,"What is your name?" The boy replied,"Harman." And then casually he asked Nimmi about the lifestyle of those ladies involved in prostitution. She replied,"Nobody wants to choose this path but in someway all are helpless & dejected by the society." Tears rolled down from her eyes.

Harman wiped her tears with his handkerchief & said,"Aunty don't cry. If my mother would have been alive then she must be of your age. So, I can't see your crying." After many years, Nimmi found a person who was respecting her like a mother not like any cheap & creepy creature. She was impressed & overwhelmed with Harman.

Just then Soumya entered in the room & found her mother was gossiping nicely to the new boy. Nimmi called Somu & introduced her with Harman. Harman asked for Soumya's forgiveness to touch her unintentionally without her permission. Soumya was spellbound with his attitude as never in her life somebody asked for her consent and opinion. Everybody looked at her with insane & dirty eyes. But Harman was definitely different. Soumya shook her hands with him and they became friends.

Time passed.. Gradually Harman came very close to Soumya and they were connected emotionally. Nimmi also treated Harman like her own son. Every time he deposited 5000 rupees for 3 hours to meet Nimmi & Soumya. Earlier he used to come here for research purpose but in the later point of time, he came here to spend time with them. He was very fond of Soumya & respected Nimmi a lot.

One fine day, Harman came there with pale face which wasn't unnoticed by Soumya. She asked him,"What is the matter Harman?" He said in a sad tone,"Today is my birthday & nobody is there to wish me."

She could see pain in his eyes & hugged him tightly to wish him. Harman said," I have never seen my mother. She has died just after giving birth to me. My father is a businessman but doesn't love me as he thinks that I am the cause of my mother's death." And he started crying like a baby. Soumya wiped his tears & consoled him.

Nimmi was listening to all these things from the corner of the room & said,"Don't cry beta!! We are with you. We will celebrate your birthday." Harman rushed towards Nimmi & hugged her tightly & said,"Today I am missing my mother a lot. Can I call you mom?"

Nimmi first hesitated but he convinced her,"Aunty you can call me beta then why can't I call you mumma?" Now Nimmi was speechless as she was already webbed by Harman's logic and allowed him to call her as mother.

That day Nimmi made a cake for him and while celebrating, Harman asked her about her past. Nimmi narrated,"My husband sold me here to get some money. Somu was born here only. She never saw her father & I protected her from all the evil eyes." Harman felt bad for Soumya & asked,"Can't you come out of this place? Will you stay here forever? Can't you leave this place?"

Nimmi lowered her gaze & said,"It's too late,Harman. Preeto won't allow us to leave from here as she has purchased me..." Till now, Soumya was listening all these talks silently but suddenly she grabbed his hand & pled,"Please save my mom! Harman, I don't want her to dance here & face the luring eyes of people."

Harman patted her back to calm down her. Just then Soumya ran towards the drawer & showed him some sketches. Harman asked,"What is this Soumya?" She said by showing the sketches to him,"I am facing essential tremor syndrome. I can never paint a good picture as a straight line also I can't draw.. Still to make my mother happy on her birthday, I have painted this. I know in no way this can be called as a picture but I just want to show you that I want my mother's happiness & you can only help us to get out of it." Nimmi was trying to control her tears & Harman vowed on that day to take them out of this castle.

Harman negotiated with Preeto to free Nimmi & Soumya in exchange of money. But Preeto demanded 10 lakhs in return. Harman was unable to pay this much huge amount & thought another ways to free them. Preeto could already sense Harman's intentions. So, she disallowed him to meet Nimmi & Soumya. Preeto also threatened Nimmi to kill Soumya if they tried to escape. Nimmi accepted Preeto's words as she didn't want to loose Somu. Days passed like this...

One night, Harman entered to that place through climbing the pipes & slowly woke up Soumya & Nimmi. Both of them were astonished at seeing him after so many days.. Harman slowly said,"It's time to go out from here..." Though Nimmi was scared but Harman successfully vacated Soumya out of that place through the window. But while climbing down, Nimmi's leg stuck in the pipe & she screamed in pain. By listening to the loud sound, Preeto woke up and found all of them trying to run away. She called her goons to stop them.

Harman fought with them vigorously but suddenly one man hit him on his head. Blood was oozing out of his head. Still he tried to fight but felt dizzy. Soumya in the mean time called police from his phone but police hadn't arrived yet. Preeto came there with revolver & said,"Nimmi, I have told you not to run from here. But you are trying to run away with the help of this boy. First I will kill this boy then I will make your daughter's life hell." And she smiled evilly & shot pointing towards Harman.

Nimmi in between pushed him & bullet hit in Nimmi's belly. She fell down on the spot. Just then police arrived & handcuffed all the goons including Preeto & took Soumya's statement & admitted Nimmi in hospital. Harman also stitched his wounds. Soumya was in miserable condition & cried loudly by keeping her head in his chest. Harman tried his best to console her but all his attempts were going in vain. Just then doctor arrived & said,"We have successfully taken out bullet from her belly. But she is still under supervision and risk isn't totally gone."

Soumya was pleading the doctor to save her mom at any cost. Doctor nodded & said," The patient wants to meet you." They both rushed inside the room & saw Nimmi was lying in bed like a statue. She called them by giving some indication by hands. Soumya & Harman were sitting besides her.. In a very low tone, Nimmi said," Harman! I know my life is short. I may die at any moment. You are the perfect partner for Soumya. Accept her in your life." By saying so, she handed over Somu's hand with Harman.

Harman in deep pain said,"Nothing will happen to you. I have already lost my mother. I don't want to lose you. You will be with us forever." But Nimmi again asked him to take care of Somu & just then doctor told them to come out as patient needed rest. Soumya was behaving like a lifeless statue & indifferent to all these things. Like she was feeling the ultimate pain for her mother. Harman tried a lot to make her speak or cry atleast but she was speechless. After much time, she said," I can't draw straight lines. Please today also the ECG mayn't show straight lines" & she worshipped god to make the line wavy like the way she painted. The night passed with chaos & sleeping was away from their eyes..

Their worship paid off & the doctor declared Nimmi as safe in the morning. They took good care of Nimmi & her health condition gradually improved. After Nimmi's recovery, Harman proposed Soumya in the hospital in front of all. All the doctors & nurses congratulated them & they married. Harman's dad didn't accept this relation. So, he left his home as his father never cared for him. Harman, Soumya & Nimmi lived happily.

Harman's research was published in newspaper. Due to his impressive work, the newspaper publication organised a felicitation ceremony for him. On the award receiving day, he touched the feet of Nimmi in front of all & took the award from her hand & said in stage," She is my mother. I have never seen the face of my biological mother but after meeting her, I have never felt the absence of a mother. I am alive because of her. All my credits go to her. When a child cries, she is worried but just after birth if the child doesn't cry then the person who is worried the most is called as mother. 'M'indful 'O'mnipotent 'T'ender 'H'uman being in 'E'ternal 'R'eality ... Put them all together & they spell MOTHER. A word that means the world to me..." All gave a big round of applause to Nimmi & Harman. Soumya was sitting on the front row & overwhelmed with joy. Harman came down from stage & held Soumya's hand. Nimmi hugged both of them & scene ended with their blissful faces...

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"There is no velvet so soft as a mother's lap,
no rose as lovely as her smile,
no path so flowery as that imprinted with her footsteps."

That's exactly a mother's love for her children!


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soul76 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved this Kash to the core what a beautiful felicitation to Nimmi's charcater. Loved Harman's resolve to make Soumy and Nimmi safe. Preeto again the villain, Harman's father what a cold hearted person seems like Maninder. Do continue writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aye Kashish rula diya yaar tune 😭
I'd have written a lengthier review but mera mental state nahi hai :(
But sach mein, maa jaisa pyar koi nahi karta.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul76

I loved this Kash to the core what a beautiful felicitation to Nimmi's charcater. Loved Harman's resolve to make Soumy and Nimmi safe. Preeto again the villain, Harman's father what a cold hearted person seems like Maninder. Do continue writing.



thanks a lot dear!!! it means a lot...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its wonderful dear. Must say, you have a poetic streak in you. You have beautifully penned down your thoughts and emotions for a mother. Reena mam deserve applauds for her work and all thanks to the makers of the show for giving us a beautiful character like nimmi. She is a perfect example of a mother and her love towards her daughter. Your OS is really a tribute to her in every sense. Do continue with your work. I would love to read your stories in future as well.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is one wonderful OS
i usually dont read OS FF much
but this one is amazing
the start how u introduced Nimmi
Nimmi harman somuya bonding
Soumya;s defect
everything is just perfect

also loved how u sketched preeto's character

good job
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashley.Tisdale

Aye Kashish rula diya yaar tune 😭
I'd have written a lengthier review but mera mental state nahi hai :(
But sach mein, maa jaisa pyar koi nahi karta.




aww!! sorry re.. tumhe rula Di... Handkerchief dun kya?? kyun k tum rogi to hume sizzling HaYa FF kaun dega!!! mother Is epitome of love, truly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reenatyzed

this is one wonderful OS

i usually dont read OS FF much
but this one is amazing
the start how u introduced Nimmi
Nimmi harman somuya bonding
Soumya;s defect
everything is just perfect

also loved how u sketched preeto's character

good job



thanks a lot dear! even if you don't read OS/FF, still you gave certain time to this OS which means a lot to me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow loved the way u sketeched nimmi harman soumya bonding nd preeto char
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siya2202

Its wonderful dear. Must say, you have a poetic streak in you. You have beautifully penned down your thoughts and emotions for a mother. Reena mam deserve applauds for her work and all thanks to the makers of the show for giving us a beautiful character like nimmi. She is a perfect example of a mother and her love towards her daughter. Your OS is really a tribute to her in every sense. Do continue with your work. I would love to read your stories in future as well.



Thanks a ton dear. Ya reena mam is that lovely source of river who dedicated her entire life for safeguard of her daughters just like river flows for betterment of human being without any self need...

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