Mother's love(OS dedicated to Reena Mam)

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ushasri
wow loved the way u sketeched nimmi harman soumya bonding nd preeto char

Thanks a lot

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

OMG 😲 Another awesome story by you 👏👏👏 Loved the bonding b/w Nimmi and Saumya and even Nimmi - Harman 😳😳😳

Oh so Nimmi's husband has sold her to prostitution and this happens in real life also where I have seen husbands selling off their wives for money Such creeps shouldn't be alive 😡😡 I loved how Saumya's world revolves around her mom and the way she wanted to gift her the painting that she has drawn for Nimmi's b'day was so cute and sweet 😳😳😳

I can understand Nimmi's concern as a mom that why she fears and worries so much for Saumya bcz being in such a trade your dignity and self respect is either always at stake or is lost and Nimmi never wanted such things to happen with her daughter ... WTH 🤣🤣🤣 Harman is a research student 😆😆 That was cute and funny 🤣🤣

Awww I just loved HaYa's first meeting and Harman's bonding with Nimmi - Saumya .. Poor Harman !! Even he is alone 😭😭😭 But I loved that escaping scene BUT the best scene for me was that scene where Saumya dint wanted the ECG to show a straight line ... Kudos to your brilliant mind dear that you personified the ECG thing with her drawing 👏👏

Awww all's well that ends well and I loved the happy ending but the cherry on cake was the last 3 lines on mothers 😳😳😳 Was that line written by you on velvet soft and footstep ?? It was so awesome ..

Loved the OS and your writing style 👏👏👏 Good work 😛

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Kashish_shine

aww!! sorry re.. tumhe rula Di... Handkerchief dun kya?? kyun k tum rogi to hume sizzling HaYa FF kaun dega!!! mother Is epitome of love, truly...

I agree tumko to rulana hai na 😆