One shot : This Too Shall Pass Away[Thank you Note-Pg 3]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow what a lovely os.
Maan is betrayed so many times that he don't believe anyone .
But with the help of geet and Arun he again started living .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edit - commenting after a long time

but, the OS is touching for the kind of experiences he has gone through earlier, specially when he was child and was waiting for his father..
and there is an irony towards the title words due to the uncertainty that the experiences have brought in him.

Every time when he faced the hurt, betrayal he recited the phrase - this too shall pass away, it gave him the hope for better future and courage to live through the difficult times..
but now when everything seems to be getting better in life, a fear, an uncertainty have captured his mind, resisting himself to grab the chance of happiness life has extended towards him

Geet's character is lively and so is Arun's.
she is bossy to an extent of creating a bit of irritation for people around her, but as you said the close ones can understand that it is done out of care, concern and belongingness.
and after some time Maan found a different reason for his irritation, that All-Ritu being with Geet..😆

the interactions between Maaneet were simple yet beautiful, I liked the kaththak dance and his reply to the brother-sister relation the most.
Petal, such a wonderful metaphor used for her while she was dancing.

despite the dilemma, hopefully, he would take the chance again the same way he allowed his heart to lose it to her..bas Geet ke ye bolane ki duri hai, "Oof ho!! chance lena hai to lo, nahi lena hai to mat lo", and he would grab it instantly ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a nice one...dear...a very different one...I don't know...don't u write regularly?...very different way of writing...depicting things in such playful&humorous way...but the seriousness never goes out...life's experience teaches everything...thank u ...keep on writing..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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helloo ji
sorry for the delay in comment
such a simple story with a unique touch to it...
i loved it how u showed the lead's whole life journey
his pain and loneliness is all we could feel when even after his heart lets him to take a chance with geet he isn't sure any more..

and geet and arun are just the next to door characters❤️

ab serious bate sie me rakhe tho i loved that teri biwi meri biwi wala line😉🤣
and both the boys calling geets boyfriend names.. bicara Season😆

nirma namak ka add😛

and not to forget geet bossing around them..

enjoyed reading it

do keep writing ji😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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maan have faith in u...n everything will b fine...

lovely story...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d epilogue...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heart touching beautiful rendition 👏 👏
Got transported back to GHSP days ⭐️
U r an amazing writer 👏
Good luck and God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A completely different one shot...beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi amazing OS! wonderfully written! Maan has been betrayed by his family n fiance! he is saved by Geet n Arun! they take care of him! Geet is a wonderful person! Maan afraid 2 trust again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os
felt bad 4 maan
want one more part or u can write a sequel plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It simple story with awesome writings style

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