Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Sakura dear..
Chapter 4 was classic...loved it..

Never expected story to go this way..it was a delightful surprise...but its you..anything magical can happen in sakura's land..

I simply adored sansku..he revealled ragini truth n swara took it nicely..not overreacted...n ragini very smartly gave them time to be alone..n it works..swara shared her feeling with sansku..n him being logical n wise handled the conversation amazingly..n outcome of that convo was their new friendship..although sansku has kept second option of divorce for swara's happiness..i know how much it must pained him..n to muster enough courage to keep this option for her..but he have faith in his love..that destiny will return his love back..

Beautifully penned ..dear..waiting for next..

Love
Talia

Talia Sweetie,

Thank you so much for being so excited about this and loving it to bits. You have no idea how happy it made me. This is how I wanted Sanskar and Ragini to play their cards, they are after all seasoned players right?

I will update soon.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
A wee li'l birdie (a peregrine, perhaps? 😈 😈) cheeped and tweeted that it might be wise to Res. 😉 And so the kangaroo bounds in to do so. (No, I haven't lost my marbles. 😆----you know exactly what I mean, I'm sure! 😉)

I know, (Says the lil' birdie hiding its blushing face under its wing😉) Welcome Kangaroo! Both of us don't have marbles to begin with😆

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: SmartSal
Lovely!❤️ Sorry for late commenting, but now my exams are going on.
Thanks for updating Vajra, now give ch.16 there and ch.5 here soon.
🤗Saloni.

HI Saloni,

First of all best of luck for your exams. Study hard dear and don't worry about comments😳

Thanks for finding this lovely.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

I think I finished catching up with replies on chapter 4, once again a big thank you for everyone who "Liked" the chapter!

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Chapter five updated. PMs will be a little late.

Love,

Sakura

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

res ..😛

Un res

Saku ..keeping it short ..only you can make readers fall in love with symptoms😉

so what are symptoms we are talking about ..swara missing her sasnkaar , gussa that he didnt msg or call her, recalling their moments😳 and running to MM kniwng sunny has flu .. swara is on right route ..Reminds me of a song in raju bangaya gentle man ..loveria hua😆

Swara saying she wanted to know about them to Sanskaar 😳 and lol laksh ..😆 such a fun moment it was .Some times naadani bhi kitni achi baat hain😆

Deadwood tho is in delusion

Thank you ..I needed this dose of swasan..it was a beautiful chapter😳

Love

Lucky

PS ; Beautiful song ..One permanent number in my playlist..Fits swasan so well😳

kaun sa mod aaya, zindgi ke safar me

bas gaya tu hi tu, ab to meri nazar me

dil ki har ek dhadkan, tujhko pehchanti hai

meri chahat hai ab kya, tu nahi janti hai

mai tuhje jan gayi, tujhko pehchan gai

phir bhi teri haan hai baki

Thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai baki

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

res for 5

Part unres (I seem to be specialising in this😭). Loved it (and that goes without saying it - how can I not love what you write).

Swara missing him but too egoistical to admit the same. And once she finds out Sanskaar is sick, she goes running to him - how can she not😉

BTW - we have to thank Lakshya for this good deed - all the more lovable since he is completely oblivious to what he has done😊

Deadwood - could you have him struck down by lightning😡 - please!

love

Nyna

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Aaaw... that was such a sweet romantic chapter.

I absolutely loved how Swara ran to Sanskar the moment she knew he was unwell.

Sigh. I'm a sucker for fluff. ☺️

Which is why I can't wait for you to write the next bit of their meeting. Please update soon.

Also, I really like your version of RagLak. Especially the conversations between them. I don't ship them much but your version is wonderful to read 😊

Lovely chapter Sakura. I had to 're rad the whole thing to get the real feel of it and I fell in love with this all over again.❤️

Lots of love

Nandini🤗

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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Saku

Finally!!! Today a day of surprises. First shruti and then you gave us much awaited updates. Saku everything was beautiful. Rain,the song, panipuri, sanskars eyes, swaras strands of hair,even the flu sounded beautiful in your amazing description.How can anybody resist falling in love after reading this? But I am surprised at myself for loving the ragini, lakshya scene cause I never liked them on screen. But the exchange between them was cute and even cuter was our lakshya who is always oblivious to his surroundings .

I am happy to see swara s restlessness, you gave us a cosmic connection also in between

Now we are literally hanging on the cliff. Come and rescue us soon

Lots of love, veena.

I missed something, the line on them and not us ...was the best!!!

Edited by blindassassin - 9 years ago