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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

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anu i would have died rofling 😆

do write more in this genre as well

Anokhu 🤗
No no I dont want you to die 😆😆 Hum sab ka kya hoga 😆😳😃

Im so glad you liked it !!!!! I am truly humbled !!! Really means a lot !


Sure I will try my best to write in this genre... 😆 ...

Thanks a lot again !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi lovely 2 parts. Very hilarious to read. My jaws are paining now with the controlled laugh as I read this in office during working hours and my boss sitting in the next room. My God how could only these 2 forget and the other 2 remember the date well? may be Keerthi pestered Shathrughan for gift (some girls have the habit of asking what gift they will get on their anniversary (wait a minute, there is an ad from LIC where the wife says the husband gifts her diamond on all anniversaries and should think of gifting something else 😆 ) And Sita would have been lecturing Ram about how important that day will be and how they should do some exclusively pooja etc. on that day. So the both would have got advance intimation about impending anniversary. Poor Bhaman didn't get a chance.

btw I thought they will get bland food like dalia or something instead of feast but they got spicy & stony food. How I wished these planned some counter plan to convince and compromise with their loved ones. Like Bharat painting some real beautiful mandovi's portrait while Lakshman could have carved some jewel box or something to please them in the time they got from getting up till lunch. real dumb guys these two are.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres
To elaborate one's own imagination before others quite swiftly,this is something I always found in you.
This was just so awesome.
I mean,look at the title itself.And the trick of putting words at their perfect places,yes,no one can say its your first attempt at comedy.
Shatrucasm😆
And please dont remind me of Bharat's Rakshashi painting🤣
I enjoyed that scene to the core.
Scared BhaMan,very well described🤣
Not to forget Mandavi's cool sasuma slapping Bharat.😆
Atlast,Pawan dev coming to their rescue.😆

Lovely job!


P.S-Keep your services this excellent to me:P
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi lovely 2 parts. Very hilarious to read. My jaws are paining now with the controlled laugh as I read this in office during working hours and my boss sitting in the next room. My God how could only these 2 forget and the other 2 remember the date well? may be Keerthi pestered Shathrughan for gift (some girls have the habit of asking what gift they will get on their anniversary (wait a minute, there is an ad from LIC where the wife says the husband gifts her diamond on all anniversaries and should think of gifting something else 😆 ) And Sita would have been lecturing Ram about how important that day will be and how they should do some exclusively pooja etc. on that day. So the both would have got advance intimation about impending anniversary. Poor Bhaman didn't get a chance.

btw I thought they will get bland food like dalia or something instead of feast but they got spicy & stony food. How I wished these planned some counter plan to convince and compromise with their loved ones. Like Bharat painting some real beautiful mandovi's portrait while Lakshman could have carved some jewel box or something to please them in the time they got from getting up till lunch. real dumb guys these two are.


Hello!! After such a long time 🤗

Thank you thank you so much for your detailed review and suggestions!! It really means a lot and I am humbled 😳

I hope your jaw is fine now and So is your Boss 😆
Exactly! If I were to right a precap to the day, I would have taken your ideas only 😆 thank you so much for making the time to write this and give me new ideas.. Really I am humbled with them..

And if time permits, I will write a next part to this where the two Bros will take a revenge 😆 as per your idea... :) thanks again!

Thanks again!!! Really means a lot!
P. S. Really they were dumb in the TS 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LakshMila

Unres

To elaborate one's own imagination before others quite swiftly,this is something I always found in you.
This was just so awesome.
I mean,look at the title itself.And the trick of putting words at their perfect places,yes,no one can say its your first attempt at comedy.
Shatrucasm😆
And please dont remind me of Bharat's Rakshashi painting🤣
I enjoyed that scene to the core.
Scared BhaMan,very well described🤣
Not to forget Mandavi's cool sasuma slapping Bharat.😆
Atlast,Pawan dev coming to their rescue.😆

Lovely job!


P.S-Keep your services this excellent to me:P

Yes I was expecting this 😆
The first line - You made me emotional, thank you Mili for giving me this chance 😊😳🤗
The title was just a sudden click of mine, and later I realized how sassy it could be 😆
I am glad that you enjoyed the OS! And the parts you mentioned I too had an awesome time writing 😃😳

Once again, it Is my first attempt guys 😆

And Really, thanks a lot... Your ideas are so good in itself that it doesn't really feel as a task to write them..:)
Thanks a lot dear!

Anu's OS services are always available 😎

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