TAAREY FS ' I'll STAND BY U FOREVER' ( Last part updated)

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CHAPTER - 1



It has been 4 years of their college completed... everyone has settled in there life... D3 team has open there own academy... now there academy is a well popular and famous... everyone knows about there academy... they are huge famous now... Sharon - Swayam , Nil- Simmi and Vicky- Neha are married... Amar - Rinni are getting married next month and Bharat - Vishakha are in relation now... where as Rey - Taani are engaged last month... Taani is helping her tauji in his buissness... she is working in Mumbai branch...



D3 team has gone to London... they are out of country from last 15 days as they have a event there... Taani is alone here... From last 10 days someone is stalking her... she is getting call and messages from that person... first she thought its a prank which is done by D3 members... as they usually do... she has not told about dis to anyone till now... as she know if she told them about this then they will leave everything and come back for her which she doesn't want... as she know hiw much this event means for them... its important for their future... so she thought not to tell anyone... but now its getting very much... as she gets gift and some notes wherever she goes... from last night she is Rey's number but its out of reach... as they are in flight... they are coming back... and they didn't told taani about dis... as rey wants to surprise her...


AT NIGHT


Taani is standing outside her office waiting for her car... as driver is late... its midnight now and she is scared becoz she is alone here... as all the staff is already left... she has some work so she was doing it... she is waiting for car when her cell start ringing... she gets scared looking at screen as its that stalker call... she is looks here there but found no one... when she answers the call the person says he is coming to get her... suddenly is looks someone coming towards her... she gets frightened and she runs from there...


She is running on deserted road looking shaken and frightened... she is crying bitterly...sweat is coming on her head... while running she calls rey...

Here rey and everyone is going towards home in rey's car... when rey cell ring...

Rey- hey jaan...

Taani( scared and crying...) - hello... rey.. helloo

Rey stops the car hearing her voice- jaan... kya hua...
Everyone looks at him
Taani- rey vo aadmi.. rey

Rey- jaan kon h ... kaha ho tum...

Taani- aap aa jao pls... mjhe bahut darr lag rha h... vo yahan aa gya rey

Rey- kon aa gya... kaha ho tum...

Taani- vo main... main

Rey- shhh... jaan shaant ho jao... aur mjhe yeh batao ki tum iss waqt kaha ho... main aa rha hun

Taani gives him the address... she is talking to him when her cell gets switch off...

Rey starts the car and zoom it for destination where taani is...

Taani is running when she bumped in someone... she is about to fall down when a pair of hand hold her from her waist... and pulls her towards himself... she is about pull back when she hear a voice

TAANI
She looks at him and sees its rey ... she hugs him tight as her life depend on it and start crying... she is shaking in fear... everyone is worried for her... wondering why she is so much scared...

Rey( holding her tight in his arms) - jaan... kya hua... tum itni raat ko yahan kya kr rhi ho... aur kon tha jo tmhe pareshan kr rha tha

Taani is crying in his arms not saying anything...

Rey pull her out of hug and cups her face... wipes her tears and says- tell me na jaan... kon tha

Taani- vo... vo aadmi... vo

Rey- haan jaan... bolo kon tha...

Taani is shivering in fear... tears are continuously flowing from her eyes... she us not able to say anything

Looking at her condition Sharon come and says- guyz hum ghar chalte h... fir baat krenge

Swayam- haan rey lets go home... then we will talk

Rey- par

Vicky- rey taani ki haalat dekh darr se kaap rhi h... vo iss condition mein nahi h ki kuch bhi bata paye...

Sharon- rey abhi hum ghar chalte h...

They left for swayam's home


SWAYAM'S HOME

Taani is sitting on sofa holding rey... she is not ready to leave him... as she is very scared... sharon get her some water

Rey- shhh jaan... bas ... chup ho jao... aise nahi rote na jaan

Taani- rey... rey vo aadmi... vo

Swayam- taani batao kya hua h... tum wahan kaise pahunchi... aur tum kisse darr k aise bhaag rhi thi...

Rey- aur kon tha jo tumhe pareshan kr rha tha... main usse nahi chodunga

Taani explain the whole matter... how she start getting gift wherever she goes...how that person was calling and sending messages to her from private number... then she narrates todays incident...

Rey and Swayam are fuming listening this while others are worried for her safety... but rey is angry on taani also becoz she hides all this from him... she is suffering from so many days but he was not aware of it... he is hating himself becoz when his love needs him he was not with her... to protect her...

Rey- how could u hide dis from me taani... hum riz baat krte the par tmne mjhe batana zaruri nahi smjha... infact u lied when i asked u saying tum mjhe miss kr rhi ho... y did u hide dammit

Sharon- calm down rey... vo already darri hui h

Taani- i m sorry rey... par aap sab ko pareshan nahi krna chahti thi... njhe laga koi mazaak kr rha h ... aur maun nahi chahti thi ki aap log meri wajah se yeh evebt chod aao

Swayam- taani tum aisa kaise soch skti hi... tum jaanti hi ki uss event se zyaada tym important ho... agar tum bata deti toh hum pehle aa jaate...

Taani- i know bhai... isliye toh nahi bataya tha... yeh event aap sab k liye kitna important tha...

Rey (cups her face) - tumse zyaada kych important nahi h mere liye... u r my life jaan... agar tmhe kuch ho jaata toh... socha kabhi mera kya hota

Taani hugs him and says while crying - i m sorry rey... please aap naraaz mat ho ... main darr gyi thi... vo... vo

Rey- shhh jaan... ab main aa gya hun na... ab sab theek kr dunga... okey...



It has been 3 days from that incident... rey never left taani alone... not only rey but everyone also... as they are worried for her... rey has called commissioner and told him everything... commissioner has assure them that they will find that person soon... but they all are worried for taani's safety... so they decided one if them will stay with her... Rey has shifted to shikhawat house as he doesn't want to leave taani alone... he is scared to loose her... as he loves her very much... can't live with out her... taani is working from home only as no one allowed her going to office

Today taani has to go office ... as there is an important meeting came which required her presence there ... so rey has gone with her... as he doesn't want her go alone... they came back from her office... taani left her room for fresh n up... while rey sat with his friends in living room... they all were talking when they hear taani shouting... so they run towards her room...

Taani is standing in her room shocked and scared looking at the walls... when everyone came... she runs towards rey and hug him... all were looking walls astonished... its written on wall

"I LOVE U TAANI" " I M BACK LOVE"

Taanii- vo... vo aa gaya rey... vo aa gaya... vo mjhe aapse dur kr dega

Rey - shhh jaan... kuch nahi hoga... main hun na... main aisa kuch nahi hone dunga

Sharon- lets go out guyz

They all take her outside... no one understand how dis all happen... as they all were there only... si how can some one came and write all dis... rey call comissioner and ask him to came there


AFTER SOMETIME


Comissioner came and rey take him to taani's room and show him wat that stalker done... after watching dis comissioner suggest them to shift some where else and he is arranging security for them... as this person can be dangerous... he can harm them also... after that commissioner leaves...

After commissioner leaves, Rey tells to swayam to shift in his house...

Rey - swayam tu, taani aur sharon mere sath mere ghar chal rhe ho...

Swayam- hum wahan kaise

Rey- swayam is waqt hume taani is safety k baare mein sochna chahiye... vo pagal aadmi yahan tak aa gya h... tu zyaada mat soch... sharon tum apni aur taani ki packing kr lo... hum aaj hi jayenge

Vicky- swayam hume bhi lagta h rey thik kh rha h... hume koi risk nahi lena chahiye...

Swayam agrees... after packing their luggage they left for rey's home...




to be continued...

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CHAPTER - 2



It has been a week swayam, sharon and taani has shifted to rey's house... rey has told to commissioner to arrange security in his house for taani's safety... as now he doesn't want any chance with taani's health... rey and everyone is now more alert now... they don't want any risk with taani...


It morning now, everyone is present in rey's house as today is Sunday... after having their breakfast everyone is settled in living room except taani... as she is upstairs in her room working in laptop about her office work... downstairs, everyone is settled and talking about their upcoming project... when they hear a bell... kaka open the door and commissioner came to them... seeing him everyone got up from their places and moves towards him...

Rey shakes his hand with them... after telling kaka to bring some coffee and snakes they all settle down...

Rey- uncle kuch pata chala uss aadmi ka...

Swayam- haan... kafi tym ho gya h... aur taani bhi kafi darri hui h

Sharon- uncle hum usse aise nahi dekh skte... zara si bhi aahat hoti toh vo darr jati h

Commissioner- main smjh skta hun... aap sab ko uski fikar h... zyaada pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi h ab... kyuki hume uss aadmi k baare pata chal gya h...

Vicky- ye toh achi baat h

Rey- kon h vo

Commissioner- vo ek pagal aadmi h... kafi complaints h uske baare mein... obssessive ho jaata h kissi bhi cheej ko lekr jo usse pasand aa jaati h

Rey and Swayam gets angry listening dis... but they control their anger as taani's safety is more important

Rey ask gritted his teeth- kon h vo uncle... uska naam kya h...

Commissioner- uska naam VIKRAM MEHRA h
They were talking when hear a sound of something crashing

Here taani has completed her work and thought to go downstairs to help kaka in lunch... she is coming downstairs when she hears a name of a person whom she thought to be dead... she remember her past from which she is running till now... she is shivering in fear...

Rey goes towards her when he sees her condition... she is standing there as a statue... tears are flowing from her eyes... she is latterly shivering... everyone is looking her worried

Rey shakes her and say- jaan...but
Taani is still standing there lifeless

Rey( says loudly) - TAANI

Taani came in senses and hug him tightly as her life depends on him... she says in breaking voice
Taani - vo... vo... vo maar gaya tha... vo zinda nahi h... yeh jhut bol rhe h... vo mar gaya the rey... vo mar gaya... vi wapas nahi aa skta...

Rey- taani... kon mar gaya... tum kiski baat kr rhi ho... kon nahi aa skta...

Swayam- haan taani tum kiski baat kr rhi ho... kon nahi aa skta

Taani- vo... VIKRAM MEHRA... vo mar gaya tha... vo zinda kaise ho skta h

She goes towards her brother... shaking his hands says- bhai vo mar gaya tha... vo zinda nahi ho skta...

Swayam- taani vo zinda h... tum kya bol rhi ho... hosh mein aao

Taani- nahi bhai vo mar mar gaya tha

Rey- jaan tum kya bol ho... uncle ne kaha vo hi h... aur vo zinda h... toh vo kaise mar skta h...

Taani ( shouts) - becoz I KILLED HIM... maine usse maar daala tha... i killed him bhai... i killed him... and fell on her knees crying

Everyone who is standing in room is shocked listening to taani...they can't believe taani had killed some one...

Rey came from shock and gathers taani in his arms...

Rey- shhh jaan... bas...chup ho jao... sab theek h jaan... kuch nahi hua h

Taani- vo... vo nahi aa skta... vo marr gya rey... vo marr gya

After listening rey voice everyone came to senses... they have tears in their eyes looking at taani's condition

Rinni- tumne maar daala... tum murderer ho...

Sharon- shut up rinni... tum usse kaise jaanti ho... ho skta h vo koi aur ho jiske baare mein tum baat kr rhi ho...

Taani- nahi bhabhi... vo Vikram hi h... vo pehle bhi aisa kr chuka h... par vo mar gaya tha... goli maari thi maine usse... nahi toh vo maar deta sbko

Commissioner uncle is watching all dis silently till now... after seeing all dis he says
Commissioner- aap sab uske upar aise mat khade rho... rey tum taani ko yahan sofe pe bathao... please koi paani lekr aao... taani tum shaant ho jao... ghabrane ki zarurat nahi h... kuch nahi hoga

Rey made her settle on sofa... after making her drinking water... they all settle down... after drinking water taani relax...

Commissioner- r u fine taani...

Taani nods her head

Commissioner- u want to talk about dis...

Taani start feeling scared... rey sit with her taking her in his arms making her relax...

Rey- shhh. Jaan... relax... ghabrane ki zarurat nahi h... uncle yahan humari help k liye aaye h

Swayam- haan taani... tum inhe sab kuch bata do... he will help us

Taani (crying) - maine usse jaan k nahi maara tha... vo... vo main darr gyi thi... toh goli chal gyi thi... maine jaan k kuch nahi kiya..please trust me maine jaan k usse goli nahi maari thi... vo bas chal gyi thi...

Rey- i know jaan... i trust u... infact we all trust u

Evryone- yes taani... we trust u

Commissioner- i know taani... tmne jaan k nahi kiya... tum usse kaise jaanti ho... aur yeh sab kaise shuru hua

Taani- vo... vo...

Rey- jaan tmhe darne ki zarurat nahi h... main hun tmhare sath..

Swayam- hum sab h tmhare sath taani... toh bina kissi tension k batao...

Taani gets relax after listening them and starts
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They all were crying after listening to taani... as they never thought that taani can bear all dis...

Rey and Swayam are fuming in anger... there is a complete silence which swayam breaks

Swayam- tmne mjhe kuch kyu nahi bataya... infact kisi ne kuch nahi bataya...

Taani- aap mumbai mein the... main aapko pareshan nahi krna chahti thi... isliye kuch nahi bataya... uss time aap kafi pareshan the apne college ko lekr toh aur pareshan nahi krna chahti thi... sorry bhai

Swayam hugs her and say- pagal ho gyi h... itna sab kuch ho gya aur main... yahan aane k baad bhi aaj tak kuch nahi kaha..

Taani- main vo sab dubara yaad nahi krna chahti thi bhai... vo bahut darawna part tha... vo bahut dangerous h... vo wapas aa gya... ab kya hoga

Before anyone could says they hear a voice
Kuch nahi hoga pari

Taani run and hugs him and start crying- vo wapas aa gya taauji... vo aa gya... vo mjhe aap sab se durr kr dega

Taauji- kuch nahi hoga pari... bharosa h na apne taauji par ... then he feel taani is not saying anything... she is standing still there...

He break the hug and say- taani... taani... but taani slept due to all the stress and crying...

Taauji- rey tum taani ko uske room mein le jao... vo thoda aaram kr legi... usse thodi der sone do... uske liye acha h

Rey scoop her in his arms... and take her to her room... make her lie on her bed and kiss on her head... then leaves from there...




to be continued...

hope u all will like it




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice & interesting start
Read both the part in one go
Taani is so scared
Loved to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb story yaar!
loved the update..
keep writing more..
update soon
Edited by mgvd - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its a continuation of last chapter... so enjoy...

CHAPTER - 3



Rey makes taani sleep on her bead and leaves from her...

Here downstairs everyone is settled on sofas... rey came and swayam ask him about taani

Swayam- taani theek h ab rey...

Rey- haan... vo so gyi h... i think uske liye theek h thodi der sona... kafi pareshan h soyegi toh theek go jayegi...

Swayam - papa... aapne bhi mjhe kuch nahi bataya... mana taani mjhe pareshan nahi krna chahti thi... par aap toh bata skte the na... kaisa bhai hun main meri behan itni takleef mein thi... aur mjhe pata hi nahi tha

Swayam's dad - aisa naahi h swayam... uss waqt haalat hi aise the... ki main tumhe bata nahi paya... taani ki condition bahut khrab thi... vo bahut darri hui thi... hum sab usse leke pareshaan the... mere dimag mein hi nahi aaya... uss waqt mere liye meri bachi ki salamti zaruri thi... bas...

Sharon - i know papa... hum sab bhi taani ko aise nahi dekh skte... kitni darri hui h vo...

Vicky- na bolti h... na hasnti h... bilkul chup ho gyi h...

Nil- bilkul hmari taani nahi lagti

Swayam's dad - main jaanta hun tum sab taani ko leke pareshaan ho... par mjhe darr h ki vo wapas ussi depration mein chali jaye... badi mushkil se usse uss depration se wapas llaya hun... main nahi chaahta ki vo wapas waisi ho jaye...

Rey- aap kya khna chahte ho uncle

Swayam's dad - vikram k jaane k baad taani ki condition aur kharaab ho gyi thi... vo zara si aahat sunti thi toh darr jaati thi... kisi ki bhi parchaayin dekh ke violent ho jaati thi...maanti hi nahi thi ki vikram marr gya... bas bolti rhti thi ki vo wapas aa jayega aur usse le jaayega... hum sab se usse dur kr dega...main usse uss condition mein nahi dekh paa rha tha... sote sote darr k uth jati thi... chilla k uthti thi... ki vo aagya ... uss le jaayega... doctors ne kaha ki vo depression mein jaa rhi h... aur agar aisa hi chalta rha toh we may loose her... bahut mushkil ho gya tha usse iss baat ka yakin dilana ki vikram marr gya... kya kuch nahi kiya usse iss baat ka yakin dilaane k liye... par vo uss vikram se itna darri hui thi... itne khauff mein thi ki maanna hi nahi chahti thi ki vo marr gya... bahut mushkil se maine usse iss baat ka yakin dilaya tha thi vikram marr gya... ab kabhi wapas nahi aayega... bahut mushkil se uss condition se bahar laaya tha... bahut mushkil se vi normal hui thi... parr darr tha uske dil mein... vikram naam se darti h vo... ab vo waps aa gya h... ab pata nahi kya hoga meri bachi ka... main usse wapas uss conditiin mein nahi dekh payunga... main usse wpas uss depression mein, uss darr k jeente huye nahi dekh paunga... 2 saal mein jaakr theek hui thi... vo darr gya tha uske dil se... ab firse...

Swayam- papa aap smbhalo apne aap ko... hum sab h na... hum usse depression mein nahi jaane denge...

Rey- haan uncle... main aapse waada krta hun ki main taani ko uss condition mein nahi jaane dunga... iss waqt usse hmari zarurat h... apki zarurat h... aap aise kamzor pad jaoge toh usse kon smbhalega

Commissioner is also there... so intrrupts...

Cimmisioner - Mr. Shikhawat... of u don't mind... kya main aapse kuch puch skta hun... main jaanta hun ki yeh sahi waqt nahi h... par yeh zaruri h... taani ki safety k liye...

Swayam's dad - puchiye... aap ko kya puchna h...

Commisioner- taani ne kaha ki vikram marr gya tha... usne usse goli maari thi... tih fir ab vi wapas kaise aa skta h ... aisa kuch h jo aap jaante h... aur taani nahi...kyuki agar aisa h toh aap hume bata dijiye... ho skta h hume uss vikram ko pakadne mein help mil jaye...

Swayam's dad - vo vikram zinda h ya nahi... yeh toh main nahi janta... kyuki main taani se jhut kaha tha kivo marr gya h... jab taani ne usse goli mari thi toh vo cliff se niche gir gya tha... pas bahut dhundne par uski body nahi mili thi... kafi tym tak police ne usse search kiya tha... par uska kuch pata nahi chala... aur taani... uski condition bhi bahut khrab thi toh maine usse kh dia ki vikram marr gya... police ka bhi yehi khna tha... kyuki jitni unchayi se vo gira tha uska zinda rhna bahut mushkil tha... toh police ne maan liya tha vo marr gya h... fir vo bhi taani ki life chala gya tha... itne saalon se humme se kisi ne uske baare nahi suna tha toh hume laga ki vo marr gya hoga... main nahi janta tha vo itne saalon baad wapas aa jayega...

He pause fir a minute... then say...

Agar vo zinda h toh uske baare mei uski behan janvi ko zarur pata hoga... kyuki vo hi thi jisne vikram ki liking taani k liye obsession mein badla tha... vo hi thi jisse pata tha vikram taani ko like krta h... aur ussi ne uss liking ko uska obsession bana dia...

Everyone - WHAT

Ret- par uncle... vo aisa kyu kragi... taani ne kaha tha ki unki dost thi...

Swayam- haan papa... vo aisa kyu kregi...

Swayam's dad - kyuki janvi taani se nafrat krti h... she hates taani... kyuki uska bhai jo ki taani ka buddy tha... vo janvi se zyaada taani se pyaar krta tha... uske liye possessive tha... koi taani ko hurt kre yeh usse bardash nahi tha... uski aankhon mein usse takleef dete the... jisne taani ko rulaya usse chodta nahi tha.. chahe vo koi bhi kyu na ho... aur jab vikram taani ko like krne laga usse barsht nahi hua... kyuki vo vikram se pyaar krti thi... usse laga taani vikram ko usse chin rhi h... jaise uske bhai ko chin lia... vo taani ko takleef pahunchana chahti thi... vo chahti thi ki uska bhai bas uske liye possessive rhe... taani zyaada important thi abhi k liye isliye vo taani ko hate krti thi... ussi ne kiya tha yeh sab... vikram k through taani ko hurt krna chahti thi... usse vikram k baare mein pata tha... usse pata tha ki vikram ko koi cheej pasand aa jati h toh vo usse leke obssesseive ho jaata h... usse paane k liye kuch bhi kr skta h... kisi bhi hadd tak jaa skta h... agar vo cheej uski nahi hui toh kisi ki nahi hogi... uss cheej ko hi barbaad kr deta tha... aur janvi ache se janti thi ki taani vikram ko pasand nahi krti... sirf isliyr bardasht krti h kyuki vo uska dost h... usne issi baat ka faida uthaya... hume ussi se hi puchna chahiye... vo iss waqt jodhpur k jail mein h...

Sharon - par taani ne toh hume bataya nahi iss baare mein

Swayam's dad - kyuki usse kuch pata nahi iss baare mein... taani ko kafi chot aayi thi vo usse under observation mein rkha tha 1 week k liye... tab yeh sab hua tha... uss accident k baad abhi coma mein chala gya... kyuki kafi blood loss hua tha usse... vikram ne uske sar par mara tha... adi ki maut ho gyi thi... doctors nahi bacha paye the usse... dono famalies dard mein thi apne bacho ko lekr... issi baat ka faida utha k janvi ne sbko taani k against kr dia... maine bahut koshish ki thi unhe smjhane ki par kuch nahi hua...taani k baak doston ne smjhsya tha par vo log taani ko zimedar maan rhe the... adi k parents aur abhi k parents taani ko hi kh rhe the ki agar vo nahi hoti toh yeh nahi hota... unka beta unke pass hota... uske baad jab taani thoda theek hone lagi... tab usne abhi aur adi se milne ko kaha... maine uss waqt usse smjha dia tha... aur vo smjh bhi gyi thi... main nahi chahta tha ko wahan jaaye... kyuki usse nahi pata tha adi ki death aur abhi k coma k baare mein... lekin jab vo theek ho gyi tab vo milne gyi... maine bhi nahi roka... mjhe laga ab sab theek hoga kyuki uss baat ko 2 saal ho gye the... par main galat tha... abhi ki maa ne taani ko abhi se milne nahi dia... kyuki abhi jab coma se bahar aaya tha tab usse kuch bhi yaad nahi tha... usse memory loss hua tha... aur uski maa nahi chahti thi ki taani fir abhi se mile... kyuki vo taani ko abhi ki halat ka zimedar manti h... uss din taani jab ghar aayi thi toh bahut royi thi... aur usne bhi khud ko hi zimdar maana upne doston ki halat ka... adi ki maut k liye aur abhi ki memory loss k liye... uske baakibdiston ne usse smnjhaya ki uski koi galti nahi thi... par taani nahi maani... yahan tak ki usne apne doston se milne se mana kr diya... unhe kaha ki vo usse dur rhe... kyuki agar vo uske saath rhenge toh vo bhi pareshaani mein pad jaayenge... maine usse smjhaya par vo nahi maani... vo wahan nahi rhna chahti thi... mumbai aana chahti thi... maine bhi usse nnahi roka... laga yaha rhegi toh shayad sab theek ho jayega... vo sab bhul jayegi.. un 2 saalon mein vo theek ho gyi thi... khush rhne lagi thi... pata nahi kyu... par main usse dekh kr khush tha... kitne time baad usse waise dekha tha... par fir sab badal gya jab vo apne doston se milne gyi... yahan aake wo theek ho rhi thi... khsh thi yaahan... aur main bhi khush tha apni bachi ko khush dekh kr... par ab

Sharon - ho skta h abhi ki memory wapas aa gyi ho... hum uski help le skte h... hain na

Comissioner - she is right... taani k frnz hmari help kr skte h vikram ko pakadne mein...

Swayam's dad - vo nahi krenege... kyuki taani ne unhe kasam di thi ki vo kabhi bhi usse nahi milenge... aur abhi... agar uski memory wapas aa gyi hoti toh vo yaahan taani se milne zarur aata... chahe kuch bhi ho jaye... koi bhi usse nahi rok pata taani se milne se... taani khud bhi nahi...

Rey - uncle hum try toh kr skte h... vo sab taani k frnz h... aur taani ko unki zarurat h abhi... mjhe lagta h vo log zarur manenge...

Swayam- haan papa hume ek baar toh try krna chahiye...

Swayam's dad - theek h main unhe inform kr deta hun...
They were talking when they hear taani shouting... they all ran towards her room...


WITH TAANI

Taani was sleeping in her bed... after some time...


Taani is running on deserted road... when she collides with a someone... she thinks dat person as rey and hugs him and saying while crying

Taani- mjhe chodke mat mat jao... vo aa gya... vo aa gya...

Person- I LOVE U TAANI...

Taani windend her eyes and push him... she is looking him in fear... she starts shivering... she is sobbing... she look around to see someone... but she is alone... sundenly a hand hold her hands and start draging her with him...

Taani- chodo mjhe vikram... mjhe jaane do... mjhe tmhare sath nahi aana...

Vikram- tum sirf meri ho... sirf meri... main tmhe kisi aur ka nahi hone dunga... agar kisi ne tmhe mjhse durr krne ki koshish ki toh main usse maar dunga... and start draging her with him

Taani- mjhe nahi jaana tmhare saath... main tmse pyaar nahi krti... main rey se pyaar krti hun...

Just than rey came there...

Rey - chod taani ko... nahi main tjhe nahi chidunga...

Vikram laugh and says - tu mjhe maarega... pulls his gun out and shoot rey

Rey falls on road lifeless... blood is comming out from his head...

Taani -REY

she wake up from her sleep and shout
REY... taani is sitting on her bed crying bitterly... and shouting for rey... she is looking for rey here and there...

Just then rey and everyone came... rey goes towards her bed...

Taani hugs him tight as he sat with her on bed... and start crying while saying...
Vo... vo aa gya rey... vo aa gya... mjhe aapse dur le jayega... vo maar dega... vo maar dega...

Rey ( cups her face ) - shhh... kuch nahi hoga jaan... main hun na... dekho sab h... vo kuch nahi kr payega...

Taani- vo maar dega... vo... usne adi ko maar diya... aapko bhi... vo acha nahi h... mjhe aapse dur nahi jaana...

Rey- koi tmhe mjhse dur nahi kr rha h jaan... dekho main yahin hun tmhare pass... bilkul theek... dekho... vo kuch nahi krega... bharosa h na mjhpe

Taani - pakka

Rey - pakka jaan and kiss on her forhead...




To be continued...

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Nice concept...
Updates were awesome...
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sorry... main kafi tym se bust thi isliye update nahi kr payi... so here next update...




CHAPTER - 4


AT REY'S LIVING ROOM

Everyone is sitting there waiting for swayam's dad as he has gone to talk to taani's friend... they all talking when they hear a bell... rey goes to open the door... swayam dad enter... they all settle there...

Swayam - kya hua papa... aapki baat hui taani k doston se...

Mr.Shikhawat - nahi... abhi India mein nahi h... aur maine uski family se baat krne ki koshish ki pr vo nahi maani... abhi ka number dene se mana kr dia... baki log kaha h mjhe nahi bta...

Rey- aise kaise kr skte h vo... main baat krta hun... how could they do fis to taani... dost h vo unki...

Swayam- shaant ho ja rey... iss waqt gussa nahi shaant ho kr sochne ka tym h...

Sharon - swayam sahi kh rhe h rey... tu shaant ho ja

Rey - kaise shaant ho jaun... ek pagal aadmi taani ki jaan k piche pada h... aur main kuch nahi kr skta...

Mr.Shikhawat - main samajh skta hun rey tum pr kya beet rhi h... par isme abhi ki galti nahi h kyuki usse aaj tak kuch yaad nahi aaya... uske parents nahi chahte ki vo taani k baare kuch jaane isliye unhone usse london bhej dia... maine commissioner se kaha h vo janvi se vikram k baare mein puch taach kr rhe h... ho skta h usse kch pata chal jaye...



After 1 week



Taani is working in kitchen making lunch for everyone... girls are helping her and boys are watching match... all are busy doing something when they hear a bell... kaka goes to open the gate...

Some people came in... A man came and start shouting taani's name

BABYDOL... BABYDOL... KAHA HO TUM

Taani came out the kitchen... run towards that person and hugs him tightly...

Person - babydol... i missed u

Taani starts crying while hugging him... everyone gets worried seeing dis...

Person - shhh... babydol... bas... aise nahi rote babydol... kuch nahi hoga... tera buddy aa gya na...

Taani - vo aa gya buddy... vo wapas aa gya... abhi vo wapas aa gya...

Abhi - vo kch nahi kr payega... main hun na... oss baar main usse nahi chodunga... bas tu pareshan mat ho... darne ki zarurat nahi h...

Chery - oho princess... relax yaar... itne saal baad hum mile h aur tum ho ki roye ja rhi ho...

Abhi - shut up chery...

Chery - ok Mr. Possessive

Taani - shut up chery shery...

Taani's friend - ooo

Taani - buddy (makes a cute puppy face)

Abhi - shut up everyone

Rinni - yeh log kon h taani

Taani - sorry main toh bhul hi gyi... yeh mere dost h...
Taani sabka intro krwati h... aur vo sab living room mein baith jate h... they all talk and have their food


AT NIGHT


Taani is sleeping in her room and others are sitting in living room talking about taani...


LIVING ROOM


Swayam - aapko taani k baare mein kisne bataya... papa ne apki family se baat ki thi pr

Abhi - i knw... main India mein nahi tha... jab mjhe hish aaya tab mjhe kuch yaad nahi tha ... kisine mjhe kuch nahi bataya... bas mjhe India se bhaar bhej dia... 15 din pehle mera accident hua tha aur mere sar pe chot lagi thi... waha mein 1 din tak rha jab mjhe hosh aaya tab yaad aa gya tha... fir main tabhi India wapas aa gya... aur in sab se contact kiya tab pta chal ki in saalon mein kya hua tha... fir angry young man se baat hui...

Sharon - angry young man kon

Abhi - vo...

Chery - swayam k papa

Abhi - shut up... sorry... vo kya h na main unhe bachpan se janta hun toh...

Swayam - its ok... fir kya hua

Abhi - fir tmhare papa se baat hui tab pata chal ki vo idiot wapas aa gya h... aur hum yahan aa gye... i m sorry guyz... yeh sab meri wajah se hua h... janvi meri cousin h aur meri wajah se vo vikram taani k piche pada... i m sorry...

Sharon - isme tmhari galti nahi h... saari galti uss vikram ki h...

Rey - sharon sahi kh rhi h... isme tumhari galti nahi h... ab bas uss pagal ko taani se dur krna h...

Just then they a shout

REY...

To be continued...


Next chapyer will be last chapter of this FS...

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awesome update
really loved this story yr
plz update soon
cant want to read moreee

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