A DIFFERENT LAKSHMILA OS : THE OTHER SIDE OF ME

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Resss

I want your Unres quickly 😆

You know why 😆

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mandy001
Exceptionally beautiful piece.
U described all scenes very nicely. Really enjoyed it.

Thank you so much Swati!! Really means a lot that you checked this out 😃😳

I'm glad you enjoyed the OS. Thanks again!! 😃

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: LakshmanMila..1
Hayee !!!!! Oh lord !!!!!! ❤️

Anu , this is just divine , divine and divine !!!!!!!!

I loved this OS of yours so much !!!!!! ❤️

As usual , i am stating my fav scenes , though i loved each line of it !!!!! 😆

From the beginning till the end , i was in dreamland , i was imagining Karan , Yukti , Ashish and Madirakshi !!!!! ❤️

You brought out the mother-son bond of Sita - Lakshman so well !!!! ❤️ Sita asking him to think of yourself too was so divine as my real Siya maa would also have said this to lakshman when he used to take care of her like a son. ❤️

Urmila telling about her pregnancy to lakshman was super cute !!! ❤️

And then the reaction of them seeing new born luv kush so ❤️ !!!!

Lakshman forgetting for a moment , that he was a husband , a prince , he is now only a father , u described his feelings so well, i was smiling with tear filled eyes , so good it was !!! ❤️ 😭

Lakshmila though didn't want their sons to go away but for their betterment as a good parent was !!! ❤️ 😭

The reunion of parent and sons was so sweet , Lakshman looking more younger than his son , idk , i couldn't able to control myself 😆 😆 !!!!!!!!

At last, u again made me cry !!!! 😭 😭 😭

Aise hi , i cried lot seeing karan yesterday but today again i can imagine iphim well in your this OS !!!! 😭 👏

Lakshman parityaag and sons weeping !!! 😭 😭 😭

Lakshman dialogue that his son were most precious to him after his bhaiya, bhabhi and urmila !!!! ❤️ 😭
I absolutely loved that they didn't leave his father alone during his death too 😭 😭 ❤️

Yes , they made him find a completely different side of him !!!! ❤️ 👍🏼

Brilliant OS !!!!! 👏 ⭐️ 😃

Btw , how did Sita died in your OS ?? 😕

Sumi I love you 🤗❤️

The very fact that you appreciate each and every work of mine really means a lot to me!!!!!! I really Mean it 😃😳😊

I'm glad you liked it! Also I wanted to keep it a surprise for you 😆

And the parts which you mentioned are also the ones I took a lot of time to right because I wanted them to be good 😆

Thank you so much dear. Just your very effort to review my stuff and take time out means a lot to me :)

Thanks again!

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Rati

@rati_pandya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

An...i have always told...youhave superb wiriting skills ...every emotion was perfectly wriiten...from urmila reveling her pregnancy to children at age of 4 to their coming back from gurukul to lakshman sacrifice...every thing was perfectly put up...do write more

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rati_pandya
Anu...i have always told...youhave superb wiriting skills ...every emotion was perfectly wriiten...from urmila reveling her pregnancy to children at age of 4 to their coming back from gurukul to lakshman sacrifice...every thing was perfectly put up...do write more

Rati !! 🤗 Thank you so so much !!!! I am really glad and happy that you checked out this OS and reviewed :) 😳

Its not my witting skills, its all your love :)

Thanks a lot !!! I am humbled that you every aspect of the OS :)

Means a lot 😳😳

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awesome... Beautiful... So different and imaginative,

Anu di it's always amazing to provide a happy angle to the epics! N such a long one... Really kudos to you!

Loved each n every part.

Initial Lakshman Siya scene, the impatient Lakshman outside the doctor's room... And the way you portrayed his eternal belief in Ram, as he tells his sons that you get great responsibilities...

Wud love to read more of such updates... Plz add me in ur pm list ;) :p

Love

Mohini

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Anu

@SenAnu

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ..Dharma_dasi..
Awesome... Beautiful... So different and imaginative,
Anu di it's always amazing to provide a happy angle to the epics! N such a long one... Really kudos to you!

Loved each n every part.
Initial Lakshman Siya scene, the impatient Lakshman outside the doctor's room... And the way you portrayed his eternal belief in Ram, as he tells his sons that you get great responsibilities...

Wud love to read more of such updates... Plz add me in ur pm list ;) :p

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Mohini

Mohini 😳!!! Hello and Thank you for checking this out and for giving me so much love 😃🤗!!!!

I am really humbled that you liked this OS 😃 And the fact that you took the time to review it so beautifully, thank you 😃😊❤️!!

Yes I wanted to write a happy OS as everyone was upset with the Show ending..

Thank you so so much !!!! Adding you to my PM list now !! 😃😳