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Chapter- 20

Boolywood Drama


Kabir went to Ayesha. Thankfully Ayesha went to drink water ALONE. Warna Suku is after her since morning.

Ka- Ayesha!

Ay- (smiles) Hi Kabir! Where were you?

Ka- Long story! Will you help me please?

Ay- I would be glad if I could help you in any way. But for what?

Ka- Actually... (told her the whole story)

Ay- You did really wrong.

Ka- (guilty face) I know and I am really sorry for that but as I shouted at her for no reason she is really angry with me.

Ay- It is said that if you accept your mistake and are ready to repent it then you are no more a wrong doer. So I will help you. Tell me what should I do?

Kabir told her his plan of manaoing Nisha rather his Bollywood style.

Ay- But Kabir we would need help.

Ka- (idea struck him) Viraj! Viraj will help us. You wait here I will talk to him.

NEAR Viraj (a few minutes later)

Vi- No way!

Ka- Please na yr Viraj! I did a mistake and I really apologise for that.

Vi -Do you even know Kabir how hurt she was? There were tears in her eyes. I have known her since our childhood days and I have always found her tough and strong in difficult situations. But I have seen tears in her eyes for such a small thing for the very first time. This means she is really hurt Kabir. She is strong. She won't ever tell anyone that she is hurt but would cry inside. She is angry from outside just because she wants to cover her hurt face. And you want me to help you?

Ka- (really feels guilty) I know Viraj I was at fault. But trust me I didn't mean to hurt her that way. I was really frustrated because of the work and that's what made me shout at her without even listening to her. But I really want to apologise to her. Please help me. I swear I won't make your bestie cry ever in her entire life especially because of me. Please!

Vi- Okay! Call Suku also.

Ka- He won't help me!

Vi- He would. (smiles widely looking at Ayesha who was working with Suku)

Kabir understood what Viraj meant. He smiled looking at him. they went to Sesha (Suku & Ayesha).

Ka- (gestures Ayesha to talk to Suku) Hi Suku!

Su- (without looking at him) Kaam bol!

Ka- (narrates him the whole incident & the plan) Please help me!

Su- (really angry, holds his collar, mocks him) Please help me! (angry) How dare you hurt her this much? She is the apple of my eye!

Ka- (guilty and confused) But apple of my eye usually moms use karti hain right?

Su- Shut up!

Vi- Suku leave him! He is feeling guilty and really wants to apologise.

Su- (leaves his collar) But Viraj isne...

Ay- Suku! He is really guilty for what he did. And everyone deserves forgiveness if he is really guilty. That is why I am supporting him. please Suku!

Su- Okay!

They smiled except for Suku.

BEGINNNING OF THE PLAN (BOLLYWOOD DRAMA)

Viraj went and asked her to sit on the chair they had set up.

Kabir played a song and started dancing on the beats with the trio.

One, two, three!

Kabir took the lead.

I am a fool, I am a fool
I am a fool fool fool!

He took some flowers and hit them on his forehead. Nisha got irritated.

You big heart, you big heart
You got very big heart!

He made heart with his fingers first small then big with his hands and then the biggest along with the trio by joining their hands in a heart shape.

I come near, I come near
I come near near near

Nisha got irritated and was walking away. Kabir went after her.
You go far, you go far
You go very very far

She went away still and started doing other works.

Arey thanda rakh kaleja
Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja
Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free

Viraj went near her and tried to explain her with the lyrics.

One, two, three!

Nisha didn't pay heed. So Viraj turned to them and counted. Nisha also turned.
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya

Kabir started doing sit ups and dance. And the others were doing as if feeling pity for him.
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya

Suku went near him and acted as if going to kill him.
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry

Kabir made a smile using his fingers.
Bache ki loge jaan kya

He acted as if irritated because she is not listening. Nisha saw them and somewhere her anger was fading away but that was not enough.

I know you love me and You know I love ya
Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya

Ayesha went near her and acted as if asking her to forgive Kabir.
I want a big big smile and
I want it only only now

Kabir gave an adamant smile and a determined look.

Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav

Kabir put his hand on his chest and then on his face showing that she was okay form inside but was doing nakhras on the front.

Aise kaai ko atka
Tere ghar ka jhadu katka
Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!

Kabir took a broom and a duppata and swept the floor like a Kanta bai with the duppata on his head.

One, two, three!
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya

He threw the dupatta and started jumping along with the others by holding their ears.
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bachche ki loge jaan kya

Kabir acted as if he was going to give himself a Faansi with his hands.
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bachche ki loge jaan kya?

The trio asked her to smile and then pointed at Kabir who made a pout and also held his ears. They started swaying on the beats by manaoing Nisha.

Final warning, final warning,
Don't you break my heart

Kabir took a light which was to be attached on the top and placed it on his hands showing final warning.
Automatic guilty feeling
One time over smart

He left the light and showed his finger to say that he did a mistake only once.

See, see, see can't you see see see
Kitne deep deep deep mere dil ke jazbaat

He used his fingers and broaden his eyes. And then showed his heart.
Hai kaai ko naaraaz
Karle maandavli maharaj
Hum sab aaj ye teri khaaj khuja de free

Suku tried to manao her.

One, two, three!
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Pakde hum dono kaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry!
Bache ki loge jaan kya
Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya
Sorry Sorry Sorry
Bache ki loge jaan kya?

They all danced in the same way. At the end Kabir went in front of her with a sad mask on his face and a sorry placard. Viraj, Suku and Ayesha looked at her with hope filled eyes.

Ni- Tujhe lagta hai main tujhe itni aasaani se maaf kar dungi for the big mistake you did?

Ka- (looks down) No!

Ni- And still you did this drama just to manao me?

Ka- (still looking down) Yes!

Ni- Do you expect me to forgive you?

Ka- No!

Ni- Do you want me to forgive you?

Ka- Yes!

Ni- Do you really feel guilty and for what you did?

Ka- yes!

Ni- Do you really feel that you were actually wrong?

Ka- Yes!

Ni- Tu sahi mein sorry bol raha hai? I mean do you really feel what you are saying?

Ka- Yes!

Ni- Toh fir neeche kya dekh raha hai? Jaa maaf kiya!

Ka- Yes (realized what she said) What?!

Ni- Haan! I forgive you.

Ka- (surprised, excited) What?! I mean you really forgave me? I just can't believe it. Thanks Nisha! (hugs her unknowingly because of the excitement)

Everyone is shocked including Nisha except for Kabir who was really excited. Nisha was feeling like she should hug him but her brain stopped her because she was no one to hug him. They aren't the two friends. But she understood his excitement.

Ni- (didn't hug him back) Ummm... Kabir?

Kabir realized what he did. He looked down feeling embarrassed.

Su- (monologue) Iski toh main! Meri behen ki jhappi le raha hai! Sirf maaf hi kiya hai Nisha ne. ismein kya itna excited ho raha hai! Isko chilla bhi nahi sakta. Wada jo kiya hai. Phir bhi Suku style mein band bajani padegi.

Ni- (to lighten the mood) Par ek shart pe!

Ka- What?

Ni- You have to give me a treat of... (thinks a bit) Ice creams for a week, continuously. Are you ready for it?

Ka- (smiles widely) No problem! Always ready. Ever ready!

Vi- (monologue) Iska kaam toh ban gaya!

Ni- (smiles) Chal theek hai! (sternly ) Not lets get back to work. We are not even near the finish line yet.

Ka- (acts confused) Finish line? Hum race karenge?

Ni- (face palmed) Kabir I was using an analogy.

Ka- Tu seedhe bol deti toh mujhe samajh Aa jata na! (rubs the back of his head)

Ni- (monologue) Jaan bujh ke karta hai ye sab taaki mood lighten up ho jaaye. Bahut bada namuna hai ye. Isse toh museum mein rakhna chahiye.

They do their work then they had their lunch and again started with their work. It was evening now. Nisha got a call.

Ni- WHAT?????????

Mom this is not done.

But why?

Okay!

She hanged the call frustrated. All of the group members went to her.

Ka- What happened?

Ni- Mom told that some guests are telling that they have to return back soon and those guests are our close relatives. So mom talked to Vasu aunty and came to know that they are also having the same problem. Moreover Arjun uncle and jiju have got a really important work abroad and they will have to leave within 4 days. So we are not going according to the muhurat and the wedding is 3 days later. Therefore the sagai function will be amongst the families at home and some of the guests who have arrived.

Ka- But why does dad have to care so much about a small loss?

Ni- They told that the loss would be really big and moreover the person is very resourceful so he has told that if there would be any problem with the order then he would trouble them. Though uncle wanted to say no but...

Ka- (cuts her off) But his principles say that Die but never let the word die. (irritated) What is this yr? I have told them that they won't do any work till the wedding is done.

Vi- It's okay Kabir! Uncle won't have taken such a big step if it wasn't really important. Let us understand his work and respect his descision. We should go back.

Ni- The sagai function will start within an hour. We need to reach home soon.

PRECAP- SOCHA NAHI THA AISA KUCH HO JAYEGA!

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Posted: 8 years ago
guys i am staying really busy so cannot send PMs to every individual. If someone would do it for me then it would be really great.
And I am giving long updates as well because I have to complete it anyhow by 6th. Sorry i f i am troubling you all.
And also I am not able to reply to every individual right now.

Would reply very soon. Sorry guys. And thanks to all of you for liking the updates and for your comments. I have read everyone's comments but really cant reply right now. SORRY!!😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update yaar...👏
RajBir convo was nice...it showed how well viraj understood his childhood friend and how much Nisha who is very strong was hurt bcoz of Kabir's behaviour...
and Sukku ko patane ke liye Ayesha hi kaafi hai😆
and finally the bollywood style manaoing of Nisha was just soo cute...😳
i was imagining the scenes ... just think Kabir doing those things...holding ears and all wud be soo cute😳
and Nisha ne Kabir ko maaf kar diya😆
bechara Kabir itni si baat ke liye itna excited tha ki sab ke saamne use hug kiya...😆
loved sukku's dialogue...sirf maaf hi kiya hai itni excited hone ki kya baat hai...😆agar propose ki hoti to Kabir faint hi ho jaata🤣
ab sirf 3 din mein shaadi😲
waiting for next update😆
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Chapter-21

Socha Nahi Tha Aisa Kuch Ho Jayega (Trust me maine bhi nahi socha tha😆😆)

Ka- Okay! You guys go I will complete some work and come.

Ni- I will stay with you. Even I have some work.

Ka- There is no need Nisha. Tell me the work. I will do it for you.

Ni- haven't you heard uncle principle properly Die but don't let the word die. I will stay here.

Ka- Arey tum ladkiyon ko bahut time lagta hai ready hone mein. You better go. Otherwise the sagai would be delayed because of you.

Ni- Just shut up! (to the others) You all better go!

They didn't argue because they knew they won't win over her words. They left leaving Nisha and Kabir alone because the manager also left along with his labor as their shift was over.

Nisha climbed on the ladder again to complete some work while Kabir got busy in his work because Nisha asked him strictly not to interfere in her work.

Nisha was climbing down. She managed to get down to the last third step but due to sudden imbalance she slipped and fell down and hit her back.

Ni- (In pain) Aah!

Kabir ran to her.

Ka- (reaches to her and sits down, panics) What happened? Kaise giri? Where are you hurt? Tell me.

Ni- I have hurt my leg very bad it seems. I think there is a sprain.

Ka- (helps her in making her stand but she can't) what happened Nisha?

Ni- I am not able to stand. It is paining very badly.

Kabir picked her up.

Ni- (astonished) Hey!

Ka- Shut up! Let me take you to the sofa there.

Ni- But...

Kabir gave her a death stare which clearly indicated her to shut up. He put her on a sofa which was kept for the guests. He started tending her leg with utmost care. Nisha smiled looking at his caring nature.

Ka- (annoyed, rather caring) Tujhe dekhkar nahi ho sakta hia kuch? Look what you have done! This is a good sprain. It would be paining too much. (looks at her leg) Akal nahi hai tujhmein. You could have called me. look how painful it is.

Ni- (trying to calm him down) Kabir its okay...

Ka- (cuts her in between) What is okay? Tell me what is okay Nisha? Look at it. It is swelled up! You only wanted to be the superwoman. (mocking her) Kabir don't interfere in my work. You do yours and I will do mine. (annoyed) Now see what you have done!

Ni- (acted as if crying like a small kid) You always shout at me! You promised that you won't shout at me but you broke your promise. In your anger you didn't even see that I have also hurt my forehead.

Kabir instantly saw her forehead. He went near her but she turned the other side.

Ka- (holding his ears) Accha baba I am sorry! Please forgive me. I won't shout at you. Paaka wala promise.

Ni- (turned to him) Pinky promise?

Ka- (smiled at her childlike behavior) Pinky promise!

Ni- okay! (showed him the place where she has hurt her forehead)

Kabir started tending it. it wasn't much but he took care of it as if it was the deepest wound one can ever get. He blew air on her forehead. She closed her eyes. He smiled looking at his effect on her. They were really close. He started staring her. She opened her eyes and found him staring at her. Soon they got lost in each other. There was something attracting them towards each other. He didn't know when he started staring at her lips.

Wait! Instead of shouting at him was she blushing? He dint think much about that. He started closing the distance between their lips. Nisha could feel his breath on her face. She closed her eyes blushing. He closed the distance. They started kissing. Nisha too responded after some time. It was a passionate one. After some time they broke because of lack of oxygen. They joined their foreheads close to each other. They started staring at each other. They were moving in the moment. Nisha was blushing and so was Kabir but Nisha turned like a red tomato. None of them knew the reason. But they did not regret it. They were feeling happy. They didn't know why.

Then the Kabab Mein Haddi phone rang. It broke their trance. They parted away and started looking here and there. Kabir took out his phone and went away to talk.

Nisha and Kabir were feeling embarrassed. Kabir talked and then started jumping like a maniac out of excitement. Nisha was confused as for what he had heard on the phone. He came to Nisha and hugged her in excitement and broke the hug soon. Not because of realization but because of excitement.

Ni- Ab kya hua langoor?

Ka- Arre meri GF Aa rahi hai! She would be here any moment. I mean she would home any moment.

Ni- (monologue) Uss manhoos ke liye itna khush. Aur iss chewing gum ke wrapper ko toh dekho. Aisa lag raha hai jaise iski lottery lag gayi hai! Isko toh main maar hi daaloon. Uss chudail ne hamara moment kharaab kiya hai. Chodungi nahi usse main. Wait! Moment? Kabir aur mera! What am I thinkning. Am I getting J? no! no chance! I hate him and will always. Nahi yr hate nahi! Uff! Leave it.

Ni- (fake smile) Good! Let us go home.

Ka- (wide smile) yes we should. Can't wait to meet her!

Ni- (gets up, annoyed) Lets go!

She started limping and walking.

Ka (to himself) abhi toh chal bhi nahi paa rahi thi aura b daudh rahi hai! Itna kya gussa ho rahi hai? Abhi in the recent past maine koi kaand bhi nahi kiya hai. Wait! Is she annoyed because of what we had! (guilty) I have to apologise to her.

They went and sat in the car. Nisha's scooter was taken by Viraj. Hey didn't talk at all. Kabir dropped her at her home and then went to his home. Soon Kartik and family came along with Kabir's GF and her parents. Laxmi and Ramesh greeted them. They were introduced to Kabir's GF and her parents by ArSu. Kartik was wearing an orange sherwani and skin leggings. Kabir was wearing a blur sherwani and skin color leggings with a skin color duppata around his neck. He was looking totally handsome with his hair swaying with the breeze. He walked in along with the other. Kabir's GF is really possessive about him. they walked inside hand in hand. His eyes were searching for Nisha. Everyone was there except for Nisha and Kirti.

V- Laxmi call Kirti!

Laxmi called Nisha and Kirti. Nisha came out with Kirti. Kirti was wearing a beautiful lehenga with the same color as was Kartik's. Nisha was wearing a blue lehenga with minimal makeup. She wore a simple pendant on her neck and a very simple blue bracelet on her hands. She had the same design earrings. Kabir was mesmerized seeing her. Kirti and Kartik came and sat together. Nisha found Kabir staring her. She smiled. Oh god! her smiel was divine. It drove Kabir crazy.

Va- before we start with the sagai we would like to introduce someone. (points at Kabir's GF's parents.) She is Shivani Malhotra, my sister, and he is my jiju, Manish Malhotra. (pointing at Kabir's GF) And this is our cutie Sarah Malhotra.

Sa- Kabir's GF!

Sarah was a 5 year old girl. Sarah came to know about BF & HF when she was 4 by her naughty friend. She didn't know much about it. but she thought that if a girl loves a guy he is her BF and she is her GF. No matter of the age. So she considered her loving Kabir brother to be her BF because she loved him and he loved her too. She was his favorite sister.

Nisha smiled at her stupidity.

Ni- Hi! (bent down to Sarah's height, cute voice) I am Nisha, Kirt's sister. (she forwarded her hands for a handshake)

Sa- (shaked her hands with hers) I am Sarah Malhotra, Kabir bhaiya's GF.

Ni- (cutely) Oh! Kabir's GF! He talks too much about you.

Sa- He loves me too much that is why he is my BF.

Ni- Oh! Glad to met you Kabir's GF. You are really fit for him.

Sarah smiled. Everyone giggled at their conversation. The sagai took place where Kabir was staring at her for the whole time. He really loved her this new roop. She was blushing whenever she saw him staring at her.

Everyone was giggling when Nisha went to bring the dinner. Kabir was about to go behind her when he saw Viraj entering the kitchen.

IN THE KITCHEN

Vi- Nisha what happened to you? You are troubled with something it seems.

Ni- (ignoring eye contact) Nothing Viraj!

Vi- Tell me!

Nisha lost from him every time when she knew he was right. She narrated him the whole incident that took place in the venue including the call and her thoughts.

Vi- You did what?

Ni- Don't shout! We kissed.

Vi- And you don't regret it?

Ni- I don't think so!

Vi- Does he?

Ni- I am not sure about it.

Vi- You love him.

Ni- Are you mad?

Vi- No! but you do.

Ni- no!

Vi- Don't you feel butterflies in your stomach when he comes near you.

Ni- Sometimes!

Vi- You don't feel shy when stares at you?

Ni- Sometimes!

Vi- Don't you feel bad or upset or angry whenever he is with some other girl?

Ni- I do!

Vi- Don't you feel bad when he hurts you?

Ni- Obviously!

Vi- You love him!

Ni- I don't!

Vi- You do!

Ni- you have gone insane.

Vi- You will go crazy for him soon.

Ni- No chance!

Vi- You love him!

Ni- Not even in my wildest dreams.

Vi- Then go to hell! (he goes from there frustrated)

Kabir saw him coming out but they took a lot of time in the kitchen. He felt really bad rather J!

PRECAP- I HATE YOU LIKE I... (None of them knows what follows)😉

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Awesome updates 👏
Nisha manaofie in Bollywood style is awesome 👍🏼 really enjoyed it...
nibir kissed 😲 itni jaldi omg and without confession 😆 that's why story title is our is different 😆
Loved niraj convo 👍🏼
J Nibir 😆
Loved both update... Continue soon..
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Awesome the Bollywood style and next part to super awesome☺️... Maine b nai soacha tha ye🤣 waiting for the next part ... continue soon😉
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

🤣I was giggling throughout the update yaar really really good it was👏👏
News channel pe ayega this much serious ROFL🤣
Mujhe laga tha Nisha giregi ladder se but you wrote not to expect that😆😆
And God is always great😉😉
Conversation with God is superb
Kabir in Bollywood style next waiting for it😃
Continue soon😳


Thanks Neeru. Glad u like it. Itna serious tha!!!!!!!!🤢😆 Yes even i thought of writing some that of thing like Nisha falling and Kabir catching but i found it a bit common and i have to make the story different so... 😉
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angelanju

it was soo cute...😳

kabir manaofying viraj...bhai ban gayi ab to...😆
shukr hai nisha ne use bhai nhi banayi ab tak🤣
ab kabir ka bollywood style bhi dekhega...😉
god ji... tussi great ho😆


Thanks Anju. Glad you liked it. Kabir kisiko kuch bhi bana sakta hai aur nisha bhi but dono bhai behen nahi benege😆😆. Thanks a lot again.
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

so good amazing dear


Thanks a lot Niha! Glad u liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mkjr

loved it post next part soon


Thanks mate! Glad u liked it.

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