Ek Phool Do Maali - A Raminirmala OS

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Hola peeps!! How are you all? Hope you all had a rocking diwali. Why these looks? Don't remember me? Koi Na read my OS ..yaad aa hi jayega🤣
Jali batti? 😆
Okay so here is a Raminirmala OS 😆
Dedicated to My Malik@SexyMalhotra aka Zo (Zoya) and My Darling @AfsanaPyarKa aka Resh (Reshma) I love you both ❤️
It's only for fun no offence meant.
Happy reading!! Don't forget to keep chappals with you. Who knows you might need them 😆
Enough of my bakwas . Here you go...

Ek Phool Do Maali




Hello guys !! Remember me ? No. How can you forget your favourite daal? *Makes sad face* Okay okay no need of giving me those psychokiller looks. I know you are not a very big fan of me. I don't blame you all.
"Had se jyada kuch bhi acha nahi hota. Daal bhi nahi."
What? Did I crack a joke? Why are you all laughing? *Frowns*
Today I'm bored . Yeah I do get bored sometimes *rolls eyes*
Let's start with Malhotra Chronicles . There's lot of romance brewing in Malhotra Mansion *winks*


Never ending celebrations rocked Malhotra Mansion as the two ladies who were the life of this house were back. Suman Shravan Malhotra and Nirmala Ramnath Malhotra.
Everyone was happy except the two who were none other than Kamini and Ramnath.

Kamini was worried that with Nirmala back in MM her Bhaisaab won't dance on her tunes.
Whereas Ramanth was sad that he won't be able to give his undivided attention to Kamini.

BGM * Ek taraf ishq hai tanha tanha
Ek taraf husn hai ruswa ruswa
Dono bebas huye hain kuchh aise
Kare toh kise kare ham shikwa


Wait why are you yawning? That's rude *annoyed*
My story isn't that boring or were you all waiting for Shraman story?
Oh come on!! Trying something new won't kill you . Love triangles are far more interesting than usual love stories ..isn't it?
Now that your interest is back . Let's continue with the story *grins*
And no more interruptions. I hate them *warning look*


Nirmala was hit by a wave of nostalgia as she entered the kitchen . She enjoyed cooking. Moreover she loved the smile on the faces of her husband and son at the dining table. It had been 11 years since she stepped inside this kitchen . Today she would cook something which was favorite of the father and son duo...DAAL aka Me
*Pops collar*
One can never forget his/her love how hard he/she tries.
She was determined to get back her love

BGM*Tumhe apna banane ki kasam
Khayi hai khayi hai*


Kamini was getting ready for a kitty party. She wore a dark blue saree with silver border. Bhaisaab would love it . She still remembered how he couldn't take his eyes off her at the engagement ceremony of pushkar. Thinking of the day she blushed .
Humming a song she picked her purse to leave when something irritated her olfactory senses .
"Kitni bar kaha hai Bahadur se tadka zara aram se lagaya kar. Par nahi kisi ko meri sunni hi nahi"
She decided to give him an earful but instead was surprised to find Nirmala cooking .

"Arey Didi aap ye sab kyun kar rahi hain? Bahadur bana deta. " She said in her sickly sweet voice

"Bahut din bad Ram ke liye kuch bana rahi hoon. Anyway tumhe kuch chahiye kya?" Nirmala asked smiling

Hearing Ram from her mouth that too with full HAQ made her insides churn.

"Ye to daal bana rahi. Mujhe to bas batein banana ata hai. Soch kamini soch kuch.
Han coffee...coffee banati hu. "

"Kya hua kamini kaha kho gayi? Maine pucha kuch chahiye?" Nirmala asked

"Han coffee banani thi. Bhaisaab ke liye. Unhe mere hath ki coffee bahut pasand hai" Replied kamini with a smile.

So guys did you...hey who's snoring there in the right corner? *Taps on shoulder*
Wakeup!! I swear if I find anyone sleeping no more stories . *Stern look*
Did I hear a sorry? It's okay I've a very big HEART. But the size of my heart is flexible so be careful next time . Every time an apology won't be accepted .
So where were we before I found princess Aurora ?


It was Sunday so no office , Ramnath decided to watch a movie . Every one deserves a holiday.
He flipped through the channels and started watching Sajan Chale Sasural starring Govinda , Tabbu and Karishma. A scene where govinda fooled his wives at the temple played .

Nirmala and kamini entered the living room with lunch served in platter and a coffee mug respectively .
"Ram"
"Bhaisaab"
"Ye kya dekh rahe aap?" Both of them said in unison
Ramnath looked at them like a child caught stealing candy
He changed the channel and Gharwali Baharwali now played .
Both of them shot him a deadly glare . He tried to change the channel but somehow the remote won't work. Frustrated he switched off the TV.

"Ram apki favorite DAAL"
"Bhaisaab apki favorite Coffee"
Again in unison. They made faces and then looked away

Ramnath was confused what to have . One was made by his former love and other by his current one. He couldn't disappoint either of them.

*BGM Kya kare kya na kare ye kaisi mushkil haye
Koi to bata de iska hal O mere Bhai*


He took the ME in one hand and coffee mug in the other .
When asked why this weird combination? He replied smiling that sweet and salty is the best combination. The ladies left from there satisfied by his explanation .
He looked at ME and then at coffee and sighed thinking his life was a mess...

Ladies the story is over .Now you all can get back to sleep. Arey wait Usain Bolt! What's the hurry ? So eager to sleep? Atleast tell me did you like the story?


Omg!! So many chappals coming my way.
*Picks phone and runs away*
Do leave your comments if you had fun that would make me happy

P.s- Resh and Zo I hope both of you enjoyed daalicious Raminirmala OS 🤣


Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Priyam

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Title itself cracked me up...🤣
Daal vs coffee...😆 one epic war...
Hadd se zyada reference...👍🏼
Sajan Chale sasuraal ...hilarious 😛
Ramu kaka is one lucky fellow... dono haatho mein laddo 😉

Just love the Salvatore in pic...☺️

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You are simply amazing Priyam 😊
How did you even think of this ? Cracked me up totally ! Reminded me of TR, miss her Ramini trailers 😳
Loved it ! Especially the "Kya kare kya na kare " was too much 🤣

Keep writing more of Raminirmala 👏
Edited by nith125 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg what was this 🤣. Keep them coming though , adds some laughter to our otherwise stress full lives.
I was in no mood to read this but still thought of giving it a try
My story isn't that boring or were you all waiting for Shraman story?
Oh come on!! Trying something new won't kill you . L

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This was hilarious. Can't stop laughing🤣.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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And Priyam Di is back with her masterpieces 😳
This one was hilarious but too short,I want a long one really soon.

"Had see zyada kuch bhi acha nahi hora,daal bhi nahi" LOLOL you had me in fits here.

Poor Ramu having to divide his once undivided attention between his two ladies!
The coffee and daal war was bang on and absolutely fun,poor gut had to drink both all at once.What a torture of love.

Then the Ram v/s Bhaisaab war was way much fun.

Gosh! Priyam Di when it comes to all this,no one crosses you,you are the master.
Thank You for the laughing treat.You are absolutely amazing!!

Loads of Love.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣
Ok so I was in my usual "Let's be upset without reason" mood. And I was thinking if I could talk to Pri or Zo aur tune pakar liya mere dimaag ke encrypted signals 😆 and I got your pm. Thanks for this and double thanks for the dedication mere @Mehboobkenaam 🤗
Coming to this craziness. This was amazing ❤️
but too short 😡 I wanted to laugh more. But nevertheless it was hilarious. 'Had se jyada kuch v accha nhi hota...daal v nhi' Yeh line mujhe BEYHADH pasand aya 🤣 I was in splits 🤣 Thanks God I had fevikwik around 🤣
Ramnath ke to mje hi mje hai. Waise main soch rhi thi Ramu ko chai mein daal mix krke khaani chahiye k daal mein chai 😕 🤣 Aur woh movies 🤣 Aur BGMs 🤣 Tere aise stories mein mujhe sbse jyada woh beech k small small nuances pasand aate hai. The way you get into the character of Daal, letter etc is fab ❤️
Tu best hai...Bestest hai. Bas!!! 🤗
And no chappals. Only pappiya and jhappiya 🤗 You know I love you ❤️
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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PS- This was epic-"Had se jyada kuch bhi acha nahi hota. Daal bhi nahi." 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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LMAO 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
What is this!!! RAMINI VS DaalMala OS 🤣 🤣
What a title, what a content, what a bg musics !!!!!!! laugh out a lot..& love it too
Haha.. Even at this late night I'm laughing Lyk a mad.. & will be continuing in Dreams too.. 😆
Haha, Ramnath was watching Gharwali vs Baharwali.. lolwa!!
Haaad se zada kuch bhi acchi nae hoti, Daal bhi nae.. 🤣
Each dialogs are on point. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Thanks for writing such a super funny OS.. I never expected here may be such ramini & rammala Love triangle OS...
Hats off to ur super talented brain..
Edited by Poulami11 - 8 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣...
The story is sooo uniquely hilarious...oh god...i am just laughing . ..at last Ramini...with nimmo...

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