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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


I would be posting the next part "real" soon maybe that's the answer to the invisibility wala question😆

I did start the sequel but one of the readers thought i was spoiling the story... And even i thought she was right so kept it on hold😛

I'm good sweetoo ... How are you?


I m okay.. These days dam pissed off because I get tired due to the trainings.

But I was waiting for the sequel!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta


I m okay.. These days dam pissed off because I get tired due to the trainings.

But I was waiting for the sequel!!!


This one is anyway about to end in few updates
Will plan it if i don't get too much exited with writing ACT😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


This one is anyway about to end in few updates
Will plan it if i don't get too much exited with writing ACT😆


Hehhe great IL wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
any possibility of an update???
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Posted: 8 years ago
waiting eagerly
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waiting eagerly
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
ohoo
ye boring wali story bhi yaad hai sab ko😉😆

hope u pep can give me few DAYS more😳

please😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part #28

Sometimes of crisis like this a girl misses her family the most... if only maa was here she would have handled this situation calmly... dad would comfort me saying not to worry everything would be alright...and all she have to do is smile for them and they would take care of everything... wiping the silent tears that escaped her eyes... she sat in the dining room waiting of Maan to return while papa was with maa as the doctor was checking maa..

The lump in her throat refused to go down even after drinking water while she was continually wiping the sweat with her pallu... it was her fault some ware she believed... if she didn't put that idea in meera's mind and would have accepted Maan without making any kind of stupid assumptions or maybe if she would have been more mature and have cleared the whole misunderstanding to maa...

But then she also knew that whatever she would have done would end leaving more bitterness... what she feared more was Maan's reaction... what if maa again brings up that topic of sending her away..where would she go... he was already so tired in the evening and now all this stress he would defo be angry...

To distract herself she brought some vegetables to cut for next day's breakfast.. being so lost in thoughts she didn't even realize she has cut her finger and it started to bleed slightly... if it wasn't Maans angry voice she would have continued damaging her finger a little more

He harshly pulled the vegetables from her hands not even caring for the few dropped and placed them in the fridge... and pulled her along with him to their room... she quickly took a backward glance to see maa's room was closed and all the lights were also put off... with his strong hold on her hand she guessed he was quite angry and chose to keep quite..

when he closed the door of their room she quickly dashed to the balcony to escape his wrath.. and when he didn't follow her... she took a breath of relief but that soon turned in to a frown why was he so calm... did he talk to maa... did he also think she wasn't right for him... gaining some courage he entered thier room to see him searching something in the dresser messing up everything...

ummm ...Maan?

what... i mean could i help u?

and the glare he gave her was enough to make her shut... and then she realized that all the world's problems on one side and her husband's anger on the other

Her eyes immediately filled with a layer of tears what was her fault in all his... maybe she should and called him and should have handled everything on her own... but he would have gotten more angry for keeping him uninformed when his maa was ill..

she was further more confused when he pulled out the turmeric packet from the draw and pored it in his wrist...

she was about to question him when he roughly pulled her hand and placed in his wrist causing her to hiss with the burning sensation... confused she looked at her finger which was red and bleeding and was burning a lot due to the turmeric... the tears which she held up all this while spilled out as she vigorously shaking her hand to reduce the burning sensation while he stood with his arms crossed at his chest glaring at her..

umm...wo...

shut up Geet... for god's sake shut up!

When ever i feel that we are moving ahead... you pull us a step back... why can't you let me in Geet... why can't you share your thoughts or worries with me...

But maan... i do sh..

Stop it ok... you think i don't understand or didn't notice... when was the last time you called your parents.. for a casual chat... you don't remember right...

It's because you never did!!

He was quite furious at her she concluded so she decided its better to stay calm and not to answer back...

I've seen u disturbed the whole day i thought once u get some time alone you will calm down and come to me... but no... that never happened... don't you feel I'm even that much important in your life...

Maan what are you talking...

And u wanted to leave the house after what we shared... was it nothing to you how could you

A gasp escaped her lips listening him say that Maan!!

Oh..

Enough ok... I've heard enough and you've said that's more than enough for me

And that was more than enough for her too..

One... we hardly get any time to talk or share something... and when we get all you want to do is fight I'm fed up of all this...

Wiping the angry tears away from her face... she decided something

Ok lets end this here...

Geet...

Haan geet... How do you like Aachal maan... i heard she is beautiful...

What?!

Oh please do you feel I'm that dumb... my husband who doesn't have min of free time to spend with his newly wedded wife spends a complete day with a random girl!

And that girl is the same one who was your perspective bride... if I'm not wrong...

Why don't you explain what is all this... now don't try to twist the topic... you pick her calls anytime of the day... but if it's me... then u fume and blast like a volcano...

Acha what about you.. ha... you wanted to study further then why didn't you talk to me... why am i the last person to know this...

Oh wow... now this new drama... you know what... I'M TIRED OF U... UR FAMILY... UR HOME...

MAI JA RAHI HU GHAR CHOD K...

ya ya leave... even I'm not begging you to stay...

Dumb women...

What did you say...

Nothing...

Hmm...

She quickly set up the bed and slipped into the covers completely hiding her self...

What happened you said you were to leave the house...

After sniffing and controlling her sob she replied...

Haan haan i'll leave... it's late now... I'll leave in the morning...

They didn't know what could have been done at such a situation they still had a lots to share or sort out... and one thing was clear assuming being in love is different from actually falling in love... and she understood she is far from that...

Sometime in the middle of the night she was pulled into his arms... while she snuggled to get comfy...

Geet... when she didn't answer he continued playing with her hair he managed to bandage her finger

can i have a repeat of what you started in the evening

She was red with shyness... and tried to hide herself in him...

Even though you did all that to distract me... i Loved it... so...

Maan she whined

He just laughed at her shy face...

Don't laugh... ok... she pushed him and turned the other side...

Acha Geet are you ticklish?? He whispered softly in her ears making her eyes go wide...

No... maan noo...

And her laughter echoed in the silent night...


Every family and every relation has it's rough patches... for the one who sees it from far they may not seem as big as for the one who deals with them... but as our elders say it's always better to let go... than keeping it in one's self








When we cross the boundaries of
yours and mine...
the bliss we reach is our eternal Sunshine...



To be continued...





hay pep..
how are u guys...
this one for those few pep who kept reminding me that i have this story hanging too😆 and also for that one writer who writes beautifully and claims not to be a writer... sweets... i truly love ur story!

and for rest of u all please do keep reminding me of my incomplete works even better u too join my GF Ghajini group🤣
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part.
waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..

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