Arhi FF: Nilagiri Diaries - Part 11 Updated 30th May

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Introduction

The jet lag weighed her down, but the wedding finery she was decked up in, tired her worse. Kushi Surabhi Gupta, had landed in the country, some 36 hours ago, and she already had a new name: Kushi Surabhi Singh. And another identity lay await to familiarize herself with - she was to play wife to Abhiram Arnav Singh, a friend who could only pass for an acquaintance, for their fleeting interactions never did incite her curiosity or interest to make her wonder, if they could be "more."

Wife - and she wondered, if she would have all the time in the world, to get used to her new role. Or if she ought to have already given acceptance to that transition, given that he could walk into their suite any moment, hoping to find his bride, more willing to appease him on their wedding night. It wasn't a technicality, she'd ignored, while agreeing to marry him, when her heart still remained with another. However, the idea of marriage itself could only be abstract and formidable, until you finding yourself in being in one.

As she closed her eyes and lay back onto the pillow, imagining the weight of the stranger that was her husband, over her, she waited for the disgust and scorn to ripple through her body. When she remained comfortably numb, for that time, she concluded she could perhaps get through the night, even if not their marriage.

Index

Part 1: Dream state
Part 2: Ready
Part 3: Revelations
Part 4: Homecoming
Part 5: Banter
Part 6: Evermore
Part 7: Distractions
Part 9: Divides
Part 10: Want
Part 11: Divergence

Your thoughts... and all your love to keep the story going, is welcome!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting premise! The girl's heart's somewhere else yet decided to get married to her acquaintance!
Waiting to read Mr.Arnav's stance on the wedding.
I loved the names of the protagonists. Cool Dey r!

Glad to read ur story again M!

May I know your update schedule ?

Cheers!! :)
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Interesting start
Hmmm, khushi is married to AAS but is in love with someone else. What about our AAS -
Would love to read more
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A very interesting start... And suuper excited to see back in action dear.. Looking forward to see whats the story of this new kushi and arnav...
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This seems to be different! Looking forward to it. It was just the needed teaser.

Cheers
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Part 1: Dream state

It's perhaps a human's unique ability to go back and relieve time. Memories! You are here, but you are there too. And during those times, its a cozy blanket of nostalgia you are wrapped in and at others, the sorrow of the past could cripple you down even in the present. But tonight, as he walked into their suite, well past midnight, the windows of time they had met, aimlessly talked, bonded, and yet remained indifferent at parting, for all those years, came back to him as an agreeable memory.

Their parents had been neighbors long before they were born and their friendship had continued amicably, even after their respective families come into wealth. While his father had steadily climbed the highly, vicious, but influential ladder of one government organization after another, Kushi's uncle had risen to being the city's most successful builders. Over the years that their parents had worked on and off on government projects, their families had met and celebrated their success and other family occasions. Though he'd abhorred nearly all conversations that he fell into with the elders during such events, given their incessant questions over his career choices in following his father's footsteps, the throngs of cousins and other friends Kushi's family invited, was something he looked forward to.

And she... she'd always been a flurry of activity, song and dance, he recounted, turning to smile at her sleeping form, while he carefully clicked the lock into place.

It didn't surprise him that she was well drawn into slumber, when her cousins had stalled him for hours, playing games, torturing him without giving away the number of the suite she was at. And now, he politely acknowledged to himself that he perhaps enjoyed the thrill of anticipation... the prospect of being with his wife more so than he'd believed. Perhaps, it wasn't so much about calling her his wife that appeared to please him, as much as the fact that she was his wife - the tall girl who had picked on him all through his awkward teen years, until the summer, he'd shot through, affording to tower over them all and intimidate with his mere presence. The boisterous girl, who had grown into a balanced and appealing woman... the girl he'd had a crushed on for a few years, before her disappearance to the states had wiped out his boyish fondness for her.

Walking to the window, to take in the view of Udaipur, twinkling in its night glory, he made swift work of the buttons on his sherwani. The day had been an elaborate affair, with the ceremonies drawn out to such extent that they had hardly gotten an opportunity to exchange a few words. All of Lake palace had come alive in their wedding festivities, with every ceremony taking over a new part of the palace, with decor that unparalleled many other destination weddings that had been planned there. After all, both families had many government and social dignitaries to impress. However, the question on his mind now was, if she'd been impressed at all, when he hadn't seen anything of an authentic cheerfulness come over her face.

Turning in profile, as he leaned against the window, his eyes slid down her huddled form on the bed. Folding his arms, he held himself in that stature - the one he'd used to frighten her that long gone summer... a stance that was second nature now and one that alluded the authority, he wielded in his job as the reigning collector of the Nilgiris district. "I have never been to Ooty, let alone Coonoor, " she'd told him nonchalant over the phone, "I don't mind it." Did anything about him impress her at all? he pondered again, reminded of her long standing indifference to him.

Despite whatever answers... or questions her still form concealed, that night... the night of their wedding, felt nothing short of a dream state. Kushi Surabhi Singh - his wife, and former crush, didn't know that she had another identity to come to terms with.
Edited by -Mitra - 8 years ago
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Thank you folks, for the lovely welcome to the story...
Hope to get all of your love and support, to keep the story going... So don't forget to write your thoughts...

Happy Diwali Folks!
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The FF name has shifted to Nilagiri Diaries! Hope you have bookmarked it with the right title.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start so Khusi likes someone else but she got married with Arnav let's see how their relationship process.
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Originally posted by: _FeistySoul_


I loved the names of the protagonists. Cool Dey r!

May I know your update schedule ?

Cheers!! :)



Oh! you know I have a tendency to steer away from the character's series names.

I'm going to keep to short updates and so, hoping it will be around 2 -3 updates a week.

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