ViTharv OS- Pyaar Ki Nishaani

Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!❤️

Happy Diwali to all my readers! Hope you have a wonderful time enjoying the festive period!🤗

This scene is out of the context. This is a scene I so wanted to see, but I guess we are not getting it any time soon, so I decided to give a vivid account of the scene!😳

ViTharv OS- Pyaar Ki Nishaani

As Atharv came back home, he was sick worried for Vividha. She had been not well for almost a week. She had been experiencing nausea and vomiting. She had been also been generally weak and would experience fatigue even after doing little work. Vividha would be super energetic, she would manage the household work, she would also help him in the account managing of his factory, yet she was not tired. He was dead worried. The doctor had said it was okay. He had then approached his mother.

Atharv: "Maa, tu samjha na Vividha ko, is hafte thoda aaram kar le. Use pehle hi itni thakan ho rahi hai, usme se ye vomiting aur nausea. Mujhe bahut fikra ho rahi hai..."

Sujata by then had understood everything, how could her son be so intelligent and dumb at the same time.

Sujata: "Haan, bol doongi usko..." she said smiling.

Vividha joined Atharv in the bedroom, tired by the daily chores.

He clasped her hand and gently made her sit on the bed. He sat down besides her and took her in a hearty embrace. They stayed like that for a few moments soaking in the happiness. Atharv spoke first breaking their silence.

Atharv: "Aap theek hai na? Is week main aapki itni tabyet kharab hai aur upar se aap kaam kar rahi hai...thoda aaram kijiye."

Vividha: "Theek hoon main Atharv, tum yuhin aise tension le rahe ho..."

Atharv: "Aise hi tension le raha hoon? Aap bhi ajeeb hai. Is poore hafte main aap bahut ajeeb behave kar rahi hai, aur aap keh rahi hai ki aap theek hai? Main is baat ko bilkul nahi manta..." he said, sadness and pain evident in his voice.

Vividha pulled him in an embrace. She kissed his head and calmed him down.

Atharv: "Aap ko koi problem pareshaan kar rahi hai, to mujhse share kijiye...humne aaj tak har baat share ki hai..."

Vividha just smiled at him and then at her destiny. She was blessed indeed to have Atharv in her life. She remembered their journey, from the first time they met at the shed during Payal's birth to the day of their marriage. The journey had been lined with rejections, misunderstandings, confession, confrontations, oppositions but they had come through winning against every odd thrown towards them, their love shining through.

Atharv: "Kya soch rahi hai aap?..." he asked worried.

Vividha: "Tum itne bade buddhu kaise ho sakte ho Atharv?..."

Atharv: "Kya matlab? Main kaise buddhu? Aap subah chaat khane ki zid karti hai, phir aapko kuch meetha khana hota hai, phir aapko kabhi vomiting hota hai...aur phir aap kabhi kehti hai nausea ho raha hai...hum wapas doctor ke paas chalenge..."

Vividha: "Tumhe ab tak kuch samajh nai aa raha hai na...cant you connect the dots?" she said irritated with the stupidity of her husband.

Atharv: "Kya samajh nai aaya? What dots do I connect?"

Vividha: "Kaha jaake apna sar patka doon?...Aise ajeeb se cheezien khaane ka man, ulti hona, aur kabhi kabhi kuch bhi na khaane ka man karna...mood swings hona, wo bhi aik aurat ke saath..."

Atharv: "To ye problem kisi ko bhi ho sakti hai na...ismain aurat aur mard ka kya difference hai? Isiliye to doctor ke paas chalna chahiye..."

Vividha: "Tumhe hints samajh nai aa rahe hai kya?..."

Atharv: "Hints?...Ye koi game hai kya?..." he said laughing hard.

Vividha: "Tum bhi na...direct bolti hoon..."

Atharv: "To bolo na..."

Vividha: "I am pregnant..."

Atharv was spellbound. He was ecstatic. His happiness knew no bounds. He had become like a statue.

Vividha: "Atharv, apni pregnant biwi ko kiss nai karoge kya?"

Atharv pulled her in an embrace. He broke the hug and took her lips in a passionate kiss, slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through. They parted to breathe, staying in the embrace feeling the emotions running high in both of their hearts.

Atharv finally spoke in the entire conversation,

Atharv: "Direct nai bol sakti thi...yeh connecting dots ka kya stupid plan tha...meri jaan ja rahi thi yeh soch ke ki aapko kuch hua hai..."

Vividha like a child her held ears and asked for an apology by mouthing an inaudible sorry.

Vividha sensed that his happy face had been replaced by worry.

Vividha: "Atharv, tum khush nai ho..." she asked worried.

Atharv: "Mujhe dar lag raha hai..."

Vividha: "Kis baat ka? Darr to mujhe lagna chahiye, 9 mahine mujhe saara weight leke ghoomna hoga...tumhe kya problem hai..." she asked teasing him.

Atharv: "Maine apne zindagi main kabhi bhi apne papa ka pyaar experience nai kiya...to mujhe nai pata, kuch bhi..."

Vividha: "Tumne apne maa ka pyar to experience kiya hai na...koi farak nai hota..."

Atharv: "Will I be a good father? Will I be able to keep the baby safe and happy? Make him learn discipline? I am scared..."

Vividha: "Tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai? You are going to be a great father. Wo discipline vagaire ke liye main hoon na...baki tum sambhal lena..."

Atharv: "Are haan...wo daant lagana mujhse waise bhi nai hoga..."

Vividha: "Haan, par I can imagine you playing with the baby, making soap bubbles with the baby, letting the baby win so you can see the precious smile."

Vividha pulled her husband in a loving hug. He was stiff a bit, but later relaxed in her arms.

Vividha: "Atharv, we will come out winning in this too, as long as we are together. Tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nai hai...sab theek hone wala hai...yeh hamari khushi hai aur main chahti hoon ki hum dono iss khushi ko mehsoos kare. Main apna ye motherhood enjoy karna chahti hoon, hamari journey enjoy karna chahti hoon...tumhara pyaar mehsoos karna chahti hoon, tum mera jo khyaal rakhoge wo mere liye ek khobsurat yaad banke rahegi...aur main yeh bhi chahti hoon ki tum bhi, hum dono ko ye sab enjoy karna chahiye..."

He smiled genuinely, knowing that if he falters in any task in bringing up the baby, she will be beside him, holding his hand and leading him out of the darkness.

As they slept peacefully in a loving embrace, Atharv protectively placed his arms around his living wife. She gently pulled the blanket over him. Their fingers entwined she finally spoke,

Vividha: "Atharv main jaanti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari kamzori hai, par main chahti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari takat bane..."

She knew he heard this even in his sleep, as his lips gently touched her forehead. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.

They had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of respect and a relation of love.

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!❤️

Positive criticism welcome!😳

Love,

Mayu

mayu first of all

Beautiful Mayu, And I wish we could see some day in our show that Atharva takes care of our pregie vividha. ..How Beautiful that scene will be just as you described.😳

Love it love it love it love it🤗 u made my day 👏i so want this pyar ki nishani happen soon but i think we have to w8 long for this But its ok i m gonna eagerly w8ing for your next OS⭐️

Okay start by saying ...still can't read hindi . But don't worry I read it anyway and from the beginning I got the hint of the story.
Sujata chachi left her son still in confusion . She didn't even take pity on him.
Worried atharva is the best.
I literally can imagine atharva being an amazing father. I don't thing there is anything he wouldn't be god at .

Mayu great fanfic . Just one thing you should have specified . Did they go to the doctor together or did vv go alone . Because it sounds as if he went too. which means the doctor should have told them both that she is pregnant. The symptoms speak for themselves.

Hi Mayu

Really surprised and glad that you wrote an os as our diwali gift.Loved it.I wish the makers give us some surprise as well.

I always wanted to see Vitharv as a married couple. Their understanding,their love and their passion is what could give people some serious relationship goals.And this is such an amazing situation in their lives.Vividha is expecting and our Atharv has no idea of it.Ahh...I would love to see their married life in the show. Atharv, Vividha and Sujatha together as a family...It would be bliss to see Atharv and Sujatha pampering Vividha and showering her with all the attention and love.

Atharv is skeptical if he would be a good father.It's natural that he thinks that way.I loved how Vividha said that Mother's love is just the same.Sujatha was his father and mother.Atharv was the perfect son and man.He would be the perfect father as well.He has Sujatha and Vividha by his side too.Lovely.