Meet FF ~ Chaar Kadam ~ (Chap 2 - Page 4)

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Chaar Kadam

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Posted: 8 years ago
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~ Chaar Kadam ~


Teaser



As usual Preet was partying with his friends, he was a carefree boy who doesn't care about anything, who has no knowledge about responsibility.

Preet was freely enjoying when his phone rang, seeing the caller ID - he received the call, "Yes dad?"

"Preet.. We need to talk with u." Lalit said but due to the high volume Preet couldn't hear, "Dad.. What u said? I can't hear u? Just a second." saying this he rushed to the corner, "Yes dad.. Why u called? You r in Amritsar no?"

"Why? Does people from Amritsar not allowed to call?" Lalit asked sarcastically, on which Preet just made a face. "Anyway u take the next flight and come here."

"But why dad?" Preet asked shocked.

"I'm saying u so.. And Preet, I don't want to hear any excuses from u. I want to see u here in next 5hours. Do u get that?" Lalit sternly asked.

"Yes dad." Preet hang up the call and cursed his father, "Always call me on wrong time. He just know how to spoil my mood. Amritsar..." he made face thinking the village.

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Preet walked in his father's room and saw Gayatri and Lalit was sitting with serious face, "Hey mom.. dad what happened? Is there any serious issues?" he asked with little concern but in next moment, he threw himself on the bed and spread his arms on the bed, "Be cool dad.. You should learn something from me.. How to keep urself stress less..!" and he cracked some jokes when Lalit said, "Stop it Preet."

Seeing his father's sudden reaction, Preet titled his head up and gave question look to his mother who remained silent, he sat back on the bed and asked,"What happened bauji?"

"Preet, do u love ur bauji?" Lalit asked looking at his son.

Preet chuckled saying, "What a stupid question? And u called me so urgently to ask this question?"

"Preet?" Gayatri glared at him, "Listen to ur father." Preet nodded.

"Preet?" Lalit walked to the bed and took sit beside Preet, he took his hands in him and said, "I called u here for some reason. Actually I... I want u to get.. To get marry with Meher..!"



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I don't know how well I could portray the characters, especially Preet's character but I will try best. Hope u find it interesting. Please drop ur valuable comments.


P.S - I don't know anyone, so if possible please share this work with ur friends.


To get Pms, buddy me.


Edited by ankyra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hmm so this is about married life of Preet based on the title and his parents ommnding order.
Let's see.

Banner is beautiful.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

hmm so this is about married life of Preet based on the title and his parents ommnding order.
Let's see.

Banner is beautiful.

Thanks dear.

First time I tried to make some creation 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oooh it doesn't seem like that. You edit like a pro. 😎 Looking forward to see more edits.👍🏼
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Ankita do you celebrate Diwali? In any case I consider this as a treat for the occasion.
It's really nice one of the fans thought of something to make up excited about. ⭐️

Season's Greetings for Diwali and best wishes ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

oooh it doesn't seem like that. You edit like a pro.😎 Looking forward to see more edits.👍🏼

Yeah.. Will try to make more.. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Ankita do you celebrate Diwali? In any case I consider this as a treat for the occasion.
It's really nice one of the fans thought of something to make up excited about. ⭐️

Season's Greetings for Diwali and best wishes ⭐️

I do celebrate Diwali.. it's one of my favorite festival... 😊
Treat? Yes Diwali gift from my side 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ooo...another treat for us
And this time it is for a FF 🥳

Loved the intro teaser...can't wait for you to update. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awosome Start
Waiting for next part
thanks for the Pm :)

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