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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammiey

Res...abi turant unress denge padh rhe your update!

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Bella dearie!!
C'mon give me a hug!! 🤗

You know what when I read the name 'shubh'
I was like hein??!! Shubh???
Becuz shubh is a friend of mine he's too in 12th grade and you know what he has a crush on me
He's trued so many times inderectly to confess
I just enjoy his expressions when I act all innocent
His name is shubh mishra we are childhood friends !! Since we were small 😆😃😛

So shubh...hmmm he really went on a wrong path and when I read that he actually trued behaving and forgetting drugs I was like "huh! Really??"

Coz when rehabbing didn't help then how could an addict like him leave drugs so easily and that too all by himself! Just so IMPOSSIBLE!!

I thought from shravan's POV and you know what...what he did was entirely correct his son has become a terrorist a drug addict what can he do when matters has crossed all limits!?

But then...he really failed as a father...both of 'em as parents
Being a parent is really a lot of task to handle and carefully handle

I can entirely understand shubh's insecurity
As I'm an elder sister too I have a little brother 4 years younger than me
And believe me till I was 13 I used to fight with just becuz when he was born every attention was given to him and I thought I was being ignored ...hell with 13 I even fight now too sometimes being 18 😆 but now we share secrets and we both are closer than our parents though our mom is closer as she always gets to know our secrets ...we only share with her as she is way too much friendly and protective 😳

And you know what my shubh...I mean my childhood friend my admirer is an older brother too she has a little sis just like shubh and shreya they are called shubh and swasti ...our dads were childhood friends and now we are! Her sister is 3 years younger than him and believe me I thank god he didn't go on wrong path cuz he too had some influensive friends and he was jealous of his sister too!

Just loved the ending part
Thank god suman got back his senses but what could she have done too when the matter revolve around the most persons in her world!

Nice lesson to the youth!
You know what you should post it as global! Seriously!

Much love...will be awaiting for the next pm!
❤️

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Oh my shubh connection ha😉
That was impossible but when it comes to parents its enough for them That you realised your mistake and are trying to redeem cuz they love you so much to blindly trust you
and being on borders that he had to here it has to be really tough
Thanks for understanding his side hope i could justify him
that insecurity is natural it depends on us how we handle here shubh not yours 😉 but this os wala shubh took it wrong way that lead to his destruction
Well that was the he was so drown in his insecurities that he didnt realsise how much they loved him he just thought about what they hadnt provided him but recognise the lot more things they had provided most important being a secure life and the care of parents which many orphans dont get cuz ppl only want a child having their blood
its difficult for a mother to face such situations so she does what she thinks is best thinks to do run away thats what she did

Post it global means

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Joyness

Loved it...so intense. Superb

thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Bella thanks for pm... I'm at verge of loss of words... its diffa another stories om all other shraman stories I've read till now... I was flabbergasted after reading this...was numb... when I'd read intro I was like how could a father kill his own son cause of his wife...but understood now why he did that... wat a happy family it was...how could shubh think something like that?? how he forgot how much they'd loved him...n shreya was a newborn ...he too had to be there but he distanced himself...I really don't know why kids start thinking nonsense like this...n drugs...it's enough to ruin anyone ...don't know wat heaven kids feel after taking drugs even after knowing its outcomes... watevr shravan did, was right...as a soldier, he'd never regret it but as a father he'd regret it forever...but it wasn't his fault...how much both shraman were excited for his birthday but he forgot all love... n sumo m glad finally you thought as his pov ...he was at lost more than you... n shreya got kidnapped...God these terrorists wat they get by killing ppl...they're such ruthless beast, monsters who lack emotions... it was a very serious topic Bella but the way you represented it is outstanding ... n yeah I understand school n studies...update whenever u get time :) waiting for next pm...n going to read ur game of thrones of shraman :)

thanks a lot dear 😊
Insecurities leads you to do such things dear its upto us how we handle that
Drugs are like a fashion nowadays among us teens we dont understand thats it leads to destruction only destruction of our family career everything the few min pleasure can ruin everything
Glad you guys understood his pov
Thats the prob here he just thought what he didnt got but he failed to realise what he has got he realised they didnt give him that much time as they gave to shreya not thinkin abt reason but he failed to realise how much affection care and love they haf given him
He truly has lost more than her first killing his son with his own hands and then his wife something one doesnt wants to imagine
Terrorists are not human cuz a true human will think a thousand times before hurting aanother one but they do it for their egos
thanks for understanding dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

brilliant update
absolutely loved it
continue soon

thanks a lot dear 😊
Lol its completed dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Sunaian

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Woah...tht was amazingly amazing..
damn damn emotional..few days back i was telling Zoya to buy me tissue boxes n now m tellinh u tht u hav to pay fr my tissue boxes.. 😭 😭
Bella u did a spectecular job ⭐️
u killed it..indeed
the flash back got me 🤢
their very own son did tht...betrayed thm 😭
i hav nothing to say yar al i cud say is i pity shraman 🥺
really really loved it..u r damn good at writting such stuff..
fabalous one..
Hope shravan gets successful in his mission n return back along her daughter..

thanks a lot dear 😊
Ok I will pay but zyaada nhi ha aaj kal pocket money ki kami hai 🤣
Tysm sis
only in these stuff not in others lol kidding I know I can only write emotional stuff finely maybe though
That he will afterall he has promised her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Bella
Post it global means post it somewhere where many people can read from all over the world!

And don't tease haan! 😛 my Shubh isn't all innocent type he focuses on studies but he's a damn flirtatious guy!
Only with me though! 😛

We both got each other as friends so we never felt that jealous of our brother n sister resp. 😃

Yes you're absolutely right many orphans don't get parent's love which he got but he became blind he saw what he didn't get and led to the wrong path influenced by bad sangati!

Isiliye meri Mumma always bolti hai sangati matters!
N I'm proud of myself that I obeyed her
She has a super judging power jiske baare mein she gives Jo judgment that judgment always comes true so when she says me to stay away from a person I blindly obey!
Love her so much! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammiey

@Bella

Post it global means post it somewhere where many people can read from all over the world!

And don't tease haan!😛my Shubh isn't all innocent type he focuses on studies but he's a damn flirtatious guy!
Only with me though!😛

We both got each other as friends so we never felt that jealous of our brother n sister resp.😃

Yes you're absolutely right many orphans don't get parent's love which he got but he became blind he saw what he didn't get and led to the wrong path influenced by bad sangati!

Isiliye meri Mumma always bolti hai sangati matters!
N I'm proud of myself that I obeyed her
She has a super judging power jiske baare mein she gives Jo judgment that judgment always comes true so when she says me to stay away from a person I blindly obey!
Love her so much!❤️

I dunno where to post it
okizzz I won't tease u with the name of YOUR shubh
Yup company matters mumma are always right 😊

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