DevAkshi OS ~ Tere mere pyar ki, umar salamat rahe. - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain

Res

Sorrryyy ammu chechi
Am out of dubai, and no Wi-Fi 😭
Will read your story and unres as soon as possible
Soo sorry.. I just came here from my friends phone to check ur PM..
Waiting eagerly to read them .. I have to go now
Bye sis 🤗



Awww Anu - its ok - don't worry; take care 😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Reserved!
I'm on my phone right now, but I will reply as soon as I get my hands on my laptop!! :)

- Unres'd :)
So firstly, heyy!
I'm finally back to comment on your wonderful and amaaazing OS!
Coming straight to the point, this is one of the most well-written story I have written on DevAkshi!
From the starting to the end, you kept me hooked to the story!

The whole beginning was so adorable! Especially loved how you incorporate Nikki and Riya in it as well! Very cute and I can totally imagine that happening too :D

Then came Neha. Whoaaa, now this is something I wish happens in the show!
You've penned out the dialogues so well, and it was bang-on with the characterization as well!
You've really done such a beautiful job with this OS!

In fact I was back on IF to get some inspiration to finish my story as I hadn't watched KRPKAB in so long. Now after having read this OS, I'm inspired again :D
So thank you 😉😆

Take care and please keep writing!
Would love to read more from you! And in fact, I'd appreciate it if you could PM me when you write anything else as well 😳

Hinal 🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Unreserved my comment above :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: saumiee

Ammu, Another feather in your cap🤗

This was so amazing, made me emotional❤️
The first part where Sona draws a moustache on Dev's face🤣 and the romance bit after it😳 I loved how Dev Sonakshi embrace the sisters in their hug. . So much of warmth in their relationship.
Neha literally showed the mirror to Ishwari. I loved how you used the pooja thing, right after the promo yesterday😉 Very relevant👏
I really feel considering how blunt she has always been with Ishwari, she will be the one who makes her realise how wrong she was.
Sona making black coffee instead of tea, aww💔
As always, the write up at the end was so beautiful, and very very true.and thanks for dedicating this dear, I am so honoured by this🤗



Awww saumiee - d'aww glad you liked it ; I am so happy!!!
Thank you so much - your comments are always so expressive and heart warming; i always read it over a million times with a stupid smile on my fae.😆😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: kashishbano

Brilliant dear, just brilliant 👏 .
You have just nailed it Akshara.
Loved it.
It was too much emotional and heart touching. 😭
Plz if you want to continue, continue it soo n, bcoz want to know how will Ishwari handle the dev sona relation and bring them back together.



Awww thank you so much dear !! I have and I am glad you liked that one too ! Thank you so much !!😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Viji-

Aksharaa,No words to tell,Bus🤗🤗

Thank You❤️



Awww thank you so much dear!!!😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ammu3



D'Awww thank you so much dear !! I indeed have continued this in my next OS - pls do check it out - thank you so much dear - I am glad it could bring a smile to your face!!😳😆



Have you posted the next OS...if yes, please PM me. Thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48


Awww thank you so much dear !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angili

Nicely written

Tanks for sharing



Aww thank you dear !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
It was so emotional
and beautifully written!

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