Reserved!
I'm on my phone right now, but I will reply as soon as I get my hands on my laptop!! :)
- Unres'd :)
So firstly, heyy!
I'm finally back to comment on your wonderful and amaaazing OS!
Coming straight to the point, this is one of the most well-written story I have written on DevAkshi!
From the starting to the end, you kept me hooked to the story!
The whole beginning was so adorable! Especially loved how you incorporate Nikki and Riya in it as well! Very cute and I can totally imagine that happening too :D
Then came Neha. Whoaaa, now this is something I wish happens in the show!
You've penned out the dialogues so well, and it was bang-on with the characterization as well!
You've really done such a beautiful job with this OS!
In fact I was back on IF to get some inspiration to finish my story as I hadn't watched KRPKAB in so long. Now after having read this OS, I'm inspired again :D
So thank you 😉😆
Take care and please keep writing!
Would love to read more from you! And in fact, I'd appreciate it if you could PM me when you write anything else as well 😳
Hinal 🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 9 years ago