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sappushivu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

wow !!! awesome.it felt like i was watchin the show..you bought the characters to life ...keep up the gud wrk !! loved every bit of it 👏

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ammu3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: masooma98
Wow yar! It was so emotional and beautifully written! Hope this happens in the show too... Really liked it a lot!! :)

Awww thank you so much dear - glad you liked it !!😳

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ammu3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: M.soni
Wowowo very nice..plzzz continue it

Thank you so much !! I will definitely try !!😳😆😉

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

So here it is.And I give you full marks for the successful experimentation.😊 My mind was juggling between alternatives to what the setting is.I even felt my devil mind speak to start reading from down wards.But thankfully my angelic mind took reigns of control and I patiently reached the climax.😃

The conversations were easy flowing and realistic in every angle.At somepoint of time I felt Neha becoming mouthpiece of an ardent DevAkshi fan...😉 The dialogues were fiery and delivered a powerful effect.The ending was somewhat cliffhanger.But nonetheless every bit contributed to craft out a beautiful creative art.

Its needless to say how effective the analogies are in remembering the whole story.😊

Thanks for pm.

Keep Writing and Keep Smiling.😊

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ammu3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Beautiful and Emotional too

Awww thank you so much dear !!!😳

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Ferdous_69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awww... It's just amazing 😳 😳
Neha ka speech mind blowing dear nd emotional bhi...
Beautifully written... 👏 👏
Keep it up nd write more...

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ammu3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN
Another masterpiece! 👏
Wonderful storytelling! 👏👏👏

I hope Sona too joins the Dixit Family Hug!

Awww thank you so much dear!! So happy - that you liked it !!😆😳

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ammu3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Mimiii22
Wow...it's freaking awesome...👏👏 Specially the last part(red)...
Always love to read your OS...right amount of romance, fun and emotion...mast likhti ho akshara... 😉😳

Awww thank you so much dear - i feel so honored you feel that way - seriously, this comment made my day!!😳🤗