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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow!!

Another Fantastic work from you!!

Its mind blowing!!

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Beautiful and lovely update

Emotional one

Thanks for the pm

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Anu

@Adi_Ki_Zoya

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

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Sorrryyy ammu chechi

Am out of dubai, and no Wi-Fi 😭

Will read your story and unres as soon as possible

Soo sorry.. I just came here from my friends phone to check ur PM..

Waiting eagerly to read them .. I have to go now

Bye sis 🤗

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Ammu, Another feather in your cap🤗

This was so amazing, made me emotional❤️

The first part where Sona draws a moustache on Dev's face🤣 and the romance bit after it😳 I loved how Dev Sonakshi embrace the sisters in their hug. . So much of warmth in their relationship.

Neha literally showed the mirror to Ishwari. I loved how you used the pooja thing, right after the promo yesterday😉 Very relevant👏

I really feel considering how blunt she has always been with Ishwari, she will be the one who makes her realise how wrong she was.

Sona making black coffee instead of tea, aww💔

As always, the write up at the end was so beautiful, and very very true.and thanks for dedicating this dear, I am so honoured by this🤗

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kashishbano

@kashishbano

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Brilliant dear, just brilliant 👏 .
You have just nailed it Akshara.
Loved it.
It was too much emotional and heart touching. 😭
Plz if you want to continue, continue it soo n, bcoz want to know how will Ishwari handle the dev sona relation and bring them back together.

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Aksharaa,No words to tell,Bus🤗🤗

Thank You❤️

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Littlestar108

@Littlestar108

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow...Such a beautiful and an emotional OS...

You have done a fabulous job Akshara!! Love you for this!

Please do keep writing!! 😛

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: gudiyanrani143
Loved it!! It made me cry...like literally
Are you continuing this? Please do!! I really wanna see Sona reuniting with the whole Dixit family and obviously Dev. *blush* Lol

Keep up your good work, Love. Do write more and lots!!

Love
- M

Aww thank you so much dear !! Glad you liked it !! This made my day !😃
I'll defintiely continue it - if everyone wants it to !!😳😆😉

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Anu

@Adi_Ki_Zoya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain
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Sorrryyy ammu chechi
Am out of dubai, and no Wi-Fi 😭
Will read your story and unres as soon as possible
Soo sorry.. I just came here from my friends phone to check ur PM..
Waiting eagerly to read them .. I have to go now
Bye sis 🤗

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Finally got data connection in my phone

Came running to read your update 😆

I must say, this was worth all my patient waiting

It had all the emotions in it .. I loved it so much ❤️

Ammu chechi.. iam fed up saying this again and again, but you are simply the best 🤗

Brilliant beginning.. funny and romantic

Continued perfectly.. loved the twist in the story.. 👍🏼

Oh my! I so loved the three Dixit sisters over here

Firstly, sona and nikki rhea bonding , and then neha tho! .. she rocked completely in this story 👍🏼

I loved the update overall and I wish something like this happens in the show .. I always wanted neha to make ishwari step out of her insecurities with her boldness 😉

I loved dev here too, as usual dev remains my fav character in the show and in all your updates ☺️

Ok now! The conclusion part! It was not much related to bio but kudos to your thought chechi! 👏

I can't help but praise you for being awesome 😊

When a single flavour empowers , it spoils the dish! - such a simple but way too meaningful thought 👏

Your proud sis loves you kay , forever ❤️

Keep writing chechi

Waiting for your next update 🤗

Bye bye