Rajveer Naina ff-Somone Like You,to love,to die for.UPDATED.Ch 5 pg 9

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tiniminy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey, guys i'am starting a new Rajveer Naina ff-Someone like you..to love for,to die for..
It will be a simple yet a complicated love story..I will try my very best to write in such a way that u guys can imagine the scenes being played in front of your minds eye..
All am requesting u guys is to use your imagination as well..

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

start start dear i m waiting impatiently...

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tiniminy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever
start start dear i m waiting impatiently...

Kal kar dungi na..jaldi kya hai yaar..abhi itni raat ho chuki hai!

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sahira kabir

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow👏awesome dear

Loved it

Continue soon

Thnx for the pm😛

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Chaitali sen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Haiii,

Good start. So nice

Thanks for the pm

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tiniminy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Charecter sketch-

Alekh- Naina's cousin..

Yudi- Naina's cousin
Shalini-Naina's cousin

Naina stays with her parents and grand father

Other charecters will be revealed as the story moves on

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow...
first chapter me he chata ...
god bechara raj ...
naina raj ki love story me mnhe lagta h bohat important role play karne wale h naona ke cousin
wase eaj ko asa msg nhi bhejna chaheyi tha bechari naina ko kitna bura laga ...

wase jo baat raj ne kahi thi uski liye chata tph banta h...

power pack performance...
phele chapter itna dhasu h baki ki story me toh tum kahar dha dogi

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great start 😊 I like Alekh's tapori language. So I liked it that you used it that way 😊 Continue Soon! 😊

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tiniminy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever
wow...
first chapter me he chata ...
god bechara raj ...
naina raj ki love story me mnhe lagta h bohat important role play karne wale h naona ke cousin
wase eaj ko asa msg nhi bhejna chaheyi tha bechari naina ko kitna bura laga ...

wase jo baat raj ne kahi thi uski liye chata tph banta h...

power pack performance...
phele chapter itna dhasu h baki ki story me toh tum kahar dha dogi

Tum bilkul theek soch rahi ho..inn cousins ka bohot imp role hai..yeh bhi bata doon kiska..alekh,shalini.
Aur huda ka bhi bohot imp role hai.per huda k aane mein abhi bohot time hai.
So woh cousin hai ya koi aur baadmein pata chalega..aur secondly mujhe bhi badmein aisa laga ki ek nahi zyada chaate padne chahiye the raj ko..I mean after I wrote the scene I felt so..but what can I do.. 😆

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