Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 16

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

Preity this is just OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! As soon as I read on from; where, I left I got hooked to the story once again and couldn't stop reading! Within your story you have intertwined hidden emotions of the characters and your story has made me love Om as a character even more! You have made the characters so likeable and relatable making your story a hit! A character, which you have depicted perfectly in your story, is Shivaay. Under that arrogant exterior, he is just a lonely person, who worries about his brother and actually desires love. This is the Shivaay I really want to see in the show. To be honest, I think you should become the writer of Ishqbaaaz Preity because you are much better at laying out a story than the actual writers! Every chapter is a work of art- something I would never be able to create! There are no flaws in your story at all it truly is PERFECT!!!!!!!!! Update whenever you can dear!

Lots of love Angel❤️

PS. Thanks for putting up with my late comment dear🤗

And unres if I have put a RES anywhere😆

Bu and Ketu ur comments cracked me up 🤣 Thank you lovelies for being such entertainments 🤗

Oh Ankara is engaged 😲
My Shivaay 😭 what gonna he do now He is drunk [:0] Can't wait for next chapter Update Soon

Pre idk wt 2 say?! my shiv is sooo hurt🥺 i just wanna cry 4 him😭😭

geeezzz...what's he gonna do now...
continue soon

It was sach a nice part...
I am so excited fr next part...waiting fr it...pls update soon...

hello preitu..
wow so beautiful update..
anika's emotions when she felt that someone did something for first time for her so nice..😊😳
shivaay bechara he can't even think to feel like that because he thinks n cares for om..anika poor girl is disappointed but she goes with the flow.i like that . nd om he decided to go to rehab for anika n his n mrs oberoi's relationship mending..😊
why i feel that when om ani are engaged se storm is coming...😲😉😊
waiting for next part ..

Superb update,
I hope drunk shivaay wouldmt do amy blunder.
Continue soon,
👏

Ooa, shivaye has been drunk and walking to the terrace, bad move!