Maaneet FF - The Fear updated Part 4 pg 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! interesting update dear...loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Vikram is getting obsessive. Geet will have to bear this but Maan is there for her help
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Part 3

Maan: That b*****d has disconnected the call. We will do one thing. You may have to go without us. But the security will be there who will disguise himself.
Geet: But Maan...
Maan: We have to try till we succeed. I trust you.
Geet agrees.

Next day, she gets a call.
Vikram: Can you meet me at Brandstand?
Geet: Yes, I can. At what time?
Vikram: Same time. 4:30 pm. Remember, no goof ups this time.
Geet: I never knew they had followed me.
Vikram: Are you sure this time?
Geet: Yes, I'm sure.
After the college hours, Geet goes to Brandstand to meet the caller. Geet meets him & is shocked to see Vikram there. The security records the conversation between Geet & Vikram without his knowledge.


Geet: So it is you who have been calling me.
Vikram: You are right. it is me. I love you but you love Maan. You've never cared for me though I die on you.
Geet: I'm going to get married after my exams. It is better that you move on in your life. I am telling this to you decently as you are captain's son. How will he feel if he gets to know that you have been doing these things.
Vikram: Leave that to me. Mom will take care.

He tries to hug her but seeing somebody coming close to him,Vikram runs away.
Geet goes back. The security sends the video message to Geet.

Maan comes home. Geet shows him the video recording. Maan is shocked to know that it has been Vikram who has been scaring his Geet all the while.

There is a background song Mahi ve maahi plays. (Please refer to the below video)

Maan: I don't know how the captain will react if he gets to know that it is Vikram who is playing these pranks. We have to deal with him strategically.


Next day
Maan & Geet meets Vikram at the college canteen.
Vikram: Hey so nice to see you. How are you doing?
Maan: Everything is fine. I'm engaged & very soon I will be getting married. How about you?
Vikram: I love a girl but she is engaged to someone else.
Maan: So sad! what will you do now?
Vikram: Split the girl from the guy by hook or by crook.
Maan shows him Geet's photo & asked,"Are you talking about this girl?'
Vikram is shocked. he tries to run away but Maan catches him & beats him black & blue.
Vikram: I'm sorry Maan. Please forgive me. I know that you are a good person. Please forgive me.

Maan: I'm sparing you now. If we get one more call from your side, I won't spare you. I have the proof now.

Everyone leaves for the day.

Darjee & Brij sees the video & are shocked to know that it is Vikram. Brij goes to the captain's house to assault Vikram.

Captain: What is the matter?
Brij shows him the video & said,"Your son Vikram is troubling my sister. Better keep control on him.'

He sends the video message to the captain & leaves.

The captain goes to Vikram & said, "I know that you have always admired Geet but I've never expected that you will stoop to such a low level. How can you go between them?"

Vikram: I love her. I can't live without her.

Captain: First you achieve something in life. I will get a girl for you who will be better than her. Forget her & move on in your life.

Vikram: I cannot forget Geet. I promised mom that I will Geet for her as a DIL.

Captain: Your mom has passed away 10 years back & you still think she is alive. She is dead. Do you think she will be happy if you come between Maan & Geet? If you don't leave this obsession, I will have to get you admitted in the mental asylum.

The captain leaves. Next day, he meets Maan & said, "I know that my son has been troubling your fiancee. I apologize to you on his behalf. He is having a mental problem.

Maan: It is not your fault. If anyone else was in his place, I wouldn't have spared him.

Vikram thinks of another strategy.


Next day, he shoots Maan & kidnaps Geet.

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Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg superb update vikram is being so possesive for geet... and maan came to know abt vikram.. its nice...and confronts vikram... but he left vikram giving a last warning...and shocking precap... maan gets shot.. geet was kidnapped by vikram.. niw what will he do??? how will maan save geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow awesome update yaar

Very eager to know wat happens next

Okay I have request to you send me pm for only maaneet stories no other stories plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its amazing and getting interesting as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg vikram has been caught out
He's been beaten n threatened but still he ain't giving up
Even his father couldn't knock sense into him
Now he's kidnapped geet I wonder what he's got planned
Looking forward to seeing how maan n others plan to rescue her
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Vikram is psycho
He shot Maan & kidnapped Geet
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! wonderfully written! Maan gets 2 knw abt Vikram! he confronts him! Vikram shot Maan n kidnapped Geet! update soon

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