Maaneet FF - The Fear updated Part 4 pg 18

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kavita

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue

I'm writing a story based on the movie Darr. This is my first topic which is only about maaneet.My humble request for you is to give a long comment on this story.

Below is the script.

Maan is working in the navy & has a very good post. He is also the captain of the ship. Geet is studying in the college. Maan & geet know each other for 3 years. They are in love with each other.

Vikram is in love with Geet. However, she is not aware of it nor did she care for him. He lost his mother a way back. His father is working with Maan who respects & trusts him. He gives big responsibilities to Maan.

The students are having their exams. Geet is also writing her exam. As soon as she comes out of the hall, she hears the song.

Jaadu Teri Nazar

Khushboo Tera Badan

Tu Haan kar.

Geet Makes Yes Expression

Ya Naa Kar

She Makes No Expression

Tu Haan Kar Yaa naa kar

Tu Hain Meri Geet

Geet thinks it is maan who is singing for her.

Meri khwabon ki tasveer hain tu

Bekhabar Meri takdeer hain tu

Tu kisi aur ki ho na jana

Kuch Bhi Kar Jaunga Main Deewana

Tu Haan Kar

Yaa naa Kar

Tu haan kar ya naa kar

Tu hain meri Geet

Lalala la la la..

Faasle, aur kam

Ho rahen hain

Door se pas hum

Ho rahen hain (repeat once)

Maang loonga.. Tujhe

Asaman se

Chheen loonga.. Tujhe

Is jahaan se

Tu haan kar

Ya naa kar

Tu haan kar ya naa kar

Tu hai meri.. Geet

Jaadu..

Teri.. Nazar

Khushboo..

Tera badan..

Tu haan kar

Ya naa kar

Tu haan kar ya naa kar

Tu hai meri.. Geet

Geet comes & sees Maan waiting for her outside the gate. Both meet each other.

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Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

part 10

Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago

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tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi ..

nice concept ..

hope u make some changes while writing ...

congratsfor ur start

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting concept
eagerly w8ing for nxt
cont soon

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custodian75

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue looks interesting. Waiting to read the first part

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow SRK's movie darr
sound interesting maaneet together and vikram is crazy for geet and she isn't aware of it
please continue

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Jasmine

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow..a ff on darr.that too on maaneet.so exciting.a MG or Rishbala ff on was sanghita's dream.she will b happy 2 c this ff.guess its vikram who is singing.but geet thinks its maan.oh...nice song