TAAREY SS 'I'll nevet let you go'( Chapter 12 updated)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONCEPT

Story starts after revealation of breakup drama Taani is very hurt and she leaves the college but there is one difference Taani is still upset with Rey nd his brother for making fun of his feelings...

What if Taani got married to her old friend??
What if Rey is still in love with with Taani wants her in his life??
What if Taani has one more brother and she is his jaan he can do anything for her??and D3 team knows that peson
Will Rey able to get his love back??
What will happen when taani's brother will know about the behaviour of Swayam and his friends?? What will he do with them??
How will Taani stop his brother punishing D3 team??


Pls tell me if i continue

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Reyansh Singhania- Same as show still loves taani wants her back can do anything to get her back.

Taani Aditya Oberoi- Same as show loves rey but married to her childhood friend because of her brother call him Adi

Aditya Oberoi- Taani's husband her best friend always there to help her loves Ananya alot has a son with her he is a buissnessman.

Ananya Mehra- Adi's buissness partner loves him to extent can do anything for him admire his friendship with taani loves her son alot.

Abishek Oberoi- Aditya and Ananya son loves his parents alot doesnt know anything about their relation.

Swayam Shekhawat- Same as show regrets how he treat his baby sister wish to earn forgiveness from her one day.

Sharon Swayam Shekhawat- Same as show somewhere regret her behavior with Taani but doesnt want to accept bcoz of ego wants rey to move on and settle in his lyf but
later she will help rey getting his taani back.

others are same as show

New Character

Karan Singh Grover- He is taani's brother loves her to an extent can do anything for her happiness.kown as KSG He is their old teacher nobody know about his and taani connection.more in story

Riddhima Singh Grover- loving and caring wife of KSG loves her husband vwry much treats taani as her daughter only she is the only one who knows about reality of taani's marriage.




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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE

After four years

IN INDIA

A guy is siting in his room crying staring someone pics and he is in his thoughts
I LOVE YOU JAAN i am very sorry please come back na.you know na i cant live with you its enough na jaan please now come back i'll do whatever you want infact i'll leave eveything for you but please come back na i know jaan you will come back to me i know you still love me as much i do and this time i'll not let you go i have done enough mistakes now its time to rectify and dis is "REYANSH SINGHANIA" promise



IN LONDON

A girl is weeping in her room remembering her beariful memories with the one she loves more than herself and says
" I LOVE YOU REY" but i cant come back to you please move on in your life but just then someone touches her shoulder and says
"hey biwi"

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INDEX

PROLOGUE- Above
CHARACTERSKETCH- ABOVE
CHAPTER 1- Below
CHAPTER 2- Page 2
CHAPTER 3- Page 3
CHAPTER 4-Page 4
CHAPTER 5-Page 5
CHAPTER 6-Page 5
CHAPTER 7-Page 6
CHAPTER 8-Page 7
CHAPTER 9-Page 8
CHAPTER 10- Page 8
CHAPTER 11 - Page 11
CHAPTER 12 - Page 11
CHAPTER 13 -
Edited by nehasharma2154 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept...do continue soon...n do pm me whenever u update the chappy😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear
Super duper interesting story
Pls do update asap n pm me ..
V excited to read it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice concept
continue soon
plss pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-1

After 4 years

Everything has changed in these four years D3 team is now become a establish acadmy. All of them forgot Taani accept Rey and Swayam they still remember her but never says anything in front of team as they know they will again start their back bitiching about her.Aol are married accept Rey as he is still waiting for his love Taani he is sure she will come back to him.

Swayam-Sharon
Nil-Sim
Amar-Rinni
Vicky-Neha
Bharat-Vishakha are engaged 6 months before

IN MUMBAI(INDIA)
D3 ACCADAMY

Aol are in acadamy waiting for Rey as usual sharon is shouting and swayam is pacifing her

Sharon- kaha h rey.. ab tak aaya kyun nahi usse pata hai aaj hamara itna bada event h fir bhi late aaj aane do aaj uski band baja dungi
Swayam- Sharon shaant ho jao aa jayega ho sakta h traffic mein phas gaya ho
Sharon- tum chup raho jab dekho uski tarafdari krte rhte ho ( looking at simmi) mujhe kya dekh rhi hi call him kaho usse jaldi aane ko
Simmi- relax mai call krti hun

At Rey bedroom
Rey is weeping staring at taani's pic in his mobile and says "jaan i know maine galti ki h tumhe granted leke wo stupid sa fake breakup krke par u know na I LOVE YOU i cant live without you please ab vaapas aa jao ab aur bardasht nahi hota jaan please aa jao jo tum kahogi vo karunga tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karunga kabhi granted nahi lunga bas vaapas aa jao tumhe pata h sweetheart swayam bhi tumhe miss krta h pr kch khta nahi h tum mjhse pyaar krti ho na mere liye kch bhi kr skti ho toh pls vaapas aa jao(looking above) taani k krishnaji pls meri taani ko bolo na vo mjhe maaf kr de mere pass wapas aa jaye vo aapko bahut manti h na" his thoughts break of continues ringing of his cell wiping his face he attend the call

Rey- hello
Swayan- kaha h tu tujhe pata h sharon kitni gusse mein h mai aur usse nahi sambhal sakta jaldi aa
Rey-oh shit! mai bas 10 minute mein pahuncta hun tu usse sambhal na pls yaar
Swayam- bs rehne de tu jaldi aaja isse pehle jwalamukhi mujhpe phat jaye
Rey - ha aa rha hun


IN LONDON

In morning, a girl and boy are in bed sleeping cuddling each other boy cell rings he answer the call

Boy- hello
Other side- Adi kaha ho aap jaldi ghar aa jao dadu aa rahe h abhi call aaya h 12 baje tk aa jayenge
Adi- kya biwi 😲😲😲 vo kyu aa rhe h hey taani k krishna ji ab kiski shamat aayi h
Taani - aap aa rhe ho ya nahi
Adi- biwi aa rha hun aisa ho skta h meri biwi ka bhai aa rha ho (taani calls her brother dadu) aur mai na houn meri maut aayi h kya arre yaar abhi nahi marna mjhe.. cutting him
Taani- Adi mere dadu k baare kuch haha na toh khana nahi milega na hi ghar mein entry smjhe 1 ghante mein aao 😡😡😡
Adi- aata hun biwi gussa kyun hoti ho luv you yaar.



pecap- entry of KSG and meeting with taani and adi...swarey recalls their past with taani..


Here is the 1st chapter... please ignore mistakes... and please reply enjoy


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it dear ..
awesome ch 1
Update asap
Very interesting... :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsm concept and chapter1 nice next
Part update soon..

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