Ours is Different (NIBIR FF) Epilogue 2 updated - Page 17

Originally posted by: angelanju

loved it😆

viraj is so cool...

NiRu ke friendship wala scene awesome tha

and viraj and kabir bonding is also nice

waiting for the jealousy track...😳

kabir to gaya🤣

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

Woowww...loved every bits of it.

Viraj is so sweet...

And i m curious bout the precape..

Kabira tu toh gaya...

Pls cont soon

Originally posted by: Niha0606

lovely yaar👏👏

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

res for part 13 😊

unres

Itna darr k bina nashte k bhag rai h nishu 😲
Well I m was sure in start that ye darr nai excitement hogi cox nishu kisi se nai darti 😈 🤣
Yar VIRAJ pe na hum aur aap hi suit karta h !! 🤔
I can't imagine him saying tu teri type words 😆
nisha viraj besties cool yar 😎
Never read any such thing in any nibir story till now!!
Urs is actually different 🤣
Kabir j hora 😃
Loved the last scene wen nisha asked kabir to come in her adda
Jahan wo kirti ko b allow ni karti 😲
Pakka kirti gonna tease her with this now 🤣
Haaye haye precap 😲
Kabir bechara 😆

PS. I would commented in more detail agar me busy na hoti 🤔
U very well know how much I m stuck in AT task 😵
Sorry for this chotu comment I wish could do in more detail!!

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Awesome awesome and awesome

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Lovely update 👏

Kabir toh abhi se j ho raha hai aaghe kya hoga 🤣

Eagerly waiting for it...

Chapter- 14

Factory Jalna Shuru Ho Gaya Hai😉

They go inside. Viraj and Suku joins them and they go to their ADDA.

Vi- (bit emotional) Aaj bhi bilkul visa hi hai.

Ni- (emotional too) Except ki maine jaale finally nikal diye. (chuckles)

It was a room with their favorite colors. The three different walls were owned by them. Like one by Nisha other by Viraj and the last one by Suku. They could do whatever they wanted to do with that wall but the last one was theirs. It was a share. So it had their photos that they clicked on various occasions. One was a photo of Diwali when they were around 14 to 15.

Su- (looks at Viraj) Teri sabse favorite photo kaunsi hai?

Vi- Our farewell one.

Su- I was not in that photo as I was a junior.

Ni- Isiliye toh photo acchi lag rahi hai. (giggles and gives hi-fi to Viraj while Suku frowns0

Viraj looked at Kabir who was still trying to understand things.

Vi- Arre Kabir! Sorry hum bhool hi gaye the. Come over here.

Kabir goes to him. Viraj was about to explain when Laxmi calls everyone to have some snacks. Nisha and Kabir were also about to leave when Viraj called them.

Vi- (looks at Nisha) Nisha usse apna ADDA dikhaane toh le aayi but usse samjhao bhi toh ye sab kya hai. He is so confused.

Ni- Par mujhe kuch khaana hai.

Vi- kitna khaogi? Kha kha ke moti hogayi ho. Chalo help him.

Ka- arre Viraj rehne do! Kyun tang kar rahe ho usse? If she wants to have some snacks she should have it. I will see the place later.

Ni- (shocked, monologue) what??? Isko kya ho gaya? Ye off-screen Akshay Kumar se on-screen Choocha kaise ban gaya? He would always find ways to tease me but today he is thinking about my benefit!!! Kuch toh jhol hai boss.

Vi- Kitne acche hain aap Kabir. Nisha help him out. (orders and leaves)

Nisha was looking at him with confused and doubtful eyes.

Ka- (innocently) Kya hua Nisha? Everything good?

Ni- (annoyed by his behavior) Abbe Langoor! Gende ki khaal! Bathak ke chooze! Ye sab kya kar raha hai tu? Dekh ye double personality na mere saamne mat rakhna. (holds a punch in the air) Muh tod dungi tera!

Ka- (low voice) Woh toh dikh hi raha hai!

Ni- (angry) Kya bola?

Ka- Woh main ye keh raha tha ki I realized I was at fault.

Ni- (confused) Seedha seedha bol kya bolna chahta hai.

Ka- I realized that I was doing it the wrong way. What would irritate you more would be me being good to you. Isliye from today I will be the best towards you.

Ni- Teri toh!

Kabir starts running around the whole room and Nisha starts chasing him with her hand in the air ready to beat him anytime she caught him.

Ka- (tired) Bas Mary Kom. Thak gaya.

They sit on the couch laid beside.

Ka- (full of curiosity)Bata na yaar ye sab kya hai.

Ni- (giggles at his curiosity) batati hoon. We decided that the main three walls will the property of each and every one of our group individually and the one with door will have the creativity of all of us. Kirti was never in our group as she never talked much to Viraj in the beginning but later they became great friends more like brother and sister.

Ka- (monologue) Chalo! There is no hurdle for bhai.

Ni- (points at the right wall) Woh wall Suku ki hai. He was a great fan of THE BEETLES that is why you can see so many posters there.

Kabir chuckles.

Ni- (points at the left wall) This is of Viraj. He always loved success. He was a great shooter and would play certain tournaments for the school but he was never satisfied. He always wanted to have more. He wanted to be the one a country sends for tournaments. He never liked any shooter except for himself and me. (wide smile)

Ka- (monologue ) She is telling about him as if she knows everything about him. He really liked her. In that sense or in other sense. Whatever who cares?

Ni- (Turns back) And that wall is mine. (he turns back)

The wall had a rainbow with some pictures of her winning certain competitions and other occasions with each colour and some medals hanging there. Also it had some clouds with some beautiful quotations written on it beautifully. Nisha was about to tell about it when Kabir stopped her. Nisha was astonished. He got up and went near the wall to analyze it. It looked so beautiful. It had photos matching each color.

For eg: red tells about love. It had a photo of hers celebrating her birthday with some orphans where she was playing with them. She was 12-13 in that.

Ka- (monologue) iske har color ke baare mein iss wall se pata chalta hai.

Nisha comes and stand beside him.

Ni- You like it?

Ka- (lost) Love it! (realized, attitude on) I mean it is a bit better than the others.

Ni- (monologue) By mistake bhi iske muh se tareef nahi nikalegi. Thank god jiju aise nahi hain. How will Kirti handle him all day? waise bhi almost nalla hi hai.

Ni- Dekhna hai ya nahi?

Ka- Tu mujhe dhamka rahi hai?

Ni- Haan toh!

Ka- Viraj ko bulau kya?

Ni- Main usse darti nahi hoon. It's just that I respect what he says.

Ka- Yes, how can I forget! Nisha Gangwal fears nothing. I should call aunty then. (about to leave)

Ni- (holds his shirt from behind) Abbe rukk! Kahan jaa raha hai! Dikha toh rahi hoon. Aur vaise bhi main Maa se nahi darti but unke lambe lectures se bahut darti hoon. (giggles)

They walk to the wall having the door, THE COMMON WALL. It looked like it was not a wall to show creativity. It was a wall to show memories.

Ni- (shows him a picture) this picture was taken when I was born.

Ka- bachpan mein bhi daravni dikhti thi (chuckles)

Nisha gives him a death glare clearly indicating him to SHUT UP.

Ka- Sorry!

Ni- (shows him the next photo) This is the day when I was going to the school for the first time.

Ka- terrorism failane? (chuckles again)

Nisha gives him a death glare again.

Ka- Sorry!

Ni- Nahi tu karle pehle apni bakwaas!

Ka- Arre bola na sorry!

Ni- (next photo) Yeh Suku ki photo hai when he first went to the school.

Ka- (monologue) Suku school bhi gaya tha! Wow!

Ni- (shows him the next photo) This was the first time Viraj came to our house.

Ka- (monologue) bachpan se hi chipku tha!

Ni- This one is from our first Diwali, me Viraj and Suku.

Nisha was telling about the pictures to Kabir while Kabir got lost in her even he didn't know when. He was never in the favor of love but there was something that was getting him attracted to her and the best part was even he didn't know anything about it.

Tujhe tak tak tak takte rehna
Teri bak bak bak sunte rehna
Kaam-kaaj sab bhool bhula ke
tere piche piche chalte rehna
ee to hai waste of time
Love is a waste of time
Pyaar vyaar waste of time
Ee love is waste of time

Just when the last line of the para came to his mind he realized what he was doing.

Ka- (monologue) Kabir! You are an idiot. She is not your type. Yeh kisi iske type ke item ke liye bani hai.

Ni- Kabir!

Ka- (realizes that she was calling him) Yes!

Ni- What were you thinking about?

Ka- Nothing! Just that you were born devil. (chuckles)

Ni- (irritated) I wish I never asked this question. (points out at the last picture) This was the last picture of the three of us. After that Viraj went to London and we stayed here. Since then we hadn't had a photo adding to the collection. We clicked photos individually but we have always decided to hang the photo of us, me, Viraj and Suku together on this wall except for the ones before Viraj joined us like my first birthday etc.

Ka- They are good! But Viraj looks better!

Ni- (staring at the farewell picture) he looks handsome.

Ka- (monologue) ab itna bhi nahi hai.

Ni- Let us go now!

Ka- Yup! Sure!

While going down,

Ka- Vaise in all these pics my to be bhabhi was not there. Why?

Ni- Well, she is not a part of our group as I told you earlier and these who were not in group had no right to stay in OUR wall.

Kabir chuckles.

Ni- What is there to laugh about?

Ka- you all never grew up!

Ni- As if you did!

Ka- come on, I am much mature than what you are!

Ni- Oh please! Who decided to ask the waiter in the restaurant?

Ka- Who supported me?

Ni- Who was doing things to irritate me?

Ka- Who was jumping in the puddles in the rain?

Ni- Who pulled me down?

Ka- Who...

Kabir was cut by Viraj who was standing on the last step. (Nibir were on the last 5^th step)

Vi- Shut up! (walks to them) Oh god! What is this? You two are fighting like kids to decide who is more mature?! Really!

Suku comes from behind.

Su- You need to wait Viraj. This is not even the half of their usual fights.

Vi- Guys you really need to grow up! (remembers something) We have to talk about the work. come with me to our ADDA.

Ni- Par Viraj kha toh lene de. Bhook lag rahi hai.

Vi- Moti ho rahi hai. Chal upar.

Ka- Viraj I think I should go.

Ni- (monologue) Fir shuru ho gaya iska Choocha mode.

Vi- No Kabir! You are a part of our group now. Come on up! We have things to decide.

They went upstairs while Kabir gave a smirk to Nisha.

PRECAP- FACTORY JAL RAHI HAI AUR USSE PATA NAHI HAI. LETS SEE IF ANYONE CAN STOP BEFORE IT IS TOTALLY BURNT. 😉