||All about sensing||...An ShivIka OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello peeps!!! I am back wid another of my OS's...
It continues from where Shivaay says srry...

"So...Sorry" he said after getting bathed in that bucket of water. He felt happy as she didnt dump all the water on him.
Her eyes went wide as she heared those wrds leave his lips. She couldnt digest the fact that he literally apologized even after she threw water at him. Suddenly guilt crept through her heart. Did she over react?! She thought to herself.
No..no!! Her mind screamed.

"Kya sorry?" She shoved him backwards. He was surprised.
"Haan...kya sorry? Aapko kya lagta hai..ki aap maafi mangege aur mein aapko maaf kardoongi..haan??" She asked shoving him again.
Shivaay innocently nodded his head.
"Mujhe prinku ne sab kuch bata diya...aur mujhe...vo sab nahi kehna chaahiye tha..."
He was cut in between.
"Kya sab nahi kehna chaahiye tha? Aapko toh hamesha bina dekhte hi pata chalta hai ki mein hun. Aur...vo kya hai jo aap kehte hai...haan...I can Sense you...I could feel you..aur vo sab. Kya hua uss sensing aur feeling ko. Bataiye.
Aap ye sense nahi kar sakthe the ki main jhoot bol rahi thi. Aapko meri aankhon ki sachaiyi nahi deikhayi diya kya?
Tab kya ye sensing aur feeling chutti pe gayi thi kya?" She asked standing wid her hands on her hips.
Shivaay was hell shocked nd was mum...as he didnt have answers to her complex questions.
"What can i do if i felt her presence...i just feel it. And she is not wrong...y didnt i feel it..y didnt i see that she was lying for her friend." He was lost in his thoughts when someone snapped him out of his thoughts.

"Kya hua...koi jawaab nahi hai kya?" She asked him.
"Vo main.. kuch..."
"Ab ye mat kehna ki aap meri aankhon mein nahi deksakthe the...kyunki aap mere bohot paas khade the aur mere aankhon mein dekhkar hi aap mujhse jawaab maang rahe the." She said clearly irritated.
Shivaay was now even more surprised at what she said. They were indeed standing close.

"Aap kaise dekh sakthe the, aapke aankhon main toh gusse ki paati padi thi. Bagad billa. Aur aapko lagta hai ki main aisa koi kaam karungi jisse aapko dukh pohonche?" She demanded an answer.
"Nahi...aisa nahi..vaise tum sach mein aisa koi kaam nahi karoge jisse mujhe dukh pohonche??"
"Nahi karungi... kyunki mujhe pata hai ki aapko accha nahi lagta."
Shivaay felt himself smiling lightly. She cared for him. She never did nor she can hurt him. Now he flet that he should make up for what he did.

"Sorry Anika...i am really..extremely sorry. Shuru se sab kuch keliye.. i am sorry. Kya tum mujhe maaf karoge?" Shivaay said.
Anika was standing there her jaw drop open. She still coudnt beleive he again asked for forgiveness.
"Paank phekiye." She said.
"Kya??!" He asked totally confused.
"Mujh par paani phekiye." She ordered.
He took the bucket and threw the water on her.
She shook her head nd she understood that he really apologized.

"Sorry...tum theek ho?" He asked.
"Theesri baar srry bola aapne?" She asked shocked to the core.
"Haan..ab batao, maaf karogi?"
She couldnt resist..nd she nodded her head in affirmative wid a smile.
Suddenly she felt warm along wid the wetness. She was engulfed in his embrace.
She took her hands up to return the hug but was hesitant..
"Thank u...thank u sooo much Anika. Mujhe itni badi ilzaam se bachaane keliye...vo bhi apni maan ko dav par laga ke. Thank u soo much...for everything. Nd sorry once again."
She felt her eyes welling up wid tears. She didnt know why..but hearing these two wrds from him...it wasn't just wrds...it was his feelings..those wrds came from the bottom of his heart. Now she returned the hug. She hugged him tight as her tears were wetting his shirt slowly.
He pulled her back when nd saw her. Her gaze was down. He cupped her cheeks nd wiped off her tears.
"Tum wapas aa rahi ho na?" He asked smiling nd made her look at him.
"Zaroor." She said smiling.
"Aur iss baar tumhe aur tumhari soch ko sense karne mein galati nahi karoonga." He said yanking her to him. Both were lost into each other's eyes. Nd suddenly a bucket of water came splashing on them nd their eyelock was brutely broken.
"Agar aap dono ka romance hogaya toh ghar chalein?" Asked OmRu in unison.
ShivIka looked at each other nd moved away. Looking at their drenched state they burst into fits of giggles. Nd the 4 returned home.

I hope u guyz liked this..
Do leave ur feedback...

Love Sharmi

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chandanagimsy thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww kitma Acha hota agar isa hua toh.. But nahi... This is was amazing..loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved this OS
Oh I so wish that the apology scene had continued on so we could see how Anika had reacted.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was awsm...
i really wish ke aisa agar dikhata toh..maza hi aa jata...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
it was awesome
highlight is omru splashing water
shivaay's sorry & anika's outburst were upto to the point
thnks for writing this os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWWW...its sach a cute os...[BR]Awesome...superb...AMAZING...
totaly rocking...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome os sharmi
i really really loved itt very much
aww loved their paani wala scene
omru just rocked they throw water at their bhaibhi
thanks for the pm dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww, that was so cute! I wish even a part of that could have happened in the serial! But sadly we were robbed of the aftermath! But this one was really cute! Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely os sharmi..haha unka
pani vala romance.. loved it.
omru are love.. Romance khatam karo ghr nai jana kya🤣
aww shivaay apologized dil se n they hugged. 😊 ❤️
aww babies😃
anika complaining about not seeing truth in her eyes n shivaay guilty..
write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Awwe! Is that like real 'Shivaay' because it's absolutely hard to digest this side of Shivaay.
But it was cute Yar. I liked it.
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