PV OS for Zuby - The Best Kept Secrets - Epilogue page 4 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: chikcyy

I totally agree with Sass. The fact that they were able to conceal the status of their union shows their commitment to the relationship. That twist had my head spinning, literally! The contrast between the media and true relationships is shown in this spectacular OS. Great work 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

thank you Chickyu. Loved your comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zuby87

The epilogue was just so beautifully executed honey Bee, you know its only today that it has finally sink in, that this OS was written in the honor of my birthday, I feel truly special that despite you being with your mom you still thought of me, and you honored my my wish of finishing the OS, I'm truly grateful, you are one amazing person as sweet as honey, now I know why Tess calls you honey Bee, you are truly the sweetest

I love the OS because it teaches us about never giving up and fighting for the ones we love regardless of the circumstances that surrounds us, hash gave aarti enough time for her to think about what she wanted, only a true gentleman can do that, he didn't go out and find himself another women because he had decided a long time ago that she was going to be the his women.

As for aarti, she knew that she couldn't live without him, though she tried to forget about him for all those 5 years but true love always finds a way, she tried so hard to please her parents and stayed away from him, but he was her only reason for living.

And for her to announce to the rest of the world that has was his, showed that she had finally accepted that his life will always be like that and she will have to adapt to that kind of love...I'm just glad that at the end she accepted him and their happiness comes first...thanks honey Bee, this treat is just so beautiful, and I will forever be grateful, not a lot of people get to receive an OS written in their honey...thank you dear, I so loved my treat
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i am so pleased thay you liked the story. Even if no one else did it would have been worthwhile. Hope you had a fantastic birthday❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: B-onesie

opportunistic much! But truth be told I would have explored something to that effect if I wasn't pressed for time already had something in mind.


nothing stopping you from penning it 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni


nothing stopping you from penning it 😛

nothing but lack of time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

nothing but lack of time.


I understand but it don't gotta be now! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni


I understand but it don't gotta be now! 😳

I will definitely take it into consideration.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Well now I agreed that The Best Kept Secret
Aah the first part was Hot, Thrilling, and the end made me quite surprised.. And the suspense revealed in next part..
Five years of separate, eight years of eagerness what more expect from here?
It was just destiny was testing their love which bonded at young age. The time was tender but with time it developed strong and the separation was last straw.
I will not blame Aarti's parents completely as everything was so sudden for them at one point they were very harsh. Choosing one between parents and husband is next impossible and I am glad though she chose parents for a moment but then she took a right decision at right time.

And the loveliest part was when she accepted him the way she did Ithe made me go awww.

Beautiful piece 👏⭐️

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