Maaneet FF - The Fear updated Part 4 pg 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow awesome prologue loved it can't wait for the updates thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Nice to see you with New Story.😊
The Prologue was so Interesting.😊
The Song was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue dear... So it would be Vikram who would be singing...
Waiting eagerly for you to proceed the story...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the concept and the prologue 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting
looking forward to story continuing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for new story...
Interesting prologue...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Geet meets Maan outside the gate. Vikram gets irked seeing this. Vikram had lost his mother 10 years back but he takes his cell phone & poses that he is talking to his mom.

He took the phone to his ears & said, "I love Geet but Maan always comes between us. Geet is very innocent. Maan is not the right person for her. He is only utilizing & trapping her but she loves only me."


Geet & Maan have the conversation.
Geet: You told me that you will come yesterday but you came only today. You didn't even inform me about it.
Maan: I was totally tied up & I could not even call you as there was no network. I'm sorry for that.
Geet: Only sorry does not help. You have promised me to have lunch with me.
Maan: Sure.
Both go to the 5 star hotel & order for the room service.
Geet: I need some privacy. Please close the door.
Maan closes the door. The background song is

Chhota sa ghar hai ye magar
Chhota sa ghar hai ye magar
Tum isako pasand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo
Main haan kahu ya na kahu.
Main haan kahu ya na kahu
Tum mujhako rajaamand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo


Ye ghar nahi ye hai ek sapana
Sapana nahi sach hai pyar apana
Ye ghar nahi ye hai ek sapana
Sapana nahi sach hai pyar apana
Is pyaar se lag ke gale..
Is pyaar se lag ke gale
Mulaakaat chand karalo
Darawaaza band karalo
Main haan kahu ya na kahu..
Main haan kahu ya na kahu
Tum mujhako rajaamand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo



Chhuna na mujhako o mere chaila
Gora badan ho jaayega maila
Chhuna na mujhako o mere chaila
Gora badan ho jaayega maila
Is rang ka is roop ka..
Is rang ka is roop ka
Na itana ghamand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo
Main haan kahu ya na kahu..
Main haan kahu ya na kahu
Tum mujhako rajaamand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo


Suraj sitaare ya phool laanu
Is ghar ko main kaise sajaanu
Phoolon se ia ghar ko main sajaanu
Bolo main kya kya saamaan laanu
Rehana mujhe dil mein tere..
Rehana mujhe dil mein tere
Bas isaka prabhhad karalo
Darawaaja band karalo
Chhota sa ghar hai ye magar..
Chhota sa ghar hai ye magar
Tum isako pasand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo
Main haan kahu ya na kahu
Main haan kahu ya na kahu
Tum mujhako rajaamand karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo
Darawaaja band karalo..
Darawaaja band karalo.

Maan & Geet get the room service.

After having their moments, Maan drops Geet to her place. Geet waves good bye to Maan before going inside. As she enters, the landline phone rings. Geet picks the call & asks, "Who are you?"

The unknown caller said, "I am your lover. Maan is not the person for you. I'm. Leave him & come to me.:

Geet: You don't have to tell me what I should do & what I shouldn't. I will do what I want to do & spend my life with the person I want.

She disconnects the call & goes to her room.

The landline rings after half an hour. This time her brother Brij picks the call but the unknown caller disconnects it after hearing the male voice.


When all are sleeping, landline phone rings at her room. It has a parallel connection to the phone downstairs. Geet picks the call & said, "agar tum mard ka bachcha ho toh saamne aakar baat karo - If you are a man come & meet me personally. What are you talking over the phone."

Unknown Caller: Of course, I will come but you should be alone. I don't want to see you with Maan.

Geet: Tell me who are you?
Unknown caller: Have patience baby. You will know once we meet. Bye sweetheart.
He disconnects the call.

Everyone in the house are disturbed over the unknown caller.

Next day, Geet meets Maan outside the college.
Maan: Why are you looking dull today?
Geet: One unknown call is troubling us.
Maan: Don't worry. I am there. I will find out that bas***d.


Darjee, Brij & Maan start their work to track the unknown caller.

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Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... darrr is such an awesome movie.. and a ff based on tat .. is really so cool... i havent seen geeth series.. but have heard lots abt this... superb work.. looking forward to it... and vikram... apurva aagnihotri
he will be perfect fir ths role nah? anyways... looking forward fir the next chappy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
So Vikram is the obsessive stalker here... Behind Geet? Seems like a trouble to Maaneet...
Thanks for the PM.

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