The way I love you. Anshi/Shivika OS. AN on page 5 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Meha101

Intense is the word comes to my mind after reading your OS. I was really able to feel the pain of shivay especially when he couldn't cry and shout as his brothers will get hurt...it was so real and relatable to his character

Loved it when OM said if something like this happens he will stand with his brother. Go for it...

Great writing and thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Note>> In case you pm pls include me in your list. Would love to read your writing.

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Yayy! Another piece by you. :D

RES

-Edited-

Hey, Soumya! Sorry to keep you waiting and I can't believe that I took so long to get back to this.

So you gave me a mini heart attack with this one. 😆 I usually have a habit of checking the length of the story and reading author notes before I start. So when I read that this was the last piece in the one month challenge, I was a little sad but then I was literally racing through this OS to see how it ends because I kept getting a sad ending vibes. I was just savouring the ending when I read that this story kind of leads to your current FF but ShivIka don't get married in that one and it broke my heart. Now I don't know whether I should read it or not. Though I'm sure I will, too tempted to let it go based on the angsty prologue. 😆

Anywho, back to your OS - It was . It was full of angst and very well written. The concern that Shivaay had for Anika for being confronted by the media, the pain seeing her in pain, the despair at realising that she doesn't want him in her life, very well depicted.

Loved the fact that Rudy boy and O stepped in to sort out the mess that these two had landed themselves in. And that bit with Tej! TejKara scenes are always sizzling and crackling with tension and that was again brought out here.

And the end! Perfect! Can't wait for another of your ShivIka pieces.