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jarir2010

@jarir2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awesome dear.i just loved it,specially shivaay's part.plz do write more. 👏 👏

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

as usual an awesome story by you

loved it totally dear

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey Soumya,

Just read this

Okay, I haven't expected such serious one in this series depending on whatever you have written till now in it, but you nailed it...👏

As usual it was awesome

The intensity of both their love can be felt in this one...

I loved Shivaay's concern for Sahil here. It was very thoughtful and caring of him that he took Sahil to the orthopedic doctor 😳

And I could really understand Anika's worry for his brother and also her fear of Shivaay not reciprocating the love she felt about him. I mean I can completely connect with her fear of getting hurt by him again and loosing him,... It's natural for a girl to feel that way, when the person is a man of few words, espe if he is like Shivaay singh Oberoi 😉... You described the situation very aptly...

And the most I loved in this one is the way you expressed Shivaay's broken self... Poor Shivaay, he held his brave front for his brothers and couldn't let out his pain... It really must be suffocating 😭

Om and Rudra were as usual the world's best brothers here. You depicted Tej's character nicely as well... After years of being the businessman he was, he was bound to think everything practically

And I loved how Om finally made Anika see that Shivaay really loves her... Specially the part where he made her realize that he didn't want to stand against her in future ... He is such a sweetheart😳

Finally the confession... It was absolutely mind blowing👏

And I loved how Anika handled the media, just as a Oberoi bahu should do 😃

Great job Soumya... You were too good 😃

But I m sad that this series ended... I m gonna miss this badly😭

Love you girl 🤗

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Kriti

@KRITII

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Aww

Such an amazing one

Really , Loved it ❤️

Keep Writing more

Love Kriti:)

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nivyascribbles

@nivyascribbles

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

that was so beautifully written 👏👏

you captured all the ranging emotions from fear, pain, anger, their love for their siblings, the acceptance of love and happiness so brilliantly

loved it

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Muskaan

@muskaan2298

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Omg I loved this so much. It was so god too see Shivaay so hurt and broken and as much as I don't want him to be hurt, seeing him like this is so different and refreshing. I can't wait to see Shivaay be in soo love with Anika.

And beautiful writing. It's amazing how you have kept their characteristics intact yet added your own touch to them! Beautiful

Edited by muskaan2298 - 9 years ago

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199190

@199190

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

This is the most beautiful writing i have ever read on any couple ever. And i am not exaggerating. Its the epitome of fine writing .

And it gave me chills

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hey people. Soumya here...

I know I have been late in replying and that too I am I am replying in a single post. Sorry about that. I have been really busy with work and the new VM that I am working on so I don't have much time these days.

But enough of that. I wanted to thank all of you for such a n amazing response and for loving this story.

I read each and every comment. And guess what...as a thank you I shall soon post the Shivika VM that I have made plus a OS on them. The OS may take a little time though since I hardly have time these days.

So again a very big thank you to all of you who read, liked and commented on this story.

Love you all.😊

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa
Hey people. Soumya here...
I know I have been late in replying and that too I am I am replying in a single post. Sorry about that. I have been really busy with work and the new VM that I am working on so I don't have much time these days.
But enough of that. I wanted to thank all of you for such a n amazing response and for loving this story.
I read each and every comment. And guess what...as a thank you I shall soon post the Shivika VM that I have made plus a OS on them. The OS may take a little time though since I hardly have time these days.
So again a very big thank you to all of you who read, liked and commented on this story.
Love you all.😊

Great to hear from you again Soumya! And the message you bring us is sure to send many of your readers over the moon! A VM did you say?! You should have seen how these eyes lighted up when they read those words!😆

And a OS with the VM!! Take your time Boss! Eagerly awaiting the delights you have in store for us

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Felicity_Khushi

@Felicity_Khushi

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa
Hey people. Soumya here...
I know I have been late in replying and that too I am I am replying in a single post. Sorry about that. I have been really busy with work and the new VM that I am working on so I don't have much time these days.
But enough of that. I wanted to thank all of you for such a n amazing response and for loving this story.
I read each and every comment. And guess what...as a thank you I shall soon post the Shivika VM that I have made plus a OS on them. The OS may take a little time though since I hardly have time these days.
So again a very big thank you to all of you who read, liked and commented on this story.
Love you all.😊

a VM?😲

a new OS?

you know i gave you a time limit for the OS🤪, waiting waiting and waiting😉