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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting chapter
Loved reading it to the core
Glad that asad is starting to realise all his wrong deeds and also started using his brains
Felt bad for ayaan though
But, till the time it makes asad realise how wrong he has been to zoya, I am with zoya in whatever she does
The precap is very interesting
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Very interesting chapter
Loved reading it to the core
Glad that asad is starting to realise all his wrong deeds and also started using his brains
Felt bad for ayaan though
But, till the time it makes asad realise how wrong he has been to zoya, I am with zoya in whatever she does
The precap is very interesting
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊


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I did not liked how Zoya always easily forgave Asad especially wen he dumped her 2nd time for d wedding wid Tanveer or traded her to Ayaan. It was really a wrong message for d girls who actually face such situations.
Zoya sounded like a bitch in d toy dialogue but its also true dat Asad wud have continued to hurt her after marriage while saying fake marriage dialogue. So Zoya is showing him wat a fake marriage actually means.
In d show, Asad hardly did any efforts in d relationship. Its Zoya who did most of d efforts in d relationship apart 4m all d insults, pain n tears. So its time for Asad to do efforts in their relationship.
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gr8 part
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First of all I am in love with this Zoya
So bold & someone who gives a tit for a tat! I entirely won't blame Gul for degrading heroines as partly its the mistake of audience too. Remember how Seher was bashed here in forum? I heard it's the same for Vrushika's character in IB! Because of which SJ negative cameo is turned into positive one.
I know how Sj's character Meera is bashed by BS fans in promo where Meera slaps Haider.
So when audience want the FL to bare all shit what can the ph do?
Anyways it was me who told u RD was approached for Farhan initially but opposite to Nikhat not Najma
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First of all I am in love with this Zoya
So bold & someone who gives a tit for a tat! I entirely won't blame Gul for degrading heroines as partly its the mistake of audience too. Remember how Seher was bashed here in forum? I heard it's the same for Vrushika's character in IB! Because of which SJ negative cameo is turned into positive one.
I know how Sj's character Meera is bashed by BS fans in promo where Meera slaps Haider.
So when audience want the FL to bare all shit what can the ph do?
Anyways it was me who told u RD was approached for Farhan initially but opposite to Nikhat not Najma


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Its very obvious dat Asad wud have continued to be hurt Zoya even after marriage so she turned d tables on him. She is done wid respecting his family who only used her to get Asad married knowing well how he always hurt her wen they wud not have let Najma marry such a guy.
Yes d audience is very big problem. Aahil was supported in wateva he did but Seher was Zeher for many people. Abt IB, Shivaay is forgiven for being so nasty to Anika but Ishaana is trashed cuz people want a seedhi-saadhi ladki for their Omkara. In dat forum, everyone only thinks wat kind of girls heroes sud have not dat wat kind of boys heroines sud have. I tried watching dat show but can't watch it due to Shivaay n misogynist forum people. As for Meera, I did no abt slap but people have problem wid her FU swearing but at d same time they don't mind Haider being a casanova n kissing another girl.
Ohhh so at d start also Farhan was planned for Nikhat but some told it was for Najma so got confused.
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Promo 2: Broken and Shattered Zoya

Asad was sitting sadly on d garden bench recalling d times wen he talked wid Zoya on dis same bench while sipping coffees. Farhan comes to him by whistling.

"Why u came here?" asked Asad unhappily.

"Luks like Zoe's so-called husband is unhappy seeing. I wonder wat Zoe saw in u before thinking to marry u. U don't deserve to be her husband. Zoe is ashamed of being a wife to such a man who gave dowry for his sister," replied Farhan still whistling.

"Wat dowry?" asked Asad.

"U gave Nikhat's future in-laws a bungalow for Nikhat's happiness which was dowry only. So, u have done a crime doing dat which is not redeemable," replied Farhan.

Asad is lost into thoughts.

"If u really thought dat ur sister will be happy after dis dowry then u r such a big fool. Ur sister will never be happy in dat house. U r ready to see ur sister married in such a family who u have to give dowry to keep her happy. Its like selling ur sister wid these dowry demands. U r ready to see ur sister married to a man who never stands for her just cuz Nikhat loves him. But sumtyms people make mistakes in loving a person not knowing how dat person is as they blind in their love just like my Zoe blindly fell in love wid a jerk like u. U think dat u r always right but u r so wrong. Even after being proved wrong by Zoya everytime u never trust her till she is again proved right. I am sure u must be thinking of taunting me by bringing my dead parents as u r such an expert in dat," said Farhan.

Asad recalled how he always hurt Zoya by bringing her dead parents in between.

"No Farhan, I was not thinking dat," said Asad.

"Good for u," said Farhan wid a smile n left 4m there.

"1st it was only Zoya who was troubling me n now Farhan joined her. I am suffering for all my mistakes. I am suffering for always hurting Zoya. Farhan said right dat I am such a big fool. I sud not have given dat bungalow to Haseena Bi but wud have told Ayaan to make Nikhat understand dat Imraan is not right for her," said Asad.

At night, Farhan n Zoya were sitting in Farhan's room.

"I will divorce him. I can never forgive him," said Zoya thru her tears.

"Zoe, plz don't cry. (wipes her tears)U don't luk nice wid tears in ur eyes. I always wanted u to marry a guy who will keep u more happy than me. Don't know why Allah did injustice wid u. U don't deserve unhappiness n pain. U deserve a guy who will truly care for u, love u, trust u & respect u. Sadly, u did not got a guy like dat which u really deserve," said Farhan.

"Plz, take me away 4m here. I feel so much suffocated here. Everyone used me for their benefits be it Phuphi, Najma or Asad. Nobody cared how my future will bcum after getn married to Asad. I did so much for dis family n in return they only used me. Plz, take me away 4m here. I can't live in dis house anymore," said Zoya while crying bitterly.

Farhan hugged her n caressed her back while saying, "Zoe, those who all made u cry will themselves cry. Allah will punish them for hurting u."

"U care so much for me, Farhan. I love u. I love u so much," said Zoya emotionally.

Asad who was saw everything 4m outside felt sad after hearing their convo. He feels ashamed of himself for always hurting Zoe n seeing her cry cuz of him. He went in d garden while crying. Farhan who saw him outside n realized dat he heard everything followed him. 4m d time he came, though he hated Asad he sumtyms felt dat he is truly regretting for his mistakes n he really loves Zoe but he can't forget how he always hurt Zoe. He can't forget dat he made Zoe always believe dat their marriage is fake.

"I pushed Zoya too far dat she feels suffocated in dis house," said Asad sadly, "Zoya told Farhan dat she loves him. No, they r just friends n she told to him in casual way. I sud not jump to conclusions like Zoya told dat I wud always do. Farhan is right dat Zoya deserves a guy not a guy who will keep her happy not a guy like me who made her cry."

Asad heard a sound of clapping. He lukd up to see Farhan smiling at him.

"Wow! So a husband became an stalker listening to his wife's talks wid her friends n then saying emotional dialogues to himself. Glad dat u did not jumped to conclusions dis time wid Zoe saying I love u to me n realized dat it was casual. If u had not been a jerk earlier then u wud not have seen dis day. Zoya wud be smiling cuz of u instead of crying. U broke n shattered my happy Zoe. U snatched her self-confidence, smile n happiness. U r facing Zoe's hatred 4m just 2-3 days but Zoe faced ur hatred for 7-8 months which is a very big difference. D man who cud not be a good son n good brother can never be a good husband. Ur mother may have taught u good things but ur way of thinking became like ur step-mother. U did not let ur sister do wat she wants n always bullied her. Cuz of dis, she is even scared to talk wid u like a normal sibling let alone talk like a friend. U never did any efforts in ur relationship but only Zoe did d efforts," said Farhan.

"Do u love Zoya?" asked Asad.

"Wat do u mean?" asked Farhan shockingly.

"I know u will say dat u both r just friends. Well, even if u both fall in love I will be happy for u both especially Zoya. I will be happy dat if not me then someone else can keep her happy n never bring tears in her eyes," replied Asad wid a sad smile.

Farhan is shocked wid his reply. He can't believe dat is ready to let Zoya fall in love wid someone else. He thinks dat Asad deserves a chance to win back Zoe.

A/N: Zoya is supposed to feel suffocated with Asad and his family after what all she went through. No girl can be happy in this situation. According to me, if someone truly loves you they will not let you get married to a person who hates you for almost everything so Dilshad and Najma failed in that thing. I wanted someone related to Zoya in the show who would be actually against the marriage of Asad and Zoya as Asad always hurt her and then Asad would have prove his love for Zoya. But it was only Zoya who always had to prove herself for anything. Asad always got Zoya easily even after all his unforgivable mistakes.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing precap
It's nice to see asad realizing his mistakes and trying to mend them
It was indeed very important for him to see the difference in what he thinks is right and what actually is right
Seems like farhaan is going to lend support now
Looking forward to know what happens next and will asya unite or not
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊

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