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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Honestly how full of self importance must you be to just assume that you have been kidnapped when you wake up. No wonder She was amused and annoyed at his behavior. He was a bit of a self absorbed brute. And clearly his live revolved only around his business. Yet, I must agree even I would be a bit frantic if I had no means to contact "outside world", "civilization as it were. And for him who ran a bit company and had these things on hand it must have been totally insane for someone to live like that.

At least eventually he was so hungry that not only held his east favourite food down but even thawed out a bit. Even said thank you. And they shared a moment

When he finally got over himself he noticed her. And boy did he notice her in a big way. Despite their short period together, their feelings could not be denied. Starting off slowly at the beach, in the kitchen and at dinner, till finally they gave in to their craving for each other.

When I first read the story I felt that he had come there for her somehow. And I still feel that way. He didn't know it. He ended up there to find her, and she chose this as her place of safety to find her love. It was their destiny to be there, not matter the circumstance of them getting there.

I felt sad that she did not want to go with him. She was so hurt and jaded that she gave up on people, save children. What a terrible way to be. She found her little piece of heaven and clung to it, alienating herself from the world, most especially the life that she knew.

But he had to face reality and had to leave her behind but not for long. Soon he was back. The impression that she left on him made such a huge impact. The man that lived for his business gave it all up to join his reclusive love the middle of nowhere.

And he made a happy discovery. They were having a baby. Happiness is ...❤️.

Something came to me as i was writing the review though. It made me sad that they stayed in this space, hiding away from it all. This gives her perpetrators the victory. I would like to confront those people and overcome the hurt that forced her to this life. And if they still wanted to live in their seaside hide away then fine, but it just feels that she has so much more to deal with. Maybe when you have time, you can explore that.

Sorry, sorry, sorry, I know what you were trying to achieve with this OS, but it's just my view. Use it don't use it.

I honestly loved it⭐️👏

Edited by B-onesie - 9 years ago

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie
Will copy and paste soon

😆

you didn't actually give me a review for this one!

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

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you didn't actually give me a review for this one!

I will copy the whole of my 2 lines

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie
I will copy the whole of my 2 lines

oh hell no! I want my proper review! 😡 😡 😡 😡

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Sensational ! What a sweet OS. Away from all the 'Worldly evils' Aarti has created her own 'Paradise' ! Yash is fortunate to get someone who is true and honest and wants a simple life instead of the 'greedy , money-minded , corrupted, spoiled ' beauties [ with heavy makeup ! ] of the 'civilised society' !!!! Good job. Well written. Thanks

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sass8

@sass8

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Second time reading is the best 😃. I slightly updated my feedback cause re-reading always makes me see thinks I've missed the first time.
😊, I like it. Mr. Grumpy literally woke up on the wrong side of the bed only to be seduced by the simple life that Aarti was living. I get that he was confuse at first not knowing where he was and why , still Aarti abd the kids manage to make him look a little ridiculous and he realized that he was behaving like a spoil child and judmental. Funny how she gently mocks his irritation, impatience and judgment at first. I say that force vacation made him a little more humble😆.

Two strangers meeting in a remote location discovering each other, no outsiders to disturb or meddle in their romance. They couldn't resist their instant attraction. It was beautiful with the beach , sun and sand, very romantic backdrop

Aarti chose to run form the life that have deceived her; loosing her father brutally because of betrayal is really painful, but its still part of her heritage and as she so rightly said, this is no fairytale but one still need a few material to live comfortably. On the other hand I think she found a purpose in life now with these children; before she was just going thru the rich girl motion.

I salute Yash for making this compromise and at the same time staying true to himself. He can't abandon his responsibilities, that would have been shallow of him, nor Aarti. I am glad that Aarti understood and maybe with time she'll come to see that she, because of their love, can slowly accept the part of the life she left behind without loosing herself completely. Love their passion, connection and understanding. 👏

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

amazing os

beautifully written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful OS
oh god yash had accident
thank got aarti took care of him so well 🤗
loll yash thought aarti kidnaped him & she have gangs🤣
both aarya got attracted to each other 😉
wow aarya made love to each other 😳
but yash had to go back to his families
aarti didn't want to go back to that life ever again 😭
aarti is daughter of film maker who died coz of heart attack 🥺
bcoz he was cheated by the person whom aarti dad blindly trusted 🥺
it was really heart breaking for aarya when they separate 🥺
yippee yash came back to aarti 🤗
OMG aarti got pregnant 🥳
those kids were really supporting toward aarti 🤗
yippee yash going to stay with aarti at same place 🤗

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Unreserved on page one. Sorry if you don't like my comment😳

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