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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

Honestly how full of self importance must you be to just assume that you have been kidnapped when you wake up. No wonder She was amused and annoyed at his behavior. He was a bit of a self absorbed brute. And clearly his live revolved only around his business. Yet, I must agree even I would be a bit frantic if I had no means to contact "outside world", "civilization as it were. And for him who ran a bit company and had these things on hand it must have been totally insane for someone to live like that.

At least eventually he was so hungry that not only held his east favourite food down but even thawed out a bit. Even said thank you. And they shared a moment

When he finally got over himself he noticed her. And boy did he notice her in a big way. Despite their short period together, their feelings could not be denied. Starting off slowly at the beach, in the kitchen and at dinner, till finally they gave in to their craving for each other.

When I first read the story I felt that he had come there for her somehow. And I still feel that way. He didn't know it. He ended up there to find her, and she chose this as her place of safety to find her love. It was their destiny to be there, not matter the circumstance of them getting there.


I felt sad that she did not want to go with him. She was so hurt and jaded that she gave up on people, save children. What a terrible way to be. She found her little piece of heaven and clung to it, alienating herself from the world, most especially the life that she knew.

But he had to face reality and had to leave her behind but not for long. Soon he was back. The impression that she left on him made such a huge impact. The man that lived for his business gave it all up to join his reclusive love the middle of nowhere.

And he made a happy discovery. They were having a baby. Happiness is ...❤️.


Something came to me as i was writing the review though. It made me sad that they stayed in this space, hiding away from it all. This gives her perpetrators the victory. I would like to confront those people and overcome the hurt that forced her to this life. And if they still wanted to live in their seaside hide away then fine, but it just feels that she has so much more to deal with. Maybe when you have time, you can explore that.

Sorry, sorry, sorry, I know what you were trying to achieve with this OS, but it's just my view. Use it don't use it.

I honestly loved it⭐️👏



Tessy, I'm borrowing Mario's comment and adding my own to it 😳


Mario, it's said that True Love Finds Its way!

That is what happened here. She was hiding from the world, in a secluded place, her true love found her. Same for him also. He was so engrossed in his own world (corporate world) that he had no time for anything else.


They were born for each other yet were living worlds apart. It was destiny that brought them together. Initially they fought, (yes their banters) but once he got time to evaluate everything, he noticed her. Same way she noticed him and they were drawn to each other. So much so that they became one. Cause that's what they were supposed to be.
They Touched each other's Heart and Soul. That was their Honest Touch.

The separation came, which broke them completely. He left her... Only to live his world behind and build a new world with her, in the world that she had created now.

Tess I agree with Mario. I also feel that you should explore and show that confrontation. To face and confront her demons from her past that made her run from them and hide in this second world of hers.
After that if they decide to leave here forever, it will make more sense. I know you'll be busy for rhe next couple of weeks, but do give it a try


Once again this OS is also 👏. ⭐️






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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sass8

Second time reading is the best 😃. I slightly updated my feedback cause re-reading always makes me see thinks I've missed the first time.
😊, I like it. Mr. Grumpy literally woke up on the wrong side of the bed only to be seduced by the simple life that Aarti was living. I get that he was confuse at first not knowing where he was and why , still Aarti abd the kids manage to make him look a little ridiculous and he realized that he was behaving like a spoil child and judmental.
Funny how she gently mocks his irritation, impatience and judgment at first. I say that force vacation made him a little more humble😆.

Two strangers meeting in a remote location discovering each other, no outsiders to disturb or meddle in their romance. They couldn't resist their instant attraction. It was beautiful with the beach , sun and sand, very romantic backdrop

Aarti chose to run form the life that have deceived her; loosing her father brutally because of betrayal is really painful, but its still part of her heritage and as she so rightly said, this is no fairytale but one still need a few material to live comfortably. On the other hand I think she found a purpose in life now with these children; before she was just going thru the rich girl motion.

I salute Yash for making this compromise and at the same time staying true to himself. He can't abandon his responsibilities, that would have been shallow of him, nor Aarti. I am glad that Aarti understood and maybe with time she'll come to see that she, because of their love, can slowly accept the part of the life she left behind without loosing herself completely. Love their passion, connection and understanding. 👏




Loved and agree with what Sassy wrote. But most importantly, the last paragraph is ⭐️



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Posted: 8 years ago
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hum, weird, 😕I completely missed the baby part and to think I read it twice..😔.
Anyway they may be room for more in the future, in light of Aarti unresolved past from reading Bee and Nikky feedback. This was a common analysis.
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Os sis i loved it. Wow This is Www. True. Love. Prevail. Com. Aww but Yash was still a tubelight and Aarti still stubborn has ever.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Love yash hi leave everything and come back to aarti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Honest Touch.
Really it is. The title is just too perfect to explain. From starting to ending. There was a rhythm you held on. From his waking up in one unknown place, his irritation about surroundings, slowly melt in the environment and then falling in love without thinking much. True, how can anyone spend a life like her without technology at such speedy life. Bur then there she was.. Different than others
And her that's uniqueness caught his attention and he was mesmerised. The reason you showed was very impact full. Being only daughter she must be spoilt rotten by her father but still there She was. Unique. It was clear that her world was around her father only and when it collapsed it was not easy to accept everything just like those were. The bitterness engulfed her heart and she chose her life alone, out of everything.
But as you said every cloud has a silver lining. . The silver lining came as her prince, by Co incident but for her sent by God . She had fallen for him immediately without knowing anything, gave herself to him just listening own heart. But still she was not ready to go back to the world again which snatched her world from her, especially after knowing who he was.

But there only the test of their love started and they won when he returned to her after four months. It took time but he returned as they were meant to be together. His love for her was pure that's why he could return leaving everything just for her. As her Honest Touch was waiting for him once again.
A strange peace surrounded while reading it and I must say it is one of your special writing for me. Hats off.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful os ,I loved aarti and yash instinte connection even with yash's ego it still shone through, even with the separation they love never lacked and that is what made yash make the decision to live with his love but not abandon his family completely...loved it

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