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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: gmgi

Shrutha I don't know how you do it. But at a time a hand in so many piesšŸ˜‰ And all with so many different flavours. Truly admirable. šŸ‘ It is so true that if you look inside yourself you can see God because he lives in our heart. If you remember this you will treat your fellow beings with the same affection with which you treat yourself. This message is so profound in your stories.šŸ‘


Thank you Geena šŸ¤—

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Beautiful! This is so perfect, Bhu. šŸ‘

I loved the zoo scene. I've always disliked zoos for this very reason. How depressed and lonely the animals look. 😭 Every time I go there I think about how Bhudevi must cry at the sight of her children imprisoned unjustly in cages. I love how you wrote about prakriti and sanskriti needing to co-exist. The problem occurs when people prefer one over the other, and try to suppress the other. We need both, there comes a time and place where both create the ideal life.

Thank you Shrii 😳

Prakriti and Sanskriti do need to co-exist. But they are not one half of the other also. Lot of people make this mistake.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Zoos and circus both create bandhan's which is against Prakriti's ways. Unfortunately Sanskriti also creates unnecessary bandhan. Only if you rise above Maya you can understand difference between bandhan and maryada

I agree Shruthi šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Finally I am here:P

Taking in account of the last two parts.
I was really happy that Dharani got a time that she could be carefree and enjoy it to herself.
Dance is ā¤ļø
And a role that she herself had defined it.
I loved it:)
Too curious about Pravha:P
Her state of mind but her calmnessā¤ļø
The flashbacks are enough in place.Janani and Dharani and Govind,what a bonding!
And the dream,you can guess what could I interpret.
The real meaning it brought,it was touching and teaching.
I love when Dharani is all mirthful.
Govind is all😳
Curious for Mrinalini too:P

Thank you laadli ā¤ļø
OF course you are curious about Pravha :P
I can guess what you did. I knew you would get it 😳
He really is ā¤ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Well written update Krishna with a social message ! The main content of this story is revolving around environment and evolution and it's unwanted changes . Well done , all names are highly imaginative and well suited to this story . šŸ¤—

Thank you Madhuri šŸ¤—
Environment and evolution are highly important. It is sad that human takes it for granted 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was really wonderful! Loved Shri Vishnu's explanation! The zoo scene was so nice! Loved how Dharani made the emu feel better!

Thank you Choti 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all :)
Here is chapter 8 :) Do read and review :)
For a parallel story, the story of Janani, please do read Earth's Child by my friend Shreya :)

PERCEPTION

Dharani, though hurt by her family's perception of her, refused to bow down to it and cry about it. Her birth was for a purpose. She couldn't waste the purpose. She remembered the dream she had had last night.

"Vasudha", said MahaVishnu. "There is someone who wants to meet you"

"Okay Swami", said Dharani, her eyes glinting with curiosity.

"Dharani"

A soft, melodious voice heard Dharani; a voice filled with music, dance and knowledge. She turned to see the golden beauty Hamsavahini, the One everyone worships as Vidya Swaroopini, the Mother of the various arts, the Goddess of Knowlegd and the One who wears white, Mata Saraswati Herself.

"Mata Saraswati", said Dharani, tears forming in her eyes. She rushed to fall at the Goddess' feet, and feeling Mata Saraswati's hand on her head, blessing her, she slowly got up, and stared into affectionate dark brown eyes.

"Dharani", said Mata Saraswati, smiling. "Narayana and I felt it was time for me to meet you"

Dharani nodded, a little speechless.

"Dharani, you know you are the Earth", said Mata Saraswati. "You know what else the Earth is? The very base of knowledge, just like the Earth is the very base of emotions as well. Anything man needs, the Earth has, for the Earth is the Mother who bears them. In that way, you have all the knowledge within you"

"Mata, every human has all the knowledge within them. It depends on how one harnesses it. That is the secret of your blessing. When you bless someone, it means they will be able to harness the knowledge which is already present", said Dharani.

"You are very right, child", said Mata Saraswati, smiling. "And you have the blessing in plenty. Not just me, Lord Hayagriva Himself has blessed you"

"I know Mata", said Dharani. "But for my own understanding, why the failing?"

"It is a lesson. Not to you, but to your family, which they have sadly not learnt", said Mata Saraswati. "A lesson to show that even academics has to bow down to love and compassion. Only when you have both can you understand what Vidya actually means. Vidya is not mutually exclusive of that. All types and forms of education must be respected"

"Ji Mata", said Dharani, smiling.

"Now, onto the more important part", said Lord Vishnu. "You were made to fail for yet another reason"

"What was that, my Lord", asked Dharani.

"Lets call it a way to induce you to work to make changes, shall we?", asked Lord Narayana, grinning at Dharani.

Dharani still couldn't believe that her husband and Mata Saraswati wanted her to help with bringing changes to the education system. But how will she do it? Her mother will never understand her point of view, for her mother was one to always support teachers. Whose help could she take other than the Lord and Pragati for this? She needed to work it out.

Dharani's eyes became hard, as she heard the Earth being insulted again and again. She was not arrogant as Satyabhama! All of that was Krishna Leela. But the worst that hit her was people saying that Shridevi was His favourite wife, His primary wife, His cherished wife. Hllo! They were talking about the Lord who doesn't differentiate between anyone. Would He ever differentiate between His wives or play favourites? Dharani knew for a fact that He loved Bhudevi as much as He loved Shridevi. If Shri was cherished, so was Bhu. They were equal in His eyes, they are equal in His eyes, and they will forever be equal in His eyes. Why do people never see it, and choose one over the other? Well, usually it is Shri, but even then. They choose Shri due to obsession over Her, rather than respecting and understanding Her importance. As for Bhu? Not many cared about Her. They don't get that if they don't respect Bhu, Shri would never truly bless them. Shri and Bhu were such that they were equal, they were the same. Bhu had Shri in Her, and Shri had Bhu in Her. Both together provided the world with wealth. One was obsessed over, one was forgotten. Without one, the other won't exist. And without both, there is no Narayana. Which made Dharani conclude that Shri was born in this time as well. Just where she was, Dharani didn't know. Even as she thought that, a vision attacked her.

"Swami, you can't descend without Shri", said Bhudevi.

"I am not going to. She will reside in my heart", said Narayana.

"But it is not fair", said Dharaa. "If Bhu is born, Shri also should be"

"Love, do not anguish over it. Your sister is always with you", said Lord Vishnu.

"I know that, but isn't it unfair to Her?", asked Bhudevi.

"Isn't it unfair to you when your own children forget that you are also Mahalakshmi?", asked Lord Vishnu.

"I am used to that, Lord", said Vasudha.

"You shouldn't be. This Kali Yuga is about you love. Don't you see it?", asked Lord Keshava. "As Alamelu Manga, as Andal, and soon, as Dharani"

"But Bhu can never be if Shri isn't", said Vasudha.

"Love..", said Lord Vishnu, though sighing, knowing Bhudevi was right. He needed Shri as well.

"Alright Vasudha. An ansh of Shri", said MahaVishnu.

"Ansh? Why not purna?", asked Bhudevi.

"Purna is not possible. Rules are rules", said MahaVishnu.

"Okay. Half at least?", asked Vasudha.

"We can keep that flexible", said Lord Vishnu. "Ansh or half"

"As you say lord", said Bhudevi. "You aren't complete without my Shri"

"And I am not complete without my Bhudevi either", said Lord Vishnu, pulling Bhudevi close to Him, enclosing Her in His arms.

And there it was. Her Shri was also there. Excitement filled Dharani, and she felt complete. Her soul sister was out there somewhere!

In Ksheer Sagar...

The Eternal serpent, Adisesha's heads swayed and danced. He could feel it, and His happiness grew by leaps and bounds. His Lord and His two mothers were watching Him with love and affection, and also slight knowing in their eyes. He didn't mind. He was too full of happiness!

Tall and dark-skinned. Well built, but no bulging muscles. He was dressed in modern clothes. His bare feet were Lotus like. She looked up to see His face, but all she could see was a blur.

Dharani opened her eyes. This was her Narayana in the flesh, she knew. She remembered Pragati and her talk about the importance of Ramayana and Mahabharata in Dharani's life, in the sense that the way of living. They had, after a long discussion, come to the conclusion that Dharani's life was going to be like Bhama-Krishna, as well as Sita-Rama, with a mixture of Bhudevi-Narayana.

The bustling in the household brought her to her senses, and she suddenly realized. Her father was coming from Saudi! All to question her about her future plans. Closing her eyes, she told herself, I will get through it. Lord, I am leaving this to you. Give me the strength to get through it'

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Posted: 8 years ago
This chapter really is my favorite, Bhu!

I love the soul-to-soul connection of Shri and Bhu. I low how you wrote of Bhu's desire to unite with her sister Shri.

I also love how you wrote that people do not truly love Shri. Most are only obsessed with her. They want the material wealth, but not many truly understand what she stands for. Shri is not material wealth alone. She symbolizes prosperity, and prosperity comes in many forms, not just material wealth alone. Until people realize that, they will never truly respect Shri.

I am excited to read about Bhu finding her Shri out there.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Two chapters to review for:
Chapter 7 was very balanced, what with Dharani-Narayana, and Radhika, who by the way is kind of annoying, and Mrinalini, who is a doll. And, I loved the zoo part, it's so true.
I hate zoos, they are demeaning to animals and birds. Just as we are free, they should be too.

Chapter 8 sent out a really strong message about Narayana-Shri-Bhu. Shri and Bhu complete Narayan, and there is no way He would favour one over the other. And, about the point about Satyabhama being arrogant-Bhudevi is a mother, She is The Mother. She can never be arrogant, She has too much love in Her. All in all, amazing work. I am loving this story. ā¤ļø

I also love how you brought in Bhu's love for Shri and Her understanding why He needs both of them. And of course, the whole obsession with Shri- Dhana.
Edited by KanhaKiChutki - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update and the very profound realisation that people love money rather than wealth.
Nyna

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