TS:Mission Shraman Milap:Prologue and Chapter 1:Page 4(4th November)

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Author's Note (important)

Sleep evades me in spite of the threat of my nose running away with too much phlegm... sad isn't it! And I miss EDKV too much.. Such tragedy I tell you!

So here I am, with a OS/TS (yes max a TS and not a TS turned into a SS...because I am terrible with updates... yes I know you guys are rolling your eyes right now)

This scene is being playing in my mind since the episode when Daboo makes that master stroke of dialogue,

Aap Suman di se gussa ho kyunki aap unse bahut pyar karte ho hain na?' and our smart sassy theda Shravan babu could do nothing but look at Pushkar who had a wide grin on his face. So here I am...where in ideal world Pushkar uses his brain instead of 'you know what' and think about his bhaiya bhabi and their current equation.

For a change, Preeti is also not her dumb self and decides, Life is beyond making promises to your sister and what is the point of kasam, agar zindagi hi na rahi...?

Posting the prologue...let me know what you guys think.. Will post the chapter by tomorrow late night.

INDEX

Prologue: Page 1 Next Post

Chapter 1: Page 4

My other work on ShraMan Hume Tumse Pyar Kitna : Completed.

Edited by shalz_123 - 8 years ago

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE:

Inside Preekar's room

Pushkar deep in thought, muttering to himself, This doesn't make sense at all!'

Preeti was busy applying night cream and humming to herself! She half heartedly asked him thinking might be some case he is working on, Kya? What doesn't make sense?'

Bhaiya aur Sumo!

She visibly stiffened, Matlab! Kya kehena chahate ho...?'

Tumne dekha na Bhaiya ko? Bhaiya was going crazy with worry and yet when I asked him about his feelings earlier, he always rejected saying they are only friends. Aur Sumo bhi. I was so sure that they loved each other and then Aditya happened and so I thought, may be I was wrong! But aaj Daboo ke sawaal se Bhaiya, itne uneasy hone lage..Pyar to hain? To fir izhaar kyun nahi?

Preeti was stuck! What was she supposed to do? Pushkar didn't know, what she knew..at least she knew Suman di's side of the story! But why is Shravan behaving the way he is! She has no clue! And thinking has never being her strong point! So should she tell Pushkar whatever she knew! Suman di ka Vaada tor du? But yeh Suman di ke Bhalai ke liye hi to hain...

he could clearly see her squirm wih indecision. He was sure soemthing was up!

Preeti kya tum kuch janti ho jo mujhe janni chahiye?

Pushkar, woh mujhe tumhe kuch bolnni thi... and out came the entire truth, the memory box, her Suman di's heart break, Ramnath Uncle's blackmail, Shravan's breaking friendship and last but not the least Suman di's promising to marry Aditya to appease Nanu!

Pushkar was shocked! It took some time to settle in the entire truth and he was sure, his wife will not be lying about something so important and grave.

Enough is enough!

Bhaiya and Sumo needs to sort this out and he, as their well wisher I need to do something about it. It is now or never.

"Mission ShraMan Milap" starts!

Pushkar gets up from the bed pulling her up.

Lets go!'

Kaha?

Bhaiya ke room main!'

But Pushkar, unki aaj peheli raat hain!

Peheli Raat ek dusre ki akhri raat na ban jaye, isiliye hi jana chata hu!'

They softly knock the door, (just in case you never know) and open it to see the most unique Pehli Raat' indeed!!!

To be continued...

Please let me know what you think of the prologue...I know this update doesnt have ShraMan...but as you can clearly see it is ShraMan milap after all!!!

Love

Shal

PS:Not proofread

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shal you should be sleeping na??
Shraman milap ...haye iska hi toh intezar hai na 😆
Preekar use their brain ..ye toh kamal ho gya ji
I so want dumb preeti to open her mouth once in her lifetime to help her di
Very interesting teaser !!
Cant wait to read the most unique SR n mission shraman milap
Update soonish love!!

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nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very well written 😊 Finally Preekar are proving to be of some use.

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Shal you should be sleeping na??
Shraman milap ...haye iska hi toh intezar hai na 😆
Preekar use their brain ..ye toh kamal ho gya ji
I so want dumb preeti to open her mouth once in her lifetime to help her di
Very interesting teaser !!
Cant wait to read the most unique SR n mission shraman milap
Update soonish love!!

Main Ullu (english wala) hu kya karu..😆😆😆

SR ka pata nahi yaar... romance aur mera rishta dur dur tak nahi...🤣 haa frandship or love confession tak leke jayenge zarur...

Preekar better be of some use!!!!

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nith125
Very well written 😊 Finally Preekar are proving to be of some use.

Aah, Nith, Thank u so much :) I hope u find the chappy also well written...

Yes Preekar needs to use their brain... 😕 which I will make them here at least...

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

HatkewaLi suhag raat
Go go preekar kuchh to karo
Update soon

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fugitives123

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Posted: 9 years ago

LOVE IT ❤️ 🤗

First your note 😆 pushkar uses what instead of his brains Shalini bolo bolo 😛

This Shraman clearly need help and soon acc to us. Let the cvs take their own time. U take this responsibility to make PushPreet slog it out...they get paid just to smile and be sad Kya? Not done. Kaam pe lagao Dono ko.

Looking forward to the next update where we get a peek into the Suhaag raat ka kamra 😉