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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: teju19

nice one
can't stop smiling through out the os..
please continue this story!!!

Thanks so much Teju😳😳
One Shot likha tha par koi ni will post one more shot 😆
will Update soon😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

it was really, really beautiful!

i really want you to continue it!
please, please, please!

Thanks so much Annie😳🤗
Yaar OS ko continue karne ko keh rahi ho?😆
Please please please keh ke emotional blackmail? 🤣
Sab mujhe emotional blackmail kar rahe hai🤣
Kher koi baat nahi, will continue 😉
Just one more shot 😆
Will update soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: mkjr

Soo good plz make a second part of it plz

Thanks so much 😳😳
Agreed one more shot on this 😆
Will update soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: poornima_15

It was soo good ... plz continue it 😊

Thanks so much Poornima😳😳
OS ko continue yaar?😆
Okay dear I will post one more shot on this soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Niha0606

i will comment after u update this😆pls pls pls

Niha you also joined emotional blackmailing gang?🤣
Accha thik hai I'll post one more shot on this 😆
But I want your view after it😆
Will update soon 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: tani_0209

Hahaa.. nisha kept on talking wid kabir

Hw embarrassing dat cud b😆
Bt it was good..
I'll luv to read few mre parts of d story..plzz

Thanks so much Tani 😳😳
Yaar OS k more parts? 😆
Agreed tani and making it a TS😉 isse jyada ni ho payega😆
Will update soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Res..

Will comment soon but please continue this


Okay Anmol
Continuing it for another shot😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Wrote 2nd and the last shot...jhel lena pretty plz 🤣🤣

Thanks for appreciating and liking it🤗❤️

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NiBirTS: Memorable Birthday

Second Shot

I highly wanted to sleep but our chats were repeatedly crossing my mind. After playing flipping game on the bed, at last I glimpsed my mobile clock still lying on the bed.

What! It's 3?? I rubbed my eyes and confirmed the time. It still showed 3AM.It means I'm thinking about Kabir since an hour...no no not Kabir... I was just thinking about our chats...yeah. But still yaar... why am I overthinking about it? I've apologized now so, I don't think he must be thinking about it... but what if he would really be thinking? But why am I thinking what he would be thinking? Argh! Stop thinking about this whole thinking Nisha! Don't prove yourself mad!
Whatever it is! Let's start YouTube...

I switched on the mobile data for YouTube as I wasn't getting sleep and I found it only way of distraction...or rather peace of mind.
I was just going to open the app when another notification showed up from whatsapp.As you probably would have guessed it was from none other than sweetheart...oh God Nisha! He's Kabir alright! Kabir...yeah... only Kabir...hmmm...but why is he there? And what does he want now? Argh! I'll just kill him for doing this to my innocent mind.

I opened the chat. It read :
I kno u aren't gettin sleep ;-D


I sulked looking at it. I then gulped as I drew my eyes towards the contact bar to find him online. Arey yaar! Now it will show tick marks that I have read it meaning I was awake turning out his statement correct about me. Chal beta! So ja! (Girl better to sleep! )

And before I could do anything another message showed up:
Missing me sweetheart?

I sighed and here's again our chats :

N: Wil u stop pulling my leg now
K: nope sweetheart <3
N: kabiiir u wil b dead now
K: hope dat helps cz u r not lettin me to liv
N: wat do u mean???
K: nothing let it b :-D :-D

Now this guy is irritating me!!! And what is wrong with me? why am I talking to him? YouTube Nisha... YouTube!

N: bye!

And without wasting a second I opened YouTube. A whatsapp notification showed and I swiped it out of the screen.

I was browsing the recent videos to select which one to watch when again whatsapp notified me about 2 chats from Kabir. I ignored it once more.
I took out the earphones soundlessly from drawer beside the bed and plugged them in.
I continued my browsing as well as adding many videos to watch later list. Obviously I can't miss any video related to Salman Khan yaar. As I was going to play one, there I got whatsapp call from him.

Without internet my mind is rambling to him and with internet Kabir is not letting my mind think something else. Now Kabir you are gone! Today his death is calling me!

I strode out of the room with my mobile. I plucked out the earphones tossing it.
I shrieked on top of my voice, "Go to hell! Dare not call me next time!"

Piled up anger had just got a sound and I disconnected the call immediately. I then switched off mobile data. I took a deep breath and next my anger started to descend my brain, step by step each passing second.

I stared at the mobile for a while then sighed and was about to return to my bed when my mobile roared. And it was Kabir's voice call this time.
I took it as a little guilt has crawled up my heart.
There was complete silence between us and I broke it after some time.

"Why have you called me if you don't want to say anything?"I frowned.
"I'm sorry" he uttered.
"I'm sorry, I just..."
He cut in, "It's okay swee...erm...Nisha"
"Kabir you can never be serious right?"I chuckled.
"Never" he laughed.
"Okay fine... sleep now it's 3 goodnight" I chirped.
"Hey Nisha wait" he quickly spoke.
"Yup what?"

"Erm...I really hope you aren't angry with me now" he said hesitantly.
"No" I sighed.
"Thank God!"He exclaimed cheerfully.
He added, "Can I ask you one thing Nisha?"
"Yeah, all ears to you"
"Single one would also do" he laughed again.
"Kabiiir"I spoke irked.
"Accha alright alright...you wanted my birthday treats right?"
"Hmmm"
"So I'm coming along with bhai to your place next week. You tell me when are you free?"
"Erm" and I started to predict when I would be free.
"You thinking about when you would be free?"
"Yeah"
"Means you believed me that I'm coming?" He jeered.

I clenched my jaws and was about to rejoinder when I got a tap on my shoulder. I spun to find Dolly Di with half open eyes. Oh no! God!

"Hello? You there?" Kabir spoke over phone.

Before I could speak anything she snatched away my mobile. The next instant she smiled widely understanding who I was talking to and returned my mobile.

"Hello? Nisha?" I again heard Kabir.
As I stood with a nervous face, she hinted me to speak.
"He...hel...hello" I stammered.
She then laughed quietly and waved her hand indicating she's going and left for bedroom.
"You saw a ghost?"
"What!"
"Then why were you stammering? "He smirked.
"Dolly Di just got to know I am talking with you this late" I stated.
"What! Dolly bhabhi!"
"It all happened because of your stupidity! Idiot! Again now she and Jiju would start wheedling me..."
"Arey yaar! My state is no different than yours. You know Saurav bhai chants your name in front of me."

He then imitated Saurav's voice, " Kabir you know, Nisha likes Salman Khan. Nisha lives on mobile data only. Nisha doesn't like sweets that much. Nisha feels comfortable wearing loose tops and jeans. Nisha's favourite colour is black. Nisha this! Nisha that...Come on yaar... I think if he would have chanted God's name so many times instead of yours, he would have got the promotion he's yearning for"

I laughed out loud after losing my control.
He chuckled "You are laughing Nisha but seriously I have only told you a part of the Nisha puraan"
I held my stomach and somehow controlled my laughter.
"O..Oh... so mu..much... torture eh?" I questioned convulsed.
"Torture at its peak Nisha and I want to end it now " he stated.
"So?"
"So I have an idea"
"Great! What's it?"
"They are coaxing us for marriage right? "
"Kabir I know that...you tell your idea"
He sighed, "So they would stop coaxing us if we agree"
"Agree with what?" I asked confused.
"Our marriage idiot!"
"Kabiiir" I groaned.
"I'm not joking... I...I'm serious Nisha" he spoke in dead serious tone.
"L..look Kabir I... I"
He barged in," how would I look over phone?"
I shrugged my shoulders.
And next I heard a carefree laughter from him.

"Kab dasna band karega tu?" I spoke annoyed.

"Tujhe shaayad pata nahi but I'm living around Naagins nowadays so thoda influence to aayega naa" he giggled.

"Buddhu" I chuckled.
"Does that mean you are okay with our marriage?" He teased.

My lips went distraught again.

I sighed "when do I expect you to be at least a bit serious in your lifetime Kabir? "
"During our kiss sweeetheart "
"Kabir! Stop flirting alright! Otherwise I'll murder you"
"Kya karu yaar ye dil hai ki maanta nahi" he smirked.
"It's 4 now. I'm going to sleep" I said in a go.
"Okay goodnight swee"
I interrupted warning him,"If you say sweetheart one more time naa then you see"
"See what? Your cheeks getting pink eh?" He smirked.
"No your cheeks getting pink due to my slap"
"Haaye atleast you would touch me doing that"
"Kitna k hai yaar tu!"
"I swear aaj tak kisi ladki se nahi kari itni kpanti" he chortled.
"Idiot mai hi mili thi tujhe?"
"Ha yaar mil hi gayi tu aakhir mujhe"he spoke contented.
I pondered over his words and went silent.
"Nisha, I told you about my birthday treats but what about my gifts yaar?" he asked candidly.
"I'll give you when I'll receive your treat" I averred.
"Okay"
"Happy birthday once again" I spoke calmly.
"Thanks once again and Good night sweetheart love you bye" he spoke hastily and cut the call.
I shook my head chuckling and retired to sleep. K kahinka!

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Edited by aNibirFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Res again 😆
Unres

Again a beautiful chapter 👏
Kitna pareshan kiya nishu ko kabir 😆😆
Bechari salmaan ka viedo bhi nhi dekh pai 😔😆
Ikchapayari nagain ke sath hai kya kabir ?? 😆
Nisha asked when kabir will be serious and his answer during our kiss was🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Loved it and want more 😛
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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naagin line was🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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