'With love...': Shivaay( Letter scene)

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Hi guys!
These are just random fictionalized thoughts which may or may not possess some truth in them
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There was a slight pause between the words glaring at him from the page, and his voice: 'With love..' as if the name that followed the endearment was a minor detail, additional information at best. Funny how it was two successive letters that gave him pause at different points. But he did not allow himself to think about any of this, he couldn't. There had been too much thinking already. 'With... Love' And 'with love...' But of course it did not mean anything. He was just irritated at her lack of attention to his words. What dreams did she hide in her eyes as they stared into his own? What promises lingered on her lips as she smiled in the hope of a beloved future, as distant as a stranger? Who was this woman, shy and silent? Who was he, stumbling over beliefs he did not care for? He always forgot to let go of things that belonged to her, like her hand, this letter, anything really, as if, anything she touched needed to be tangible for him, to make her real: this stupid, irritating girl who had made it difficult for him to live peacefully.

With love 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

Hi guys!
These are just random fictionalized thoughts which may or may not possess some truth in them
😆

There was a slight pause between the words glaring at him from the page, and his voice: 'With love..' as if the name that followed the endearment was a minor detail, additional information at best. Funny how it was two successive letters that gave him pause at different points. But he did not allow himself to think about any of this, he couldn't. There had been too much thinking already. 'With... Love' And 'with love...' But of course it did not mean anything. He was just irritated at her lack of attention to his words. What dreams did she hide in her eyes as they stared into his own? What promises lingered on her lips as she smiled in the hope of a beloved future, as distant as a stranger? Who was this woman, shy and silent? Who was he, stumbling over beliefs he did not care for? He always forgot to let go of things that belonged to her, like her hand, this letter, anything really, as if, anything she touched needed to be tangible for him, to make her real: this stupid, irritating girl who had made it difficult for him to live peacefully.

With love 😆
Geet

I loved your post... beautiful explanation to what we are dreaming shivaay might be thinking of. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was a lovely analysis of the 'chemical locha' happening in Shivaay's brain. He was actually trying to make a conversation to a dreamy Anika. 😆 He is having a tough time dealing with his emotions against his obesession with blood-line. Anika on the other hand has no expectations from Shivaay though she is definitely attracted to him, so is relatively more at peace, at least till SSO lets her be. 😉
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How beautifully u have written!!! totally agree with u 😳
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Originally posted by: geet.a

Hi guys!
These are just random fictionalized thoughts which may or may not possess some truth in them
😆

There was a slight pause between the words glaring at him from the page, and his voice: 'With love..' as if the name that followed the endearment was a minor detail, additional information at best. Funny how it was two successive letters that gave him pause at different points. But he did not allow himself to think about any of this, he couldn't. There had been too much thinking already. 'With... Love' And 'with love...' But of course it did not mean anything. He was just irritated at her lack of attention to his words. What dreams did she hide in her eyes as they stared into his own? What promises lingered on her lips as she smiled in the hope of a beloved future, as distant as a stranger? Who was this woman, shy and silent? Who was he, stumbling over beliefs he did not care for? He always forgot to let go of things that belonged to her, like her hand, this letter, anything really, as if, anything she touched needed to be tangible for him, to make her real: this stupid, irritating girl who had made it difficult for him to live peacefully.

With love 😆
Geet


😳 nice post.agree with u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This post is pure love ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really amazing post dear and a beautiful way to express that wonderful scene
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz

I loved your post... beautiful explanation to what we are dreaming shivaay might be thinking of. 😆


😆😆Thanks!
Even if these are not ALL of his thoughts, some of them were😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot😳
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Thank you so much😃

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