ishkara ff: hidden emotions (part 5 updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hlw everyone
i'm again coming with a thought
i love ishkara
& can't get over them
in serials they r not shown
so decide to write story on them
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my story starts after confortation
as we all know om hates lies & liars
he consider ishana as his frnd & now hatr her
& never ever want to see her again
what if he meet her again & again?
she also curses her fate for meeting him again
how om know about all her secret?
what is the secret she kept only to herself
what is om reaction after knowing ishana's truth?
will he forgive her?
will he again befriend with her?
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to know more stay tune
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its my 4th story on this forum


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part 1- pg 1

part 2-pg 2
part 3-pg 2
part 4- pg 3
part 5- pg 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting ...
Tictoc ... Updt soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 1
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ISHKARA FF: HIDDEN EMOTIONS
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After Returning from morning walk, om looked at the sunrise photographs which he clicked. He always loves nature, natural beauties more than artificial. Unlike artificial, the mother of nature is always symbolizes truth. There is no lie, no conspiracy in her. Maybe that's why he connected to her, loves to play with clay & now become an artist.
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Suddenly he heard Anika calls him
Anika: Finally u return? i thought u go to the world tour. who take so much time on walk? u r slim then why u walk so much time like a fat person who wants reduce weight?
om: anika.
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(om wanted to tell something but anika cut between)
anika: forget it ur leg, ur walk, ur weight, ur choice now help me out billu ji from kitchen. he doesn't allow me to make alupuri. what i say about him. ur brother is no. 1 dheet. when i make alupuri he us eager to eat than others & eat full plate but then always said 'ye alu kaun khata hain' my heart says everytime pour alu on his mouth. so, come fast
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anika left him alone. om could not help smiling at her innocence. she complain like a little girl. she & rudra r very much simillar only difference is she had beauty with brain & rudra had biceps without brain. almost 7 months ago she came in shivaye's life officially. he & rudra always want her to be with shivaye as only she can affect shivaye after his family. but its really shocking the day shivaye declared he loves her & wanted to marry her. she is completely opposite from shivaye. but like dadi always said, "IF YOU & YOUR PARTNER ARE SAME TYPE OF PERSON THEN YOU NEVER LEARN DIFFERENT THINGS IN YOUR LIFE" & it's really true because of her shivaye point of view changed towards other class people. and for him she us like a best friend more than elder sister in law. thats why he called her by her name instead of calling her bhabhi.
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om's trance broke due to huge sound which coming from kitchen. he hurriedly enter into kitchen & found there is a huge fight between shivika. rudra & soumya became pigeon messenger in their fight. some how om calm down both of them.
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after finishing cooking in dinning table all the family member sit together & enjoy breakfast.
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suddenly om's phone rang
om: hello, yes, ok, i come there at sharp 10
rudra: O, r u going to date
om: shut up rudra
shivaye: where r u going
om: i told all of u that i got a call from ROY REHAB CENTER where i also addmitted when i'm became an drug addict
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(everybody remembered om's situation that time. the uncontrolable om)
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om: they r planning some art teaching classes for patient. Mrs. roy(owner of the rehab & business woman) thought maybe artistic thing give them happiness & new motive in life. so she requested me to teach them some sculpturing, painting for two months. and i say yes
tej: you should be say yes in joining business instead of that
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om decide to keep quite because talking with him is a waste of time.
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dadi: omkara very good
oom: thanks dadi as you know i always do soomething for them. me myyself went t thhough it.
janvi: now finish breakfast otherwise u become late.
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after finishing breakkfast omkara go to the reha center.
When Om reached there he got phone call from Mrs Roy
Mrs Roy: Omkara I have an emergency work in office so I can't come in rehab today. Mr sen is there to introduce u with other teacher & students & told u about ur class schedule. Hope u have no problem
Om: Definitely not
Mrs Roy: Ok, have a great day
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Mr sen: Hello omkara nice to see you again
Om: My pleasure
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He took on teachers room & introduce to other two teacher a boy & a girl like his age. Boy holding guitar & girl holding sitar in their hand. Its obvious they r music teacher. After introduction
Om: So we 3
Girl: There is a girl also. She is here Some time ago then her phone rang so she went outside for receiving it
Boy: Ok our class time started. We meet u after class. Mr sen plz take us to the class
Mr sen: Yes lets go. Omkara u wait here plz I just come
Om: Ya no, problem
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. They left omkara look here & there, suddenly he heard a voice, he turned
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Girl: Sry for disturbing, important phone call so have to recieved ( her eyes is on her phone till now then she look at him
Om: Ishana
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Author's note: IGNORE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES & SPELLING MISTAKE
& plz give ur views so that i know about writing quality
posive & negative both allowed
Edited by RB.ritz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds interesting
do update soon
n pm m
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ISHKARA FF: HIDDEN EMOTIONS (part 2)
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Om: Ishana
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His mind went back to 8 months ago
He saw a girl who left her bangle he back her it. Again saw her in his exibhition. Then one day saw her sitting in the stairs, she looked gloomy, her face swelled because of her wound. But her eyes clearly told that she was badly hurt both outside & inside. He sat beside her & talked with & some way he shared his own little pain with her. He again & again met her. They became friend, he consider her his true friend. She told her name is bela. As a good friend He tried to solve her problem, so wanted to introduce bela with his girlfriend ridhima, as ridhima is a girl so bela felt comfortable with her while talking with her problem. Suddenly problems began between ridhima & him. He got angry on ridhima as she told lie to him. Icing of the cake bela told him, ridhima felt insecure about her. He got so angry, he didn't digest the fact that ridhima doubted on him. But later they solve their issue. But they found something fishy about bela & ridhima's new friend mama. He talked about this with shivaye & rudra. Rudra investigated about bela & shockingly the truth came out. Bela was not bela, her real name is ishana. She was none but a cunning con girl. She was a liar. The girl he saw sitting on the stairs who was wounded that is nothing but a lie. Acting just gained his sympathy. She was trying to con him for money. His trust was broken, his friendship was broken. Next day he confront her. She shamelessly accepted she was ishana & she was both mala & bela. He shouted on her he saw a little guilt in her eyes. she told him truth is a luxury, truth is not for them, then she was going. But he told her truth is not a luxury, truth is a choice & it is learned by family. Then she came back. Instead of feeling guilty, she shouted on him. Insult his family, insult his brothers, ridhima & told that 'one day I remember her' & left.
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after 8 months he again saw her standing in front of him.
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He came back in reality. He shouted on her
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Om: what are you doing here? Now who you want to con?
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ishana: excuse me. I am not here to con anyboody. I am here because I am going to teach those patient dance, I am their teacher
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Om: teacher you? The person herself is a bad girl, telling lie, try to con people, how can she taught others to become a better person. Oh, now I get it why you are here. Your new prey is Mrs. Roy. She is the no 1. richest jewallary business woman in india. So, you are try to con her. She creat this rehab to help drug addict people, she wants this patients get happiness in their life & their mind divert from drugs. So she decided learn them art & you use this opportunity, take a fake name, become helpless girl in front of mrs. roy maybe said her you need work & u only know dance. Being a generous woman mrs. roy's heart melt on your acting & she ask you to become a dance teacher to those patient without knowing your real motive. How can a great woman like her can understand that you have a ugly face behind this fake innocent face. But this time I can't let you succeed on you motive. I tell mrs. roy about your reality.
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Ishana can't bear all this accusation on her, she also shouted on him
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ishana: Call her right now & tell her everything. Wait I dialled her number from my phone, give it to you as you must tell her about my reality. But you know Mr. omkara singh obroi she knows everything about me. I told her everything. she knows I was a con girl. Inspite of knowing that she give me this job.
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Om: what are you saying? she knows you are a con girl.
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ishana: yes, i want to correct you I was & about her acknowledge she knows in this world not only black & white people exist but also grey shade people exist, she knows life is not all about truth but lie is also part of it unlike you. Here you & me are collegue, so behave yourself, don't poke your nose on my matter. Do your own work & let me do my work. Don't give me your morality lecture, I don't need it I have my own.
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Om became shocked how can mrs. roy give her this job after knowing her reality. But at the end of the day it's her choice, he can't change this. He should do his work for which he came.
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Meanwhile mr. sen back
mr. sen: so you both introduce to each other. good, very good. Omkara, your class is now. let's go, I take you to your class
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Om scienlenly followed him he himself doesn't want to see ishana anymore it's her bad luck due to his promise now for two months he have to bear her everyday
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after they left, ishana scilently cry. She is hurt by his behaviour. He was not that person whom she met 8 months ago. She tell herself why? whe always her? why her past again come her present. She was happy when she offered this job. She came rehab center, met two other teacher then her phone rang she left room for recieving it. After she came back, she saw omkara there, she wondered why he is here? She remember everything how she decideed to con him, how she became his, she didn't want to break him. She tried to separate ridhima & him by creating misunderstanding between them. One day he knew about her reality. He was so angry on her. She felt guilty & try to left this place but then he raise question on her upbringing. His words work like a fire which burn her. She is more shocked a sorted person like omkara think that peoples action depend on their upbringing. So, she decided to burn him also in this fire. She shouted on him, insult his family like he did to her some time ago, then left this place.
8 months after that incident she again see him standing in front of her. He behaved so rudely which is not definitely his character. He can't forgive her, can he? How can he forgive her after what she done? He hates lie & she told him lie. she betray their friendship. Maybe she deserve this.
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ishana's phone rang, she pick up
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caller: hello ishu
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ishana: hello maa
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caller: ishu are you crying? everything is okay their na?
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ishana: everything is okay here & I'm not crying
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caller: ishu don't tell lie. Your voice declare that you are crying. I'm your mother, mother knows their children state by their scilent. tell me what happened?
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ishana: nothing big happened maa. remember mona so get little emotional. But you know your daughter is brave. she can handle herself. Don't worry.
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caller: I know you are brave. But it's a mother duty to worried about her children. you are not mother, the day you become you understand this fact.
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ishana: ahhh universal dialouge by every mother.
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caller: chup, take care of your self, bye
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ishana: bye mom
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precap: who is ishana's mother?????
why mrs. roy gave her job after knowing she is a con girl?
how om & ishana face each other everyday?
can om know about ishana's helplessness?
will he able to forgive her?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting.
Waiting desperately to next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NYC update
Ishkara meeting again wow
Who is the mother
What happened to Mona?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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y i am thinking mrs.roy hi ish ki mom hain
may b she adopted her
n wht happened to mona??
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ISHKARA FF: HIDDEN EMOTIONS (part 3)
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Some days past since ishkara meeting, both of them completely ignore each other. One day om was on his way to go to the rehab center, suddenly his phone rang, om picked the call
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Om: Hello
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Caller: Is this omkara speaking?
Om: Yes who are you?
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Caller: I'm from the city hospital. Sometimes ago a heart attack case came to us. The patient name is Mrs. Roy. We find your number from her last dialed call. Are you a relative of her?
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Om: No, I'm not her relative
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Caller: Then inform her relative & ask them to come quickly at hospital
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Om: Okay
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Om doesn't know any of Mrs. roy's relative. He call Mr. Sen & informs Mrs. Roy's health condition. Then go to hospital
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IN HOSPITAL
Om: I'm omkara Singh obroi. Where is Mrs. Roy.
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Receptionist told him the room number. Omkara went there he saw doctor there
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Doctor: She had Heart attack & it's not 1st time. We saw in reports she suffered in heart problem since a long time. Some random people take her in hospital from road. Her condition is very critical. Survival chances are 10%. Weimmediately opperate her. But we need signature in approval paper. Until her relative came we can't shift her O.T
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Om: You start treatment, I signed those paper.
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Doctor: OK
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They take her to the OT
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Om wait outside. After sometimes He heard a familiar voice he looked there & found l there along with Mr. sen
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Ishana: Where is Mrs. Roy I want to meet her
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Nurse: You can't meet her right now. She had heart attack & now she is in OT
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Ishana: How can she had heart attack? She is happy. U want to meet her right now mean right now
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Nurse: Look mam, we understand your feelings but you can't meet her now
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Ishana: No you are not understanding my feelings. The lady she is my mother & you can't let me meet her
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Nurse: Look mam it is a hospital. Stop Screaming like this, control your emotions, wait here.
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Ishana wiped her tears & standing beside the OT door.
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Om is shocked by this new relevation. Ishana is Mrs. Roy's daughter. How can it possible? 1st time he notices ishana looks is totally similar with Mrs. Roy. Maybe at her young age Mrs. roy look like ishana.
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Om's trance broke as doctor came out from OT
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Ishana: Doctor how is my mother?
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Doctor: We are really sorry. We can't save her. She have serious heart disease long ago which kill her anytime. If any patient survive then it's a miracle. Fill all the formalities then you can take her body
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Ishana ran away from there. She reached in the temple, look at the idols angrily
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Ishana: are you happy now? She is also gone. Nobody is left now love me. You snatch everybody from me.. Why you always call them to you whom I love. Why are you written only pain in my fate. You are trying to punish me for my bad deeds. But I don't understand if you want to punish me then punishment should apply on me instead of my dear ones. Is it you justice? Give punishment ones for others fault. Why you call my mother to you? She is a good woman. In earth people need her. But me, I'm a bad girl, terrible liar, betrayal where nobody needs me you kept me alive. Why don't you call me to me. I guarantee that, I will entertain you. But don't take her life.
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Ishana cried loudly & fall on the floor. But she don't knew there was also another person who heards all her conversation.
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After all the funeral rituals complete, next day ishana went to the rehab center.
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Mr. SEN: Ishana it's okay if you are not here for some day. We all are here for handling everything. You can take your time.
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One word boy: Yes mam we take care everything
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Ishana: Okay, I tell you all a joke
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Mr. SEN: Joke? Now
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Ishana: Yes, there is no time for telling a joke, now hear me
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Ishana tell a very funny joke, everybody can not help but laughing at her joke.
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Ishana: Okay now hear the 2nd joke.
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She again told the same joke. Now everybody laugh a little. She told the same joke 5th time. Last time nobody ideas laughing
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One employee: Mam why are you told a same joke 5 time? We can't laugh at a same joke again & again
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Ishana: That's the point. We can't laugh at a joke more than thrice then why we cry on a same pain again & again. Whatever happened it's hurt a lot but crying for it is no solution. You have always two options in your life either you sit & cry or wipe your tears & starts live your life. And you know from my little experience in my own life I learn that LIFE IS A JOURNEY NOT A DESTINATION TILL THE JOURNEY CONTINUES YOU HAVE TO LIVE A LITTLE FOR YOURSELF, NO MATTER HOW HARD LIFE HITS YOU, TELL IT I'M HARDER.
so if we live our life then why not smile in our face instead of tears. This rehab center is my mother's dream now it's my responsibility to live her dream. I hope you all understand
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Everybody: Yes mam
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Ishana: Then go back to your work.
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Everybody left Mr. Sen told ishana she is very brave & exactly like her mother then he also left
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Ishana smile little & turned, saw om standing behind her stare her shockingly.
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Ishana: Omkara I want to talk to you on very important matter. I know you don't want to talk with me. But it's important.
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Om: Okay tell
Edited by RB.ritz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
poor ish :(
update soon

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