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Posted: 9 years ago

yuppp update kar rahi hu read it n enjoy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: senchaitali131

Haii di, I just read your story. Its very good . l liked this story very much.when l read this story l can't stop my tears so painfui. Please update soon, add something to make all happy


thank u dear
updating next part read n comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Update pl its been long




Love and prayer
Yogini


sorry sorry sorry yr update kar rahi hu read it
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**** Ek Ajnabi Rishta***


Phele toh very very very sorry guys ...kafi late ho gaya but kya karti yr study bhi jaruri thi na ...m abhi bhi puri tarah free nhi hui hu but meri pas itne sare pm aaye h apni fic cont.karne ke liye ki mjhe abhi start karna pada phir se lekhna hope aap sab ko pasand aaye jada time nahi h mere pas par jinta h usme jo lekh saki wo lekh diya ...

M phele he yeh bata du m regular update nahi karugi within 15 days har update hoga mera jab tak m study se free nahi ho jati hope aap sab bhi meri problem samjho



N yes ek aur request h ...to my new readers plz comments ke saath saath like bhi karo taki mjhe pn send karne me asane ho
Plz first page pe jaa kar sare readers jaruri se like karna warna m pm send nahi kar paugi ...
Ab no more silent reader plz agar m apke liye time nijal kar lekh sakti hu toh aap bhi mere liye like aur comments toh kar he sakte h na
Thank u n sorry once again for being late


Part 12


Next morning



Raj jin sawalo me ghura hua raat ki aagosh me soya tha ...uski subha bhi unhe sawalo me ghire hue hui ...



Brig chandok ne kisi jaruri kaam se Naveen ko do din ke liye delhi jane ko kaha par naina Naveen ko jane he nahi de rahi thi ... Woh khud ko Naveen se do din ke liye dor karne se katra rahi thi...


Jabse naina KMA aayi thi Naveen bas kuch ghanto ke liye he usse alag hota tha par ab toh baat pure do din ki thi ...


Naveen ka khud maan nahi tha Naina ko yuh chod kar jane ka par woh bhi mazbur tha ...usne kisi tarah naina ko manaya aur yeh promise kiya ki woh jald se jald wapas aayega ...aur raj ko naina ki zimedari de thi...usne Naveen ko insure karya tha ki woh uski garhazri me naina ka pura khayal rakhega ...




Jab Naveen gaya toh cadets aur faculty apne classes aur kaam me lag gaye ...shalini naina ke saath he thi...par major Nair ki drill ke doran ek first year cadet ko chot aa gayi thi jiski wajah se shalini ko na chahte hue bhi naina ko room me akela chod kar jana pada ...



Naina akele room me bor ho rahi thi toh woh thoda fresh air lene bahar ground me jane lagi ...naina ab puri tarah familiar ho chuki thi KMA se... toh ab usse dar nahi lagta tha kabhi kahi bhi jane se ...



Naina corridor se jaa rahi thi jab usse raste me major nair mile...
Naina ne unhe neglect karke jane lagi par jab major nair ne dekha ki aaj naina akele hain... koi nahi hain usse unki baato se bachane wala toh unhone socha ki aaj moka acha hain ...woh jo kaam ab tak nahi kar paye the woh ab kar sakte hain ...



Nair : (in sweet tone) miss ahluwaliya ...



Major nair ko khud ko bulate dekh naina ke kadam ruk gaye ...uski thoda dar lag raha tha kyuki major nair ne kabhi usse baat nahi ki thi aur naa hi naina ko major nair pasand the ...
Naina thoda jhijhakte hue peche mudi...



Naina : (hesitantly) jiii ...aapne mujhse kuch kaha ...



Nair : (smiling) jii main aapse he baat kar raha tha...aap jabse aaye hain tabse humare bech koi baat he nahi hue ...
Wase maine sunna apke saath kya kya hua hain pechle kuch saalo me ...



Major nair ka bolne ka tarika itna ajeeb tha ki naina ko bohat uncomfortable lag raha tha ...major nair naina ko head to toe ase dekh rahe the jase usse scan kar rahe ho...


M.nair : bohat dukh hua jaan kar ki kase apni izzat sare bazar nilam kardi kuch logo ne ...wase ab toh aap thik hain na ...


Naina ne badi muskil se bas apna ser haa me hila payi ...usse ab woh sab yaad aane laga tha jo woh bhulane lagi thi...



M.nair : wase apko toh pata hoga na ki aap kitna bada badnuma daag hain apne bhai ke liye ...
(Naina shocked ho kar major nair ko dekhne lagti hain)
Arre ase kya dekh rahi hain aap mujhe ...apko pata toh hain naa ki aapke peth peche kasi kasi baatein ho rahi hain ...aakhir aapka balatkar hua hain( nair janmuch kar ase shabd istamal kar raha tha jo seedhe naina ke dil ko chir ke nikal rahe the ...) Ab dekhiye na kuch log toh yeh bhi kah rahe hain ki major Naveen ko aapko unki zindagi se nikal fakna chaheyi aakhir ek asi ladki jiska balatkar hua ho (naina ne apne andar ke dard ko dabane ke liye aapne aakhe kas kar band karli ...nair ka bar bar yuh balatkar shabd ka istamal se naina ko asa lag raha tha jase woh sab phir se uske saath ho raha ho ...) Uske liye ab samaz me koi jagah nahi rahti hain ...ab aap ek izzatdar zindagi jene ke layak nahi rahi hain ...ab apki sahi jagah wahi hain jaha se aap aaye hain...uss gande nali se wahi hain ab apki asli jagah wase mere hisab se ab apko yaha nahi kisi kothe pe hona chaheyi waha sahi kemat lagegi apki ...(naina nair ko dekh rahi thi ...) Wase miss ahluwaiya ek baat bataiye aapko woh sab yaad toh aata hoga na ...i mean thode maze toh apne bhi liye ho gay ...(naina shocked ho kar nair ko dekh rahi thi) arre ase mat dekheyi mujhe ...(with dirty smile) aab har insaan ko kuch jarurate hoti hain apki bhi hogi...ab agar apke jariye unhone apni jarurat ko pura kiya hain toh apki bhi toh jarurte unke jariye puri hue hogi ...(naina ke kandhe pe haath rakh kar ) wase aagar apko jarurat ho toh yaha bohat se log hain aapki jarurr ko pura karne wale ...aap bas ek ishar kar dijeyga ...(major nair ne naina ko bohat he dirty look dete hue kaha ...naina major ki baatein se andar tak kaap uthi thi ...)



M.nair : (ek kadam naina ke aur pas aate hue) wase kase kase kiya tha unsab ne apke saath yeh sab ...aap mujhe bata sakti hain...main toh bas apka dard batna chahta hu ...kaha kaha chua tha unlogo ne apko aur kase kase kiya tha woh sab ...( naina ab major ki aur baatein nahi sunn payi woh wapas apne room ke taraf bhagne lagi besud ho kar aaj phir se naina ke saath woh sab hua tha ...jismani taur pe nahi par mansik taur pe ...balatkar sirf jismani nahi hota woh ek ladki ki ruh ko bhi masal kar rah deta hain ...kahne ko toh major nair naina se sirf baatein kar rahe the par unke baatein mentally ek tarike se naina ka balatkar he kar rahi thi ...jiska dard jiski chikhe jiski tadap sirf aur sirf naina ko he sunai de rahi thi...)


Naina ke waha se bhag jane ke baad major ke chahre pe ek evil smile aa gayi ...unhone aas pas dekha kisne nahi dekha tha major ko naina se baat karte hue ...aur woh ache se jante the ki naina ab kisi ko kuch bolne ke halat me rahegi nahi ...


M.nair : (apne haatho ko dekhte hue) chalo major chal kar haath dholo pata nahi kis gandi chiz ko chu liya hain tumne kahi koi bimar na ho jaye tumhe ...


Yeh kah kar major nair waha se chale gaye ...par unhe yeh nahi pata tha ki kisne unki sare baatein sunli haa...koi waha aa gaya tha jisne unki aur naina ke bechki baatein sunli jiski aakho me aasu aur gussa aur nafrat dono thi ...woh thi pooja jo naina ko dhunte hue aayi thi jisne major ko naina ki insult karte hue sunn liya tha ...uski aakho me aasu naina ke liye the aur gussa nafrat major nair ke liye ...




Naina buri tarah rote hue bas apne kamre ki taraf bhagi jaa rahi thi ...woh phir se tut gayi thi ...uske pairo me jase jaan he nahi thi par phir bhi woh kisi tafah ladkhadate hue kadmo se bhag rahi thi ...bech me ek do bar toh naina gir bhi gayi uski sir me chot lagi thi jisme se khoon nikal raha tha ...naina jase he apne room ke pas puhchi usne dekha ki samne se raj abhimanyu ali alekh yudi huda sab saath me aa rahe the ...raj ne jase he naina ko ase halat me dekha woh bhag kar uske pas gaya ...naina raj ko dekhte he jhut se uske gale lag gayi isse phele ki raj kuch bolta naina raj ke gale lage jor jor se rone lagi ...raj aur baki sabhi naina ko asa dekh kar pareshan ho gaye abhi thodi der phele tak toh woh bilkul thik thi phir achanak kya hua ...naina ko chot kase lagi aur woh yuh roo kyu rahi thi ...

Naina ne raj ko bohat jor se hug kiya hua tha mano khud ko duniya se bachane ke liye khud ko raj me chupa rahi hu ...
Raj ko yeh toh nahi pata tha ki baat kya h par woh naina ki haalat dekh kar kuch jana bhi nahi chahta tha uska sara dhayan bas naina ko samhalne me laga tha...



Raj : (hugging her try to console her)bohat pyaar se uske baalo pe haath pherte hue) naina kya tum roo kyu rahi ho ..chot kase lagi hain tumhe...


Par naina kuch bol he nahi rahi thi bas apna muh raj ke seene me chupaye jor jor se roo rahi thi ...


Tabhi samne se pooja bhagte hue aayi uski aakho me bhi aasu the ...raj ko samjh aa gaya ki pooja ko pata hain ki aakhir baat kya hain ...par isse phele ki raj kuch bolta naina raj ki baho me he behosh ho gayi ...


Raj panicked ho kar naina ko utha kar uske room me le gaya aur cadets ko shalni ko bulane ke liye kaha...



Shalini naina ka checkup kar rahi thi aur sab bahar khade uska wait kar rahe the raj ka toh bura haal tha ...woh naina ki haalat dekh kar jase kuch sochne samjhne ki haalat me he nahi tha ...woh bas naina ke thik hone ka wait kar raha tha ...

Jase he shalini kamre se bahar aayi ...sab ne usse gher liya


Shalini : (tensed) woh thik hain sir pe chot hain par koi ghabrane ki baat nahi hain par usse kisi tarah ka shock laga hain...maine jab usse room me chod tha tab toh woh bilkul normal thi phir uske baad asa kya ho gaya ki uski asi halat ho gayi ...


Raj aur baki sab pooja ki taraf dekhne lage ...raj ke aakho me fikar aur gussa dono tha ...akhir hua kya tha naina ke saath jo uski asi haalat ho gayi ...


Raj : (without expression) mujhe pata hain aap janti hain cadet ghai ki kya hua hain naina ko ...kyu woh ase roo rahi thi ...btaiye.



Pooja: (with tears) sir woh...woh actually..


Pooja ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ki woh kase apne senior ko apne sir ko yeh baat btaye ...ki kase major nair ne naina ke saath kitni ghatiya baatein kadi hain ...


Alekh : bolna punjaban kya hua hain naina ke saath ...



Pooja : (looking at raj) sir woh major nair ne ...


Major nair ka naam sunte he sab shant ho gaye ...

Raj : (with heavy voice) major nair kya ????


Phir pooja sab baata deti hain ki major nair ne kis tarah ka suluk kiya hain naina ke saath ...




Alekh : (angrily) saale ki himmat kase hue naina se aase baat karne ki ...



Abhimanyu : unhone janmuch kar asa kiya hain ...woh jante hain ki naina ko chot puchane ka matlab hain hum sab ko chot puchana ...



Alekh : (angrily shouting) ab apun usko batata hain ki chot puchana kisi kahte hain



Yeh kah kar alekh waha se jana laga aur saath saath he huda aur yudi ali bhi ...


End of part 12




Sorry sorry sorry guys maine promise kiya tha ki ab no more rona dhona ...but kya karu aadat se mazbur hu m par ek good news h aap sab ke liye next update me major nair ki jam kar dhulaie hone wali hain jo real lrl me nhi hua wo m yaha karne wali hu ...apka pata nhi par m toh super excited hu ...



Precap ...


major nair ki dhulaie ...Hehehe... Just wait n watch ...



Love Arti
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Aarti
Nice part after a long time.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally you updated this story after a long time ...
Awesome update ...
Nair ... 😡
Ache se pitai krwana iski ...
Naina k liye boht bura feel ho rha hai ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the update dear it was a fabulous update really enjoyed it pls update next part soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
gr8 part
that nair is really disgusting
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally we hv an ud welcome back arti we understand studies fst
Awesome wala ud
Iss maj.nair ki to dulai karni hi padegi kaas kar ke raj ki hato me
Feeling bad fr naina
Cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
After a long waiting update mili.awesome dear

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